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The Last Monkey In Idanre by generaliy07(m): 12:25pm On Jun 28, 2015
You handed us the money bails
Like the wilderness morning quails
For such freebies we verily crave
Though from such we couldn't save

We felt so high with special seeds
Indifferent to voices that calls it weed
Though such are the illegal breed
A special drill it made us feel

Hail Ceaser, the thrilling teaser
Nail the M*therf*cking stingy teachers
For giving endless reasons to be sober
In such seasons we'd rather visit strippers

We crucified those sons of Issachar
Sent afar the daughters of Deborah
Neither times nor direction matters
So we chased them beyond our borders

Thy shiny teeth as revealed in broad smiles
That sparkling golden glitters from several miles
The sweetest words from your oratory rivers long as Nile
Crafty accomplices of your deceitful styles

Like a spontaneous lightening, short and gone
Couldn't spell Jack till the season passed on
Like a de-feathered bird, you asked for our guns
From your pearly gates we were constantly shunned

Then comes the seasons again when you consider us kings
You brought us in, once more to drink
At your most revered table again we sing
To this merry moment you offer we cringe!

Then your position as King you regained
Throughout your reign, your promises you delayed
Your empty promises on the streets we relayed
Wretched we, not clueless as to why,though we were pained

Ilufemiloye, the master at deceit is here again to campaign
Little did he know this time the game has changed
The enlightened,last monkey in Idanre is no longer in chains
Smart ass ape, has full senses regained

No longer shall we chant your name while matchet-wielding
For now we've resorted to a much better living
The "Ipanle" in us with rage we got flinging
No more the war songs, songs of peace we're now singing

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This poem is dedicated to the repented ballot snatchers
To those who no longer cherish the life lived as gangsters

Though you once fought a war where you lost while the politicians gained
Haunted by shadows that lived in your past
A little decision to Change the man In the mirror, will set you free from the ugly scars

I love Y'all

Ilesanmi Iyanu Samuel

(C) Copyright 2015

(2BA60123)

Cc: Freeman (Please check this out, I look forward to your appreciation of this piece)

Cc: Ishilove Lalasticlala

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Nobody: 12:29pm On Jun 28, 2015
I love this....

Reading again...

Mate you remind me of the works of Gabriel Okara. I am very Happy you listened to my previous critique and made adjustment... This poem is musical, musing and radiating..

It makes a terrible situation looks pleasant with the choice of words... The caption is misleading which makes it a puzzle for the curious minds like myself. This is art Mate.

Reading again... cheesy

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by generaliy07(m): 1:07pm On Jun 28, 2015
Freemanan:
I love this....

Reading again...

Mate you remind me of the works of Gabriel Okara. I am very Happy you listened to my previous critique and made adjustment... This poem is musical, musing and radiating..

It makes a terrible situation looks pleasant with the choice of words... The caption is misleading which makes it a puzzle for the curious minds like myself. This is art Mate.

Reading again... cheesy

To be candid, this poem is inspired by your corrections of my previous poem

I had those points in mind while penning this

God bless you bro.

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by generaliy07(m): 1:11pm On Jun 28, 2015
By the way, I'm not a professional poet, I never did literature in school, just more of a natural thing, I will appreciate a link to the Gabriel Okara's works

You can also suggest other masters of the game, I'll check them out

Thanks once again

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Nobody: 1:12pm On Jun 28, 2015
generaliy07:


To be candid, this poem is inspired by your corrections of my previous poem

I had those points in mind while penning this

God bless you bro.
Bravo Mate... Bravo

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Barselonia(m): 2:31pm On Jun 28, 2015
But I no see any monkey na sad

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Feranmicharles(m): 2:32pm On Jun 28, 2015
Initially I was curious to see the last monkey in idanre cool

Buh what did I get A long epistleembarassed

When I read it nko Twas interestingkiss

Big ups OP

This is my FAV verse.....

For giving endless reasons to be sober
In such seasons we'd rather visit strippers


kiss

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by oismail(m): 2:32pm On Jun 28, 2015
I'm not a fan of poem
But i like this writeup
#keepitup
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by YerYer: 2:32pm On Jun 28, 2015
Lol is it just me, or do some people literally refresh Nairaland home page every millisecond to make sure they are the first to comment on a new topic?
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Dahjhi: 2:32pm On Jun 28, 2015
cool
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Mubbyleey(m): 2:32pm On Jun 28, 2015
This is so cool... thou I don't know the writer shocked
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Nobody: 2:32pm On Jun 28, 2015
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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by idongesit88: 2:32pm On Jun 28, 2015
Cuteeeee
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Minet16(m): 2:33pm On Jun 28, 2015

I was expecting to see one monkey's picture and other things, but to my suprise, I met this soul thrilling poet. Very good one there OP


#@MINET16

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by natas22: 2:33pm On Jun 28, 2015
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by sholay2011(m): 2:33pm On Jun 28, 2015
idongesit88:
Cuteeeee
Da fuq? undecided The poem is 'cute' ke? Space booking hustle.


@OP...This is lovely.

Kudos to the writer. Funny title though.

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by johnshagb(m): 2:33pm On Jun 28, 2015
Literature? lipsrsealed
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by samueld0(m): 2:33pm On Jun 28, 2015
[color=#990000][/color] grin grin Hahaha
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by mistabiola: 2:33pm On Jun 28, 2015
cool
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Nobody: 2:33pm On Jun 28, 2015
Monkey banana
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Emmy9ite(m): 2:35pm On Jun 28, 2015
Not my field..sorry!
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Humblebloke(m): 2:35pm On Jun 28, 2015
Nice piece....
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Situation001(m): 2:35pm On Jun 28, 2015
k
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by labamo07(m): 2:36pm On Jun 28, 2015
Kosi obo mo ni Idanre, gbogbo obo Idanre ti gbon. (There are no more monkeys in Idanre)

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by damiloladuke: 2:36pm On Jun 28, 2015
e Don die?




PRESIDENT BUHARI NEEDS TO READ MY SIGNATURE
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Aiziq: 2:38pm On Jun 28, 2015
I MADE FIRST PAGE...
Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by Slickest(m): 2:39pm On Jun 28, 2015
Nice job
Even though a penny won't be dropped
4ur vehicle of thoughts
Containing us who journeyd
Nd saw wot u saw

Me no b poet at all
M just appreciating a gud work
Of a dude who depicts art
So simple lyk wen I fart!!!!

Lwkmd

Freestyl toh bad

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Re: The Last Monkey In Idanre by SammyO4real: 2:39pm On Jun 28, 2015
Wow!

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