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Haunt Me by firestar(f): 12:52pm On Nov 12, 2011
[size=15pt]She sings a soft lullaby
He hums a melody
Harmony.

---
Never looking to crafted constellars
To determined their future, no. . .
No calenders, luminaries, planetary stages. . .
Nothing but an invisible hand.
---
'Tis funny how deep a sword pierces through
Revealing who really resides in there. . .
. . . You . . .
---
Can you hear the muted squelch of the blade
Mingled with:
Horror. . . Fear. . .
And strangely awe.
---

It reaches a cresendo
With birds as their teacher. . .
Her form supported by his
As one they stroll into the sunset. . .
A trailing melody.

---

Believe me
They are one
Two souls bonded by a third.
It haunts me.
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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 2:44pm On Nov 29, 2011
[size=17pt]. . .Belted a melody
Right to depths of your soul
Tunes fluted so true
A kaledioscope of sorts
Your inner self
You. . .

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Pieces composed by others
As if of one mind
You could care less of language
Your discernment alerts your heart
To sing along
 
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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 9:26pm On Dec 10, 2011
 [size=19pt] ". . . there's far too many. . . of you. . .dying. . ."
". . . it's gonna break my heart if I would. . . say goodbye."
Numbing the pain.
Singing it through.
No instrumentals. . .
Larynx strained.
(So you heard me?)
No, leave me alone.
Let me grieve my way,
Let it rain. . .


Goodnight Grandma, I'll see you someday. cry cry cry
 
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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 2:49pm On Dec 22, 2011
". . .And when you find one day~ you succeed--
To break down all the boundaries~ and be free--
From those who take from me~ to mislead me--
For they're greedy,  And they're empty oh-oh-oh. . ." 

. . .

Whispered like a pray'r. . .
 
Re: Haunt Me by Oluchi007(f): 3:53pm On Dec 22, 2011
Very romantic, firestar. Is the first poem about an abortion?

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 10:16am On Dec 23, 2011
I'm glad you love it. smiley cheesy
Funny enough, I paired orchestra with three-tiered marriage.
Theme song: Kaleidoscope.
Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 11:04am On Mar 07, 2012
Láti ṣe ìfẹ́ rẹ, ìwọ Ọlọ́run
mi, ni mo ní inú dídùn sí,
Òfin rẹ sì ń bẹ ní ìhà inú mi.
-Sáàmù 40:8


To do your will, O my God,
I have delighted,
And your law is within
my inward parts.
-Psalms 40: 8

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Re: Haunt Me by kushi1: 11:11am On Mar 07, 2012
cool

Sáàmù 40:8

Where's that tho'?


Psalms = Sáàmù? undecided
it's 'Orin Dafidi' tongue
Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 7:28pm On Mar 17, 2012
~ku_sh!~:
cool



Where's that tho'?


Psalms = Sáàmù? undecided
it's 'Orin Dafidi' tongue
I actually thought so too till I asked.
A controversy!
Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 11:50pm On Mar 25, 2012
It's not the way that he laughs
Nor in his face
No. . . not in his embrace
Assumed its the'kiss'?

(. . . . .Hisssssssssssssss . . . . .)

Then what?

Artic's cold,
Sahara's hot.

Is he popular,
Or not?


What I see may deceive me. . . (Attraction)

What I feel may reel me. . . (Infatuation)

What I know may change me. . . (Love)


Is he 'The One'?
The One for me?


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Re: Haunt Me by mkmyers45(m): 2:44pm On Apr 13, 2012
Nice Poetry...You've got it cool cool

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Re: Haunt Me by sirgeorge(m): 9:59pm On Apr 14, 2012
Firestar...u bad gannnn!!!You must marry me o! Lol.Mad writeups.A bit too romantic/soulful for my tastes though

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 3:09pm On Apr 25, 2012
Shh! Don't tell.


I've a secret 'n it's bubblin' like Ikogosi's spring wells. . .


Come near, please come and keep tones under. . .


And enjoy the beauty of twilight's natural wonder.


See that? Did you see that bird? Its plumage of browns, reds, and yellows over there-- in the shadow. . .


This is my escape, you see. Escape from all the nonsense and I sigh. . .


Nakama. . .
this is one of the ways I praise the Most High.

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 8:18am On May 14, 2012
[size=18pt]Drifting~
Like the wind.
Shifting~
Particles of Sahara.
Carving~
Sleepy dunes of matter.
Winding~
Slippery sidewinder arcs.
Dining~
On ensnared hind.
Reclining~
In vulnerable digest.
Hunting~
Game at rest.
...



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Re: Haunt Me by Uniquexty(f): 10:55am On May 14, 2012
Dude, u got it. I luv dat. U r d summary of d english word, 'intelligent'. Keep it up. Hopin 2 meet u at d writers club

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 1:25pm On May 19, 2012
Fear...~
-
Fear its power...
Its power to divide...
To divide joints...
Joints and marrow...
To cleave even...
Even dividing...
The dividing of Soul...
Of Soul & Spirit.
It Spears so...
I fear so...
Jah,
It's You.
It's You I fear so.
-
Please~
Please, my pray'r~
My pray'r do hear!

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Re: Haunt Me by Pelumiv(m): 5:22pm On May 28, 2012
9ice 1 there sis...........

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Re: Haunt Me by mykhel995: 10:04pm On Jun 10, 2012
This is a very nice collection. Keep it up!
Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 12:51pm On Jun 21, 2012
Smile more often.
It suits you.
It softens.
Even if its for me...
Yes--
Let the sunset's green reveal her secret flash to me often.

.

.
Then make me...

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Re: Haunt Me by Pelumiv(m): 1:05pm On Jun 21, 2012
You never reply my last message. How are u 2day, yr family n the entire congregation.

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 6:09pm On Jun 25, 2012
^We all are doing well. Please check your mail.
Thank you. ^w^
Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 5:01pm On Jul 08, 2012
"If a single tear fell from
your eyes into the ocean
And then washed up on
some far and distant shore
I would still recognize that
teardrop
For in the end that tear
would still be yours."

-Trans-Siberian Orchestra

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Re: Haunt Me by Rocktation(f): 6:32pm On Jul 09, 2012
Life---

What is life if full of care, we have no time to stand and stare?
When we run too fast to get somewhere, we miss the fun of getting there
Do make the most of all that comes, and then the least of all that goes
For all you touch and all you see, is all your life will ever be.

*reciprocating your appearance on my thread wink* smiley

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 7:26pm On Jul 31, 2012
((((((Hugs))))))))
You rock!

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 1:40pm On Sep 04, 2012
[size=18pt]Quand j'etais petit garcon,
Je repassais mes lecons... En chantant

Et bien des anees plus tard,
Je chassais mes idees noires... En chantant

C’est beaucoup moins inquietant,
De parler du mauvais temps... En chantant

Et c’est tellement plus mignon
De se faire traiter de con en chanson.

La vie c’est plus murrant
C’est moins desesperant en chantant !

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Re: Haunt Me by Nobody: 6:43am On Sep 21, 2012
Who said black is not intelligent?
Who said women aren't the crest of poetry?
Who said words aren't to be knitted?
Who said souls aren't moved by words?
Who said there is no God?
Let him/her awake before its dawn.


Wonderful lines of poetry, nice read. Thumbs up!

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 7:49pm On Sep 24, 2012
[size=17pt] He said he was "fine"
He wasn't.

Don't worry 'bout me...
Really?

You assured it will heal.
It's raw.

You claimed it would--
No more.

It's there ...
In the voice...
...the ache


In this age,
Perception is key.
Darkness may just be
Light...
Light To He Who Sees...

Never hide.
Or stay so...
Bare your disquiet
To Jah
It's He who renews souls.
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Re: Haunt Me by vescucci(m): 6:03pm On Sep 25, 2012
Lovely poems Firestar. I wish this was like twitter where I could comment on each of em. I'll just "like" em instead. smiley

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 6:49pm On Sep 25, 2012
[size=15pt]Never usual
But rare...
To show and not tell
'bout how I care.



Glomps, knuckle-buns...
Tickles, giggles....
Shy smiles, hesistant chuckles to roaring laughter....
Pumped fists and spinning whirls

All from your favourite grrrrrl wink







Dedicated to readers of this thread.

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Re: Haunt Me by Rocktation(f): 10:06pm On Sep 25, 2012
I officially love you gurl! kiss

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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 11:16am On Nov 02, 2012
[size=18pt]Acid shrouded in,
Are your eyes...
...

What have I done!

...
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Re: Haunt Me by firestar(f): 12:12pm On Nov 02, 2012
[size=18pt]Mockery after fire...
After water and its rain.

Chasing the wind,
Insane undecided

Even as earth trembles,
The works of your hands:
From the elements,
Does it stand,
Will it remain?
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