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Ladies Of Babylon

White turned black
Eyes shut down
Like a switch was off

Darkness fled
Consciousness adjusted
The earth yet spins

Plastic smiles
Made of rubber
Robbed man's engine

Called by its name;
Lively unconsciousness
Devil also's loved

Wrinkled mien
Portraying innocence
Stereotype of'em all

Samson already died
Next in queue,
Hitler of your own

After World War 3
Believe again
Be robbed again

Dimples at first sight
Pimples at last fight
The ladies of Babylon

~Agba Sixtus
©2015

Cc gracile

TheAgba:
Ladies Of Babylon
White turned black Eyes shut down Like a switch was off
Darkness fled Consciousness adjusted The earth yet spins
Plastic smiles Made of rubber Robbed man's engine
Called by its name; Lively unconsciousness Devil also's loved
Wrinkled mien Portraying innocence Stereotype of'em all
Samson already died Next in queue, Hitler of your own
After World War 3 Believe again Be robbed again
Dimples at first sight Pimples at last fight The ladies of Babylon
~Agba Sixtus ©2015
Cc gracile

7th & 8th line, methinks is tautology 13th line(mien) is a typo ryt? aside that and the fact that its very encoded, its a beautiful poem

gracile:
7th & 8th line, methinks is tautology
13th line(mien) is a typo ryt?
aside that and the fact that its very encoded, its a beautiful poem

It is "mien" ,it ain't a typo .

"Plastic smile " is just to say the smile is a fake one.
"Made of rubber" is to say the smile is flexible and of any rubber attribute . Also it's seductive, so could rob a man's heart .


What do you think ?

gracile:
7th & 8th line, methinks is tautology
13th line(mien) is a typo ryt?
aside that and the fact that its very encoded, its a beautiful poem

Thanks ...by the way, I started writing it about 10AM and got to finish it before 11AM yesterday.

TheAgba I'm following you. I like your poetry.

miclez:
TheAgba I'm following you. I like your poetry.

Wow !
Thanks

TheAgba:
It is "mien" ,it ain't a typo .

"Plastic smile " is just to say the smile is a fake one.
"Made of rubber" is to say the smile is flexible and of any rubber attribute . Also it's seductive, so could rob a man's heart .


What do you think ?

ok then, i think its impressive!
by d way, good day, been a while

gracile:
ok then, i think its impressive!
by d way, good day, been a while

Sure it has been . Hope you are cool ?

TheAgba:
Sure it has been . Hope you are cool ?

yea, very well