[size=16pt]The Holocaust Tourney[WOME] [Quarter Finals][/size]

Darkrebel666 Vs Heywhizzy

voting criteria

•opener - 1 point

•rhymes - 2 points

•similes/ metaphors - 2 points

•punchlines -3 points

•personals - 2 points

•flow - 1 point

•wordplays - 2 points

•closer - 1 point


Rules & Regulations✘

•Bar limit:-10 bars[10 quatrains]

•Deadline:- 25th June 2015 [8pm]

•Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date

•No biting[stealing/plagiarizing], no stretching, feeding & no recycling of lines

•No smearing comments about any bar or biting accusations without proof

•The rest of the rules can be found on this thread:- https://www.nairaland.com/2392946/holocaust-tourney-quarter-finals-wome

•Goodluck..

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checks in on behalf of dark rebel...

heywhizzy, drop your verse....

I hate his damn career/ the way he insults everyone he should left as maybe a loner/ my hatred doesn't wanna set eyes on this crazy dumb hater/ sit down,relax and watch as I end class before his time like lazy lecturers/


lemme plot out the plan/ gather my guys to slaughter his fans..sit together to determine how we gon' come for him and/ "weedicide", the tool we gon'use to murder the man/ LIME initially almost killed him..no one wanted the plant/


lyrically,I'm his superior..that's so unfortunate/ with lines that consist of fun n wit/ in his audio we always hear him talking sh1t/ try nd listen carefully,it's wack when you hear the dumb in it/ .....pause! I said try and listen carefully,it's wack when you hear D dominate/


fukk this kid/ who thinks he can trouble me/ saying he's the sh1t..that toilet ish/ but if he truly is..I'll leave him in deep trouble..that's up sh1t creek/


his mind says he would murder hey,all he need do is believe in himself/ but my bars pierce into his soul and spirit to change his intents and destroy the awkward feelings that he felt/ penetrate his joint and marrow to get him crippled till he melts/ my bars are equivalent to the word of God as described in Hebrew four verse twelve/


everyone hates the loser..back then,max cremate d nigga/ twice against teddy,he came with "sweet" yarns and failed to "beat her"/ if not for late posting,we all agree lime maimed the fella/ worst still,he wouldn't have gotten rid of Bruce if he was Caitlyn Jenner/


to be honest,I'm sorry for this little poor lad/ who is tryna help his family by going into core rap/ I'm richer than his father..I receive more cash/ if he ever says his "pa rich",then he and his fam are really "church" rats/


this dude got no option but to pledge loyalty/ cos his life is what I've just gained ownership/ get him a room in my block,this is dictatorial politics,he gets killed if he fails to obey my policies/ cos I've just brought da homey under my authority..I'm Ojigi/


if the previous bar didn't paiN the nigga/ and he attempts to rise agaiNst his leader/ I'll appear with missiles and taNks with real bars/ to get rebel killed..I'm the couNtry Syria/


my actions seems to be truly racial/ I go abroad if I'm to cremate ya/ lead him close to death as I take him to China and use Chinese kicks to bruise his facials/ then go easy on him as soon as my conscience sets in..all I can render now is "mercy killing"..I still have to kill D,"youth in Asia"/

Thedarkrebel✘


Heywhizzy's Requiem Mass✘

✘I prod 'Heystack' with 'pitchforks', watch the yobbo expire/ 'kinda like punches in boxing', I'm 'Hey maker' & creator' getting his roach-ass fired/ bellicose & pugnacious, I get him rolled like tyres/ so brand me a hostile 'Electrician', cos my Nanquan fists...just made him go 'Heywire'! /

✘I'm Vlad the Impaler,plunging scapels in his mouth/ a malefic Sagittarius, I hurl arrows in bouts/ but if Whizzy 'don't believe'...I'll unscramble the lout/ till you find this 'Thomas in my Silhouette'.. but I'd still escort him to his grave....without a 'Shadow of Doubt'! /

✘I'm Zimmerman, he's Trayvon..cos I'll shoot him for nothing/ use his cranium as my dartboard, leave him screwed, shreded, bloodied/get him lacerated & slivered - if he looks at my trophies/ & if he still 'Toys' with the Rebel, you'll find his smoked carrion...beside a 'Two-headed Chucky'! /

✘I heave cannons in his home & his lowly apartment/ I'll biff his bug-eyed parents...have them thrown in a compartment/ If I sight his 'female siblings'....I'll subject the hoes to torments/ till you see the 'arsonist in me'...when I set his 'Sisters ablaze'..... Inferno in a Convent! /

✘I'll get his bones pulverized, & bring this street dog calamity/if he retorts apathetically/ I'll inflict him with ecchymosis, contusions & limp sores eternally/ & after getting me a pen...I'll write 'fÜck you' on his wounds .....call that insult upon injury! /

✘I'm White Chapel's Jack the Ripper..a remorseless killer/ & a barborous wizard/ call me wordplay' general...cos after socking this geezer/ I'll let a noxious 'Pun Jab' him....like that 'State in Northern India! /

✘Heywhizzy's an obscene Transvestite, a sissy cursed flincher/ he wears high-heels, make-up, & buys skimpy tops from Spencer/I'll should get this frigid scum severed/ but as licentious Roman..I'd rather nail to him a 'Crucifix'....that's how you kill a Cross-dresser! /

✘Y'all know this tranny is gay, & a c0ck-loving hornet/ he s0domised Chris, Mike, James..then sucked Morris nuggets/ when this calamite moved to Capetown.. he still fÜcked boys in toilets/& though he became Xenophobic... his anus is still ever willing...to accept 'Foreign' Objects! /

✘He drinks s£men like milkshakes, just to feed his sluttish self/a misogynistic pummet, he ain't got chicks - he's squats with Ben/ plus he got phobia for women, he rarely speaks or talks to them/ so if this fagg0t claims he fÜcks 'things wearing skirt'…..just know he sleeps with 'Scottish men'! /

✘Tis' the end of a riffraff & loafer/ a rap-battle degenerate...a skinhead & imposter/ I bring flowers to his funeral, pay my last respect to this two-timing oyster/fÜck that, I'd rather defecate on his corpse...then wipe my bÜttcrack...with his obituary posters! /


Thedarkrebel✘

note: my opener class is for one of his nick, classyalabolas

Heywhizzy:
no offense,geoxpress,please remove your post..this tourney has legal voters in which you ain't among..delete your post,you can take it to the chatroom..no offense once again

note: my opener class is for one of his nick, classyalabolas

Aye

Open for votes

Emaprince
Ibime
Coogar
Guykhena
Lagunna1
Krone

Please, don't chat here if your name is not tagged as a judge, thanks.

voting criteria

•opener - 1 point - TIE! Wizzy-s idea is cool but the rhymes were poor. Rebel had good name flips but coulda used them hey maker and hey wire to unleash better punches.

•rhymes - 2 points - rebel....though some of the rhymes needs to be slanted before they'll connect.

•similes/ metaphors - 2 points - TIE

•punchlines -3 points - darkrebel666....both punchlines weren't jaw-dropping but, wizzy had too many light punches. The exceptional punch wizzy had is " wouldn't get rid of bruce if he was caitlyn jenner"

•personals - 2 points - heywizzy

•flow - 1 point - Tie

•wordplays - 2 points - tie

•closer - 1 point - tie

MVGT - rebel

jreyez:



You guys too stubborn.. What's wrong with you? You ain't no judge why derail? Chill.

posted that stuff b4 i saw krOne's wirte up,

Appologies to everybody!

My favourite bars. . .

Heywhizzy:

everyone hates the loser..back then,max cremate d nigga/ twice against teddy,he came with "sweet" yarns and failed to "beat her"/ if not for late posting,we all agree lime maimed the fella/ worst still,he wouldn't have gotten rid of Bruce if he was Caitlyn Jenner/


this dude got no option but to pledge loyalty/ cos his life is what I've just gained ownership/ get him a room in my block,this is dictatorial politics,he gets killed if he fails to obey my policies/ cos I've just brought da homey under my authority..I'm Ojigi/

coogar:
Thedarkrebel✘
✘I prod 'Heystack' with 'pitchforks', watch the yobbo expire/ 'kinda like punches in boxing', I'm 'Hey maker' & creator' getting his roach-ass fired/ bellicose & pugnacious, I get him rolled like tyres/ so brand me a hostile 'Electrician', cos my Nanquan fists...just made him go 'Heywire'! /

✘I'm Vlad the Impaler,plunging scapels in his mouth/ a malefic Sagittarius, I hurl arrows in bouts/ but if Whizzy 'don't believe'...I'll unscramble the lout/ till you find this 'Thomas in my Silhouette'.. but I'd still escort him to his grave....without a 'Shadow of Doubt'! /

✘I'll get his bones pulverized, & bring this street dog calamity/if he retorts apathetically/ I'll inflict him with ecchymosis, contusions & limp sores eternally/ & after getting me a pen...I'll write 'fÜck you' on his wounds .....call that insult upon injury! /

MVGT - Rebel

MVGT - rebel

he pretty much took all the categories apart from personals. rebel had more in his ammo than heywhizzy.

Ok, thanks for your votes, all.
This battle is hereby closed, and Darkrebel666 proceeds to the next stage.
Nice verse from you too, Heywhizzy. You've really improved!

Opener-nil,aoc-nil ,,vgt-nil ...Both were wack,it seems they both receive trainin frm emaprince, d lord of wackness