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G..

Dis story is captivating. More ink to ur pen.

Nice story u got her. Pls continue

CHAPTER 3

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faithomoh24:
Nice story u got her. Pls continue

Thank you..glad to have you here

Jollyjoy:
Dis story is captivating. More ink to ur pen.

What more can I say?....#smiles

Really captivating and tantalising. Continue please!

hi mcjanny thanks for the story. glad to know u still write and post despite d fact dat commentors are few but hey we got ur back, u re doing great. is this ur frist story?

lenmafon:
hi mcjanny thanks for the story. glad to know u still write and post despite d fact dat commentors are few but hey we got ur back, u re doing great. is this ur frist story?

Yes it is

Another great writer has been born on Nairaland. Enjoying this story very much. More MB to u. Its hard to bliv this is ur first attempt.

Kudos

Keep it rolling; didnt have a dull moment,nice work here

McJANNY:
Yes it is

wow thats lovely. u re doing a good job, no grammatical error, proper use of tenses, etc. am impressed. ok now come and update pls

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jaymomma:
Another great writer has been born on Nairaland. Enjoying this story very much. More MB to u. Its hard to bliv this is ur first attempt.

Kudos

Lol..Amen to the MB ooo #thanksMuch

Really liking this enthralling piece. Thumbs up, more wisdom to you.

McJanny, you are doing a great work. To attract more readers you need to make the update longer, have specific time/days so that ur readers will know when to expect updates. More grace

Peacefulness:
McJanny, you are doing a great work. To attract more readers you need to make the update longer, have specific time/days so that ur readers will know when to expect updates. More grace

suported

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Peacefulness:
McJanny, you are doing a great work. To attract more readers you need to make the update longer, have specific time/days so that ur readers will know when to expect updates. More grace

I thought 'bout it and I decided i'd do my updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays..unfailingly. Btw, ah dey salute you and JollyJoy oo...nt to forget my readers too***una2mushhhh***

McJANNY:
I thought 'bout it and I decided i'd do my updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays..unfailingly. Btw, ah dey salute you and JollyJoy oo...nt to forget my readers too***una2mushhhh***

noted! Following till the end, continue the good work. You are superb!

McJANNY:
I thought 'bout it and I decided i'd do my updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays..unfailingly. Btw, ah dey salute you and JollyJoy oo...nt to forget my readers too***una2mushhhh***

ok, more grace to ur elbow

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"Rich, this is pointless!!" Dave reiterated. "I've told you this times without number but its either you're just too stubborn to listen or too blind to see".
By now, Richard had lost his patience. He wondered why Dave wasn't reasoning in sync with him. He'd told Dave about his second encounter with Kamsi, how she'd gotten hold of a reasonable part of him, and how he yearned to see her again but his friend maintained his stand on the fact that Kamsi and her friend were mere "runz babez" who were hustling for their daily bread and wouldn't offer any right thinking man much.
"Why don't you ever see things the way I see them?" Rich started.
"I know she might not be the best of ladies out there but I do hope you remember that she's admitted her fault and has tried to make amends....please give her some credit".
Dave had sarcasm written over his face.
"You talk as though you don't know these girls. They can do anything to catch their prey. For all I care, returning that wallet might be her method of trying to make you her No1 'mugu'...use your head!!"
Richard inhaled deeply and thought for a while what reply to give his friend.
"You've made sense though and I quite agree with all you've said...but I need you to do me one favour."
"What is it?" Dave asked with raised eyebrows.
"I need you to get in touch with that other girl...at least you both know each other and through her I could place tabs on this Kamsi girl."
Dave only heaved a sigh.
"If you're sure you want to do this, then it's OK..but for the records, I warned you!."
"Thanks bro." Richard said as he let out a chuckle wondering if Dave would ever stop acting like an over-protective big brother....

Ghen-ghen Richard is in love, Kudos. Keep em coming

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The end of semester exams were fast approaching and those who knew how to burn their midnight candles began doing so in earnest while those who took delight in visiting lecturers' offices after exams with brown envelopes began to gather their substance. Whatever the case maybe, preparations for the examinations had begun in top gear.
Kamsi spent most evenings in the classroom either doing an assignment or just reading. It was on one of such evenings she got a call from Esomo asking her to hurry back home. She sounded really excited. The mosquitoes that hovered around her and the power outage encouraged Kamsi to go home to her friend to at least share in her 'excitement'.
In less than no time, she found Esomo sprawled on the couch watching their favorite reality show - Keeping Up With The Kardashians.
"What's up?? you called me"
Esomo got up from the couch, smiling.
"I've got a tiny suprise for you"
Kamsi knew she definitely was up to something mischievious.
"What is it?..I hope this isn't one of your jokes again oo".
Esomo was grinning from ear to ear.
"Relax, your suprise would be here in say 10mins max".
Kamsi let out a long hiss because for all she cared, Esomo and her 'suprise' wasn't to be taken seriously. She hurriedly packed her books into her bag and made her way to the room. Her back ached, she needed rest.
Minutes later, she heard Esomo open the front door and voices in the parlour. It could be neighbours, or some of her numerous friends whom she'd lost count of. Just as she was trying to figure it out, Esomo barged into the room, dragging her by the hand out of the bed.
"Come...come..come."
She found herself in the parlour and saw two men comfortably seated on the couch. One had his eyes glued to the TV on the wall while the other had his face buried in an Ipad. She recognized the latter and for a moment, she stood there stupefied. Everything seemed to come to a stand still and with a swift turn-around, she ran back to the room...all they heard was the deafening bang of the door.

Thanks dear. But this suspense can kill o.

Peacefulness:
Thanks dear. But this suspense can kill o.

Lol..it won't kill anybody biko

McJANNY:
Lol..it won't kill anybody biko

biko make i ask for more. You stay in umuahia?

Peacefulness:
biko make i ask for more. You stay in umuahia?

No I don't, I live in Calabar.

To be cont'd

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