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Time:3:45 am! Venue: fargo. State:north dakota. Country : USA.
location at the moment: stanford medical centre.
Situation: labour
Enough of introductions and the rest, my name is ejiofor, yeah that was my birth time and place. U see I was born in fargo(north dakota) well I was born on the 25th of December though I no be Jesus o, that made me kinda popular!! After my birth I was taken to my aunt who took care of me for like 3 months cos my mom was soo weak after the pushing and the rest... school was set and oh I was born in 1996 so u see that was the semi old times. Bill clinton was in power and I tink en get one bill en sign the day I was born. School started when I was six and na one stupid kindergarten like that. At least I wasn't home.

Kindly space out your paragraphs.

Here we are.

Year:2000. It's been my six years on this earth and not much has happened. Dad was still an employed engineer working for north carolina and mom was a pure house wife. The street was quiet as the united states was still looking for a way to stop the al queda threat. Ejiofor,ejiofor my name echoed in the mansion and it was my mom calling me, yes ma I answered. Back your clothes ejiofor you are going to stay with your uncle at california tomorrow.. that hit me like a tornado, ma, like seriously I asked' yes she answered back, I have talked with your daddy and he's okay with it and I have called your father's brother you are going to stay with, don't worry nothing will go wrong she said. well I have no other option than to believe her and I went straight into my room and started packing and couldn't wait till tomorrow to leave this north dakota for the more exposed california and oh it's the capital sacramento that I'm going to and the city of los Angeles but there's a problem my family is going 2ru some financial trouble cos of the economic problem but that los Angeles will open my eyes in a vivid way and I didn't see that coming

Sorry for been out peeps!! The story continues!**************************** the ride to california was interesting, just me and my mom just chatting while she was driving. We passed other other states buh I all I could think about was the city of angels. Well at six, changing environment could be hard but this was california I have been hearing about and i'm finally visiting it. The state was great as we reached we saw spanish Americans doing their singing and the street was bubbling Mehn it was like Rio. We reached the park and my mom called my aunt who arrived within a short time and pick me up. Come on nwuye m(my wife in igbo) but my mom told her she had to go back to fargo thank God the time was not the same. My aunt shrugged for some minutes but had to let my mom go. My mom told me to be nice and good to my uncle and aunt.... the
The journey to where my uncles resident was not far(forgotten name buh be like say en dey un top of mountain)
Pls gonna stop here for now comments and critics needed

LarrySun:
Kindly space out your paragraphs.

Dear LarrySun,

Thank you.

Regards, Senbonzakura Kageyoshi.



I get it that the writer is trying to be laid back and informal in his writing style but, I'm sorry, it strikes me more as random ramblings. There doesn't seem to be a coherent structure which, clearly, is not intentional. There's a difference between laid back and random. Take note.

Besides the loads (I mean loads!) of spelling and grammatical errors, who shrugs for a few minutes? Was she trying to set a world record for shrugging?

senbonzakurakageyoshi:
Besides the loads (I mean loads!) of spelling and grammatical errors, who shrugs for a few minutes? Was she trying to set a world record for shrugging?

LOL! This got me reeling with laughter!

LarrySun:
LOL! This got me reeling with laughter!

My dear ehhhh. The author needs to help me understand what happened there. Really, I would like to see someone shrug for a few minutes in real life. Let's see if the person would be left with shoulders afterwards.

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Well, the house was not like a the ones I have been seeing all L A, the structure was magnificent and well I see that jacuzzi, I said in my mind"my uncle get this kind house and my family dey for financial trouble". Ok o
Ejiofor welcome a voice sounded behind my little me, I looked back and I saw my cousin nekky(nneka, which means mother is supreme in igbo language) my my six year old eyes saw "aru" as I looked at her, she was wearing her bra and a good looking pants which I could swear made my little penis bulge.
Good afternoon I greeted her, and we'll I couldn't help staring at her bobbies
" hey welcome she said, I hope ur ride here was great she questioned,
Oh good I answered.
Nneka was a 18 year old girl at that time and she was about transferring to england because en say en wan go manchester business school abi business school of manchester Dem dey call am.

@ sir zebonzakura na mistake buh the woman shrugged shaa.. kip motivating me and I love the critics

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The interior structure of the house was bomb. The chandelier hung high in one of the sitting rooms I entered and it was golden in colour , the house was magnificent and the architect did a great work in constructing the edifice I was in.
'welcome son a voice said behind me and lo it was my uncle. The man was a well built man who works out regularly and man he was a stud or hunk as gay would say and he was a 45 year old man buh looking at him he works out regularly no doubt.
Hi sir I'm fine and great thanks', I replied and he nodded his head.
Ok good, I just went off phone with your father and i'm glad he allowed u come here and u know I'm sorry to break the news to u but u re gonna be staying here for the mean time . As he said that my heart leaped, they didn't tell me I was staying here for the 'meantime', I know my parents are going through some financial trouble but that didn't mean I had to be sent off from my house.
Oh, Ok I replied no problem.
The whole house event went peace fully and my aunt was glad I could come over and it was fun being in the house with all the jacuzzi and the pool and all. I loved the house or more suitable great edifice as I duped it. I was lost in fantasy land as I heard my name
'ejiofor, ejiofor, come dinner is ready come to the dinning table and eat your food. I hurried down to the dinning table and sat down to eat pizza with coke my cousin had ordered like fifteen minutes ago.
TBC: pls comments needed.