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....voice... by Nobody: 11:07pm On Dec 16, 2014

Cc:laykorn

Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:10pm On Dec 16, 2014

Oyya leggo
Ayamlaykorn

Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:12pm On Dec 18, 2014*

LOYALTY

Love is your brother,
Or should I call you loyal?
Yearning for you,
Amidst even imposture,
Lying is your foe,
Till death always truthful,
You seem difficult to find these days.

Cc:laykorn,leki10

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Re: ....voice... by leki10(m): 11:17pm On Dec 18, 2014

Vibra:
LOYALTY

Love is your brother
Or should I call you loyal?
Yearning for you
Admist even imposture
Lying is your foe
Till death always truthful
You seem difficult to find these days

Cc:laykorn,leki10

kudos dear, meanwile....work on ur punctuations.
Endeavour to punctuate the end of each line.
Then in line 4...it should be amidst....keep it up
the sky is ur starting point

Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:34pm On Dec 18, 2014

Like this?

Vibra:
LOYALTY
Love is your brother,
Or should I call you loyal?
Yearning for you,
Amidst even imposture,
Lying is your foe,
Till death always truthful,
You seem difficult to find these days.
Cc:laykorn,leki10

Re: ....voice... by leki10(m): 11:38pm On Dec 18, 2014

Vibra:
Like this?

you have done well

Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 10:15pm On Dec 23, 2014*

NEW ME

Gone are the days i used to shed tears,
Gone are those days i was so vulnerable,
Meek as a lamb,gentle as a sheep,
All those are bygones.

I didn't know how strong I was until being. strong was the only option,
Gone are those moments I will clung unto you for protection,
Brave as a lion,dangerous as a lone wolf,
That's what I am now

Gone are those times I felt you are my hero,my knight,
But now I've found my true hero,
I am my hero,the new me

Cc:laykorn,leki10

Re: ....voice... by D9ty7(m): 11:03pm On Dec 23, 2014

Vibra the poet-ess. You have done well enough with those two piece-es above.
Btw, it is Laykorn. Correct it so he can get the mention.
Kip up the good work dear.

Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:15pm On Dec 23, 2014

D9ty7:
Vibra the poet-ess. You have done well enough with those two piece-es above.
Btw, it is Laykorn. Correct it so he can get the mention.
Kip up the good work dear.

Thank you boss...following your steps

Re: ....voice... by Napoleone(m): 10:58pm On Mar 15, 2015

leki10:
kudos dear, meanwile....work on ur punctuations.
Endeavour to punctuate the end of each line.
Then in line 4...it should be amidst....keep it up
the sky is ur starting point

I don't think that really matters...there's something called poetic licence. Besides, the lack of punctuation may be figurative.

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