All Alone - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| All Alone by Ycmia(op): 1:02pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
ALL ALONE All alone I wait, All alone I lay, All alone I cry, In my room without none, Thinking of nothing, but you. All I can hear is the cock, Alarming me of dawn, For prayer to not let my faith down, To fathom my grievances. Sigh! That's how my heart was, When I suddenly formed your image, but clearly in reality, You're still not here, But forever, I'll be here, Waiting all alone. |
| Re: All Alone by llaykorn: 4:18pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
Ycmia, this is a very cool piece. Extremely simple, and yet extremely striking. Good job! Have you thought about punctuating your poetry just like you would punctuate your prose? |
| Re: All Alone by Ycmia(op): 5:45pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
Ilaykorn..thnks a lot, n for d observation I'll try and work on it...thnks once more!!! |
| Re: All Alone by llaykorn: 6:51pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
Ycmia:Welcome, bro. |