₦airaland Forum

sinizia:
No, it doesn't, even when forced. Once ends in DOM, the other in DEM. They don't even sound alike. It's over-forced.

you are listening to a 16 year old kid that never did oral English in the windowless secondary school he attended ✘

JigsawKillah:
I don't want to be the one making a fuss about this but I think it's only right we take back the crits to it's normal points

punch: 3 points
rhymes: 2 points

why the sudden change? Is he trying to use it to his advantage or what?


cc: cooar
Ibme
Laguna1
emarince
guykena

JigsawKillah:
please tell Darkrebel to take the points allocated to each crit back to it's former state. join the campaign against manipulation

you are very dumb for insinuating that I wanted to use the criteria to my advantage all because I added a point to punchlines & rhymes. last time I checked, I'm the organiser of the tourney & the progenitor. .it has been reversed to normal.


you should have been dropped for dropping your lines 1 hour after the stipulated time..
next time you make such allegations or pull such stunt, consider yourself automatically disqualified ✘

classyalabolas:
you are listening to a 16 year old kid that never did oral English in the windowless secondary school he attended ✘

Hihihihi

People though.
In American english Condom and Condemn plays.
Smh

GIYAZZ:
Hihihihi

I've told you to quit mentioning me turd, or is your grandmother on steroids?
I don't give a tuppence for your doltish kind... ✘

classyalabolas:
I've told you to quit mentioning me turd, or is your grandmother on steroids?
I don't give a tuppence for your doltish kind... ✘

Buhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!

Emaprince:
Your set ups MUST match with your punchlines!

Sometimes, a weaker punchline will become interesting when the set up is amazing. If they doesn't match, it will look disjointed and uninteresting.

The essence of the set up is to tell a short story which will explain the punchline better. Most wordies, mets may be diffuclt to understand but, a proper set up will give people a clue and once the final punch lands, it won't fly over their heads.

If you don't have a punchline, of what use is the set up? This isn't a freestyle, you know!

Check this....

If calabar boy insult ma niggas/ we will wait till he cross past rivers/
You'll swear he was planked by an MLS team, when all da homies in 'port land timber' /..Ibime

In the above, the set up connected well with the punch. Ibime's opponent is Uduak, an akwa ibom/calabar boy while Ibime is a portharcourt brought up. If he crosses river state, portharcourt homies will land timbers on him, kill him with timbers..whatever. Then, there is an MLS team called portlandtimbers. This is where the wordplay comes in.



He should stay alone and pray for his sins/ cos I'm dispatching goons to his home to slay all his kins/
They will make him die like steven in the bible, they just 'a stone throw' away from his crib/..Ema prince

Sincce I wanted to use "a stone throw away from his crib", I had to make the build up look like he will be at home when the goons will visit him. That's why I talked about kins also. You already know that steven died by stoning...this is where the creativity come in. Its hard but you can do it.

Cc
Sin.izia etc

Very detailed, thanks. I'm already trying to make all my punchlines have a set-up. I'm on it. Even if i don't succeed with all of them, i know still I'm getting better by the daily learning.

classyalabolas:
I've told you to quit mentioning me turd, or is your grandmother on steroids? I don't give a tuppence for your doltish kind... ✘

Replied.

GIYAZZ:
People though.

In American english Condom and Condemn plays.

Smh

In ANY English, condom and condemn can NEVER rhyme.

I can't believe you are arguing this and giving Dark the opportunity to laugh at you.

Everyone can't be wrong.

Condemn rhymes with Modem, etc.

Condom rhymes with Kingdom, etc.

Why are you arguing this?

sinizia:
They better be. Seeing them giving verds adds spice to the battles.

Don't fret, even if you lose out, you'll learn from your mistakes and come back strong. You are the dark horse so you have nothing to lose. Likewise me, I've got nothing to lose against Gladys, but I'm determined to surpass people's expectations of me.

Yes,tonight we are making history ""

classyalabolas:
you are listening to a 16 year old kid that never did oral English in the windowless secondary school he attended ✘

Lmao

dude try commedy na.
you funny die.

kinglahkay consulted a fetish priest. see verse

sinizia:
In ANY English, condom and condemn can NEVER rhyme.

I can't believe you are arguing this and giving Dark the opportunity to laugh at you.

Everyone can't be wrong.

Condemn rhymes with Modem, etc.

Condom rhymes with Kingdom, etc.

Why are you arguing this?

Alright.

GIYAZZ:
Alright.

Gay!

Emaprince, thanks for your thorough explanation.

obesemf:
kinglahkay consulted a fetish priest. see verse

L;DL ain't aiming for the money tho

Emaprince & kr0ne's head is what I'm after

sinizia:
Kr0ne, your attention is needed here.

I read your verds and i noticed something. You kept harping on build-ups matching the final punchline. My questions are, is that a must? Can't some rhyme and throw punchlines from the start and end his qautrain with a different punchline?

GHOST ACCOUNT?

WARRIBLOOD:
GHOST ACCOUNT?

In Warri, do ghost account have a 1000+ posts, stay very active and is well-known on other sections?

The only reason I'm a newbie here is because i don't battle here, but i do pop in to read battles sometimes.

kr0ne:
Emaprince, thanks for your thorough explanation.

Bros, to prevent a no-show and stop the wasting of another person's bars, i propose a well-trusted judge(s) that doesn't snitch, should drop his/their mail(s) and the two opponents squaring off should mail their bars to him/them before the time is ready. Then when the time is ready, he will post those bars simultaneously. This way, the issue of no-show is mitigated. In the case one of them don't mail his or hers, the person that mailed his or her bars will win and the bars will be kept for another round and not be posted.

I'm saying this because pulling a no-show kills morale and leads to wastage of bars that's hard to whip up. I can't afford to post and waste my bars on the D-day should my opponent not show up. This message should be considered.

Cc: Emaprince, Guykhena, Coogar.

sinizia:
In Warri, do ghost account have a 1000+ posts, stay very active and is well-known on other sections?

The only reason I'm a newbie here is because i don't battle here, but i do pop in to read battles sometimes.

Who's this biitch talking to like this..
Y'all better tell this sslut who I am

He is warriblood! The one nd only! Sinizia, no one messes with the K.O.W!

sinizia, show warriblood some respect.

We did it that way when we had the king's tourney. Back then, verses where sent to Mikuz. But........I don't know.......you guys can still do it if there will be somebody willing to go through the stress of posting battler's verses.

He is warriblood
The nigga I whooped twice and d nigga that needs a brain checkup for bringing wordplays like hair kill T

**chokes**

Emaprince:
sin.izia, show warriblood some respect.

We did it that way when we had the king's tourney. Back then, verses where sent to Mikuz. But........I don't know.......you guys can still do it if there will be somebody willing to go through the stress of posting battler's verses.

He's highly rated here? How come he didn't make Dakrebel's Top 5 list? I wasn't harsh on him though.

Bro, that's how i'll do mine against anybody. My bars are ready and i can't waste them for a no-show. On the D-day, i'll look for a competent judge and mail mine to him. If my opponent doesn't drop, my bars will serve as an evidence to him, i'll win the particular contest and still retain my bars for another battle.

@ ELYMAXiimus, i wasn't harsh on him though.

WARRIBLOOD:
Who's this biitch talking to like this..
Y'all better tell this sslut who I am

You are K.O.W? So how has that elevated your poverty-stricken background?

obainojazz:
He is warriblood
The nigga I whooped twice and d nigga that needs a brain checkup for bringing wordplays like hair kill T

I bring up word plays even ibime.. cooger can't come up for their full life..
Dude accept it your just hating..
Lol


You want me to explain it to you?

Hair kill T (TINK LEFT WITH INK

DUMB FOOL I BLAME THAT MAN WHO FFUCK YOUR MOTHER WHEN SHE HAD YOU IN HER ROOM.. YOUR DAD WAS OUTTA TOWN I GUESS
FOOL

danbrowndmf:
Ibime don't really come online this days,i believ coogar will be online for today brawl mayb he was busy or he 4got,stuffs like that...

Mhen i'm battling today o.
pray for me ""

Cool down. Tournaments no be rush rush matter. Make I go find the thread(s)

WARRIBLOOD:
I bring up word plays even ibime.. cooger can't come up for their full life.. Dude accept it your just hating.. Lol

hair kill T
abeg come take award

Hair kill T?? tfu Warriblood

sinizia:
He's highly rated here? How come he didn't make Dakrebel's Top 5 list? I wasn't harsh on him though.

Bro, that's how i'll do mine against anybody. My bars are ready and i can't waste them for a no-show. On the D-day, i'll look for a competent judge and mail mine to him. If my opponent doesn't drop, my bars will serve as an evidence to him, i'll win the particular contest and still retain my bars for another battle.

@ ELYMAXiimus, i wasn't harsh on him though.

Pers I pray we cross path

ELBAND:
Hair kill T?? tfu Warriblood

Fool dig
Or you be Yoruba boy