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NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 5:52am On Apr 01, 2015 |
Mosquitoes stings And music rings Darkness speaks And despair creeps Bodies wriggle And sweat mingle Heat caresses And rashes arises People growl And NEPA smiles! 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: NEPA Smiles by EverestdeBliu(m): 1:27am On Apr 04, 2015 |
Bodies wriggles As sweat trickles. |
Re: NEPA Smiles by Prodeegee(m): 9:14am On Apr 04, 2015 |
EverestdeBliu: Exactly, the 'and' should be replaced with 'as' |
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 10:44am On Apr 04, 2015 |
Poetic device guys... Remember a poet doesn't have to follow the basic rule of English language!. |
Re: NEPA Smiles by jamofan(m): 11:41pm On Apr 18, 2015 |
Nice one |
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 1:38am On Apr 19, 2015 |
jamofan: |
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 6:12am On Apr 19, 2015 |
Well timed poem. Haven't had light for a week now. 1 Like |
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 6:56am On Apr 19, 2015 |
AllNaijaBlogger:Its the same with me bro. I've been buying petrol like no mans business. The mosquitoes are now getting bold!. I wonder what's up with the light, it hasn't been this bad. |
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:00am On Apr 19, 2015 |
joseph1832: Same here. Pre-election, my area could boast with about 14 hrs of light daily |
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 7:09am On Apr 19, 2015 |
AllNaijaBlogger:Imagine, na that election is gone is back to the normal ways of no light. Indeed "NEPA smiles". |
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:11am On Apr 19, 2015 |
joseph1832: Your poem sha is problematic Your grammar is wrong- Mosquitoes sting not "mosqyuitoes stings" Gbagaun |
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 7:14am On Apr 19, 2015 |
AllNaijaBlogger:Bros I no understand wetin you mean oh!?. |
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:29am On Apr 19, 2015 |
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 7:35am On Apr 19, 2015 |
AllNaijaBlogger:Did you wake up this morning and decided you want to be a troll today?. Read more about poetry bro. It will enlighten you the next time you choose to drop a poem. |
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:37am On Apr 19, 2015 |
joseph1832: Calm down. If I wanted to troll you, we would be having drama. We are brothers afterall. Didnt I dedicate my poem to you? I understand what you are doing. It is called diction and using poetic license. But then, the best poetry is usually grammatically correct. I am just criticising. Bros, I am being real and not trying to insult you. |
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 8:13am On Apr 19, 2015 |
AllNaijaBlogger:Is that so?. A good poem with flawless grammar without poetic device is nothing but nursery rhymes!. Since you know about poetic license why attack my grammar? |
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 8:57am On Apr 19, 2015 |
joseph1832: I see. Maybe its just my preference. I guess I still have to learn 1 Like |
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 5:34pm On Aug 22, 2015 |
AllNaijaBlogger:So how's the learning going? |
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:09am On Aug 23, 2015 |
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 7:47am On Aug 23, 2015 |
AllNaijaBlogger:Cool. |
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