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SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 10:19pm On Dec 16, 2014*

Still learning from Ayamlaykorn

Cc: Laykorn
Texanomaly

Thanks for stopping by wink

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 11:08pm On Dec 16, 2014

MISSING YOU

You have been gone for a year now
Why don't you remember the vow
We shared Together
You don't even bother

That night,you vowed to come back
Now I have to pack
I cannot wait again
I cannot bear the pain

I know am losing You
But my heart is hurt,cos I'm missing You

Cc:Laykorn
Texanomaly

Am just a beginner,please lipsrsealed

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Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 12:19am On Dec 17, 2014

You ended your poem with a couplet. This is great. Short, simple and direct.
I miss my boo embarassed

Did you intentionally decided not to punctuate it huh

Ayamlaykorn

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by texanomaly(f): 2:24am On Dec 17, 2014

Ghostlady:
MISSING YOU

You have been gone for a year now
Why don't you remember the vow
We shared Together
You don't even bother

That night,you vowed to come back
Now I have to pack
I cannot wait again
I cannot bear the pain

I know am losing You
But my heart is hurt,cos I'm missing You

Cc:Laykorn
Texanomaly

Am just a beginner,please

Very nice. laykorn is right. It needs punctuation. If you are unsure about it, and you need help let me know. Good job.

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 9:16am On Dec 17, 2014

laykorn:
You ended your poem with a couplet. This is great. Short, simple and direct.
I miss my boo

Did you intentionally decided not to punctuate it
Ayamlaykorn

wow I just decided to write a little something...thanks..

About the punctuation,didn't really knw how to go about it...
Texanomaly please you can help me..thank you

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by texanomaly(f): 12:27pm On Dec 17, 2014

Ghostlady:
MISSING YOU

You have been gone for a year now.
Why don't you remember the vow
We shared Together?
You don't even bother.

That night you vowed to come back.
Now I have to pack.
I cannot wait again.
I cannot bear the pain.

I know am losing You,
But my heart is hurt, cos I'm missing You.

Cc:Laykorn
Texanomaly

Am just a beginner,please

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 1:47pm On Dec 17, 2014

[quote author=texanomaly post=28959349][/quote]thanks so much

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Funjosh(m): 3:37pm On Dec 18, 2014

Madam, na wa o. Not even a birthday wish and prayers from you yesterday lipsrsealed

Ghostlady:
thanks so much

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 4:47pm On Dec 18, 2014

Funjosh:
Madam, na wa o. Not even a birthday wish and prayers from you yesterday

Class at 9. Remember.
Ayamlaykorn

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 5:38pm On Dec 18, 2014

Funjosh:
Madam, na wa o. Not even a birthday wish and prayers from you yesterday

OMG...am so sorry Funsho...I feel bad now sad

I wasn't really online yesterday dear...
I know am already late but lemme just say a poem for you,and I hope u like it:

" Its your birthday yet again.
Celebration in the air.
Forgetting all your pain.
There's a party funfair.

I pray for you today.
May you achieve greatness.
I hope we meet someday.
To rejoice in oneness."
Cc:laykorn
Texanomaly

Happy birthday in arrears funjosh...hope u like it? Its from my brain just now....

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 5:40pm On Dec 18, 2014

Ghostlady:
OMG...am so sorry Funsho...I feel bad now
I wasn't really online yesterday dear...
I know am already late but lemme just say a poem for you,and I hope u like it:

" Its your birthday yet again.
Celebration in the air.
Forgetting all your pain.
There's a party funfair.

I pray for you today.
May you achieve greatness.
I hope we meet someday.
To rejoice in oneness."
Cc:laykorn
Texanomaly

Happy birthday in arrears funjosh...hope u like it? Its from my brain just now....

My birthday is on June 3. Promise me one too. embarassed

Ayamlaykorn

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 5:47pm On Dec 18, 2014

laykorn:
My birthday is on June 3. Promise me one too.
Ayamlaykorn

lol I would surely write one for you...

but I don't know if its good though embarassed

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 10:43pm On Dec 18, 2014

BEAUTY

Baby,how I feel for You.
Engages my heart always.
Another day,Another time.
Under your spell,I am.
Tomorrow cometh yet again.
Yesterday dreams are gone again.

Cc:laykorn
Texanomaly
Leki10

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 10:46pm On Dec 18, 2014

Ghostlady:
BEAUTY

Baby,how I feel for You.
Engages my heart always.
Another day,Another time.
Under your spell,I am
Tomorrow cometh yet again
Yesterday dreams are gone again

Cc:laykorn
Texanomaly
Leki10

Wow! This a great acrostic poem.
You forgot to punctuate some lines embarassed

Ayamlaykorn

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 10:49pm On Dec 18, 2014

laykorn:
Wow! This a great acrostic poem.
You forgot to punctuate some lines
Ayamlaykorn

thanks,I will do that asap

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by herald9: 11:36pm On Dec 18, 2014

Ghostlady:
OMG...am so sorry Funsho...I feel bad now
I wasn't really online yesterday dear...
I know am already late but lemme just say a poem for you,and I hope u like it:

" Its your birthday yet again.
Celebration in the air.
Forgetting all your pain.
There's a party funfair.

I pray for you today.
May you achieve greatness.
I hope we meet someday.
To rejoice in oneness."
Cc:laykorn
Texanomaly

Happy birthday in arrears funjosh...hope u like it? Its from my brain just now....

this is good.

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Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 12:11am On Dec 19, 2014

I love to read poems. ..

I love to write poems...

Nice Ghosty!

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Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Funjosh(m): 5:54am On Dec 19, 2014

I hear you ma,
Thank you so much.

Ghostlady:
OMG...am so sorry Funsho...I feel bad now
I wasn't really online yesterday dear...
I know am already late but lemme just say a poem for you,and I hope u like it:

" Its your birthday yet again.
Celebration in the air.
Forgetting all your pain.
There's a party funfair.

I pray for you today.
May you achieve greatness.
I hope we meet someday.
To rejoice in oneness."
Cc:laykorn
Texanomaly

Happy birthday in arrears funjosh...hope u like it? Its from my brain just now....

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:12am On Dec 19, 2014

herald9:
this is good.

thanks sweedy,hope you ve done ur assignment

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:14am On Dec 19, 2014

emusmith:
I love to read poems. ..

I love to write poems...

Nice Ghosty!

thanks sweedy cheesy

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:15am On Dec 19, 2014

Funjosh:
I hear you ma,
Thank you so much.

you welcome sir

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Funjosh(m): 6:21am On Dec 19, 2014

Do I actualy love peoms huh

I went to one kin pako school in EGAN/IGANDO Its take God, perseverance and Determination to graduate from Sec. grin

I Go try to dey read some of your peom sha cos i love the one u wrote for my bday. wink

Ghostlady:
thanks sweedy

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:25am On Dec 19, 2014

Funjosh:
Do I actualy love peoms

I went to one kin pako school in EGAN/IGANDO Its take God, perseverance and Determination to graduate from Sec.

I Go try to dey read some of your peom sha cos i love the one u wrote for my bday.

you are always welcome to read dear
My poems are quite short and easy to understand

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by doskie(m): 6:53am On Dec 19, 2014

Ghostlady:
you are always welcome to read dear
My poems are quite short and easy to understand

I have good poems you may like
can we chat on bbm sometimes

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:59am On Dec 19, 2014

doskie:
I have good poems you may like
can we chat on bbm sometimes

sweety,you can create a new poem thread here....and I will check them out wink

okay

I want to see your poem

Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 7:21am On Dec 19, 2014

Funjosh:
Do I actualy love peoms

I went to one kin pako school in EGAN/IGANDO Its take God, perseverance and Determination to graduate from Sec.

I Go try to dey read some of your peom sha cos i love the one u wrote for my bday.

Funjosh. Egan/igando huh