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| Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 9:54pm On Oct 31, 2015 |
Feeling hot then i realize nepa just took the power... Feeling so weak,so wouldn't take a shower... Tryna sleep but my heart keeps beating faster... And my brain wouldn't stop to think louder... Then i realize how much i missed my only sister.... How we use to chat allnight when we were still together... I keep asking my self what happened to the love between my parent... Why things seems to go lighter and transparent... My heart is divided but surely i'm for my mother... I wouldn't know what to say about my father... Going through depression but nobody to knows... Cus have kept things to myself so i wouldn't give joy to my foes... My heart bleed when i remember the love we once shared... I wish we to see a happy family we once had... Cc Laveda |
| Re: Broken Home by Laveda(f): 10:00pm On Oct 31, 2015 |
Awww I'm speechless, your poem's a bit touching..Nice one.. Stay strong |
| Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 10:05pm On Oct 31, 2015 |
Laveda:Thanks dear,i appriciate. |
| Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 12:59pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
danbrowndmf:Touched a nerve... my parents broke up after 23 yrs and seven children... No warning signs... just lightning strike with same amount of emotional damage |
| Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 1:09pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
daxlasaint:Wow! Sorry for that, so u staying wiv who? |
| Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 2:00pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
danbrowndmf:Neither of them now but back then we all chose Dad and mom never really understood... I still have a rocky today, steady tomorrow relationship with her... |
| Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 3:35pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
daxlasaint:nawa o. |
| Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 6:47pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
danbrowndmf:Na life dealt with the shii ong ago and moved on.... The first few months are always the hardest |
| Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 7:39pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
daxlasaint:You reside in Lagos? |
| Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 8:52pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
danbrowndmf:not really, warri pikin, but work all over.... currently stationed around lag sha Why?? |
| Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 10:48pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
daxlasaint:nothing much bro,just asking |
| Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 9:42am On Nov 02, 2015 |
danbrowndmf:ok, where do you stay? |
| Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 10:41am On Nov 02, 2015 |
daxlasaint:Porthacourt(for now) |
| Re: Broken Home by daxlasaint(m): 8:26pm On Nov 02, 2015 |
danbrowndmf:oh ok... just try to find your happy place, no use fighting a war that's already too late to win... |
| Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 8:33pm On Nov 02, 2015 |
daxlasaint:Thanks bro. ![]() |
| Re: Broken Home by llaykorn: 11:41pm On Nov 02, 2015 |
danbrowndmf:Stay strong, brother. ![]() |
| Re: Broken Home by danbrowndmf(op): 12:04am On Nov 03, 2015 |
llaykorn:Thanks G! |
I'm speechless, your poem's a bit touching..
