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Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 9:54pm On Oct 31, 2015
Feeling hot then i realize nepa just took the power...

Feeling so weak,so wouldn't take a shower...

Tryna sleep but my heart keeps beating faster...

And my brain wouldn't stop to think louder...

Then i realize how much i missed my only sister....

How we use to chat allnight when we were still together...

I keep asking my self what happened to the love between my parent...

Why things seems to go lighter and transparent...

My heart is divided but surely i'm for my mother...

I wouldn't know what to say about my father...

Going through depression but nobody to knows...

Cus have kept things to myself so i wouldn't give joy to my foes...

My heart bleed when i remember the love we once shared...

I wish we to see a happy family we once had...







Cc Laveda
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Re: Broken Home by Laveda(f): 10:00pm On Oct 31, 2015
Awww embarassed I'm speechless, your poem's a bit touching..

Nice one.. Stay strong kiss
Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 10:05pm On Oct 31, 2015
Laveda:
Awww embarassed I'm speechless, your poem's a bit touching..

Nice one.. Stay strong kiss
Thanks dear,i appriciate.
Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 12:59pm On Nov 01, 2015
danbrowndmf:
Feeling hot then i realize nepa just took the power...

Feeling so weak,so wouldn't take a shower...

Tryna sleep but my heart keeps beating faster...

And my brain wouldn't stop to think louder...

Then i realize how much i missed my only sister....

How we use to chat allnight when we were still together...

I keep asking my self what happened to the love between my parent...

Why things seems to go lighter and transparent...

My heart is divided but surely i'm for my mother...

I wouldn't know what to say about my father...

Going through depression but nobody to knows...

Cus have kept things to myself so i wouldn't give joy to my foes...

My heart bleed when i remember the love we once shared...

I wish we to see a happy family we once had...







Cc Laveda
Touched a nerve... my parents broke up after 23 yrs and seven children... No warning signs... just lightning strike with same amount of emotional damage
Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 1:09pm On Nov 01, 2015
daxlasaint:
Touched a nerve... my parents broke up after 23 yrs and seven children... No warning signs... just lightning strike with same amount of emotional damage
Wow! Sorry for that, so u staying wiv who?
Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 2:00pm On Nov 01, 2015
danbrowndmf:
Wow! Sorry for that, so u staying wiv who?
Neither of them now but back then we all chose Dad and mom never really understood... I still have a rocky today, steady tomorrow relationship with her...
Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 3:35pm On Nov 01, 2015
daxlasaint:
Neither of them now but back then we all chose Dad and mom never really understood... I still have a rocky today, steady tomorrow relationship with her...
nawa o.
Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 6:47pm On Nov 01, 2015
danbrowndmf:
nawa o.
Na life dealt with the shii ong ago and moved on.... The first few months are always the hardest
Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 7:39pm On Nov 01, 2015
daxlasaint:
Na life dealt with the shii ong ago and moved on.... The first few months are always the hardest
You reside in Lagos?
Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 8:52pm On Nov 01, 2015
danbrowndmf:
You reside in Lagos?
not really, warri pikin, but work all over.... currently stationed around lag sha


Why??
Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 10:48pm On Nov 01, 2015
daxlasaint:
not really, warri pikin, but work all over.... currently stationed around lag sha


Why??
nothing much bro,just asking
Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 9:42am On Nov 02, 2015
danbrowndmf:
nothing much bro,just asking
ok, where do you stay?
Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 10:41am On Nov 02, 2015
daxlasaint:
ok, where do you stay?
Porthacourt(for now)
Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 8:26pm On Nov 02, 2015
danbrowndmf:
Porthacourt(for now)
oh ok... just try to find your happy place, no use fighting a war that's already too late to win...
Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 8:33pm On Nov 02, 2015
daxlasaint:
oh ok... just try to find your happy place, no use fighting a war that's already too late to win...
Thanks bro.cheesy
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Re: Broken Home by llaykorn: 11:41pm On Nov 02, 2015
danbrowndmf:
Feeling hot then i realize nepa just took the power...

Feeling so weak,so wouldn't take a shower...

Tryna sleep but my heart keeps beating faster...

And my brain wouldn't stop to think louder...

Then i realize how much i missed my only sister....

How we use to chat allnight when we were still together...

I keep asking my self what happened to the love between my parent...

Why things seems to go lighter and transparent...

My heart is divided but surely i'm for my mother...

I wouldn't know what to say about my father...

Going through depression but nobody to knows...

Cus have kept things to myself so i wouldn't give joy to my foes...

My heart bleed when i remember the love we once shared...

I wish we to see a happy family we once had...
Stay strong, brother. sad
Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 12:04am On Nov 03, 2015
llaykorn:
Stay strong, brother. sad
Thanks G!
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