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....voice... by Nobody: 11:07pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
Cc:laykorn |
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:10pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
![]() Oyya leggo Ayamlaykorn |
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:12pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
LOYALTY Love is your brother, Or should I call you loyal? Yearning for you, Amidst even imposture, Lying is your foe, Till death always truthful, You seem difficult to find these days. Cc:laykorn,leki10 1 Like |
Re: ....voice... by leki10(m): 11:17pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Vibra:kudos dear, meanwile....work on ur punctuations. Endeavour to punctuate the end of each line. Then in line 4...it should be amidst....keep it up the sky is ur starting point |
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:34pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Like this? Vibra: |
Re: ....voice... by leki10(m): 11:38pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Vibra:you have done well |
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 10:15pm On Dec 23, 2014 |
NEW ME Gone are the days i used to shed tears, Gone are those days i was so vulnerable, Meek as a lamb,gentle as a sheep, All those are bygones. I didn't know how strong I was until being. strong was the only option, Gone are those moments I will clung unto you for protection, Brave as a lion,dangerous as a lone wolf, That's what I am now Gone are those times I felt you are my hero,my knight, But now I've found my true hero, I am my hero,the new me Cc:laykorn,leki10 |
Re: ....voice... by D9ty7(m): 11:03pm On Dec 23, 2014 |
Vibra the poet-ess. You have done well enough with those two piece-es above. Btw, it is Laykorn. Correct it so he can get the mention. Kip up the good work dear. |
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:15pm On Dec 23, 2014 |
D9ty7:Thank you boss...following your steps |
Re: ....voice... by Napoleone(m): 10:58pm On Mar 15, 2015 |
leki10:I don't think that really matters...there's something called poetic licence. Besides, the lack of punctuation may be figurative. |
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