pls I wld appreciate critics, and corrections thank you

let's go dia

Ronke! Ronke!! Aderonke!!!
Yes mummy, am coming
Are u done packing your loads?
Yes ma.
Hope u didnt forget anything?
Yes ma.
Akinsola Aderonke is a smart and beautiful girl and she could pass for a model,the first and last of Mr and Mrs Akinsola but she lost her parents to the cold hands of death in a plane crash when they were coming from America to settle permanently in Nigeria but she was d only one that miraculously survived the crash.

I was left with no other choice than to stay with my aunty..(Aunty kemi), the only relative I have in Nigeria or so I thought, My family is not really a close one, with everyone keeping to themselves but the only family I knew of as at that time was Aunty Kemi,my maternal auntyand she gave me all I wanted, she put me in a good school at Abuja and she bought me nice things,she pratically raised me as her daughter,Not untill a day after my jss3 final exams when everything changed .
Aunty kemi brought home her boyfriend (Jeffery), Uncle Jef as I fondly called him was very nice to me , he bought me a lot of things: cloths , shoes , chocolates, cookies e.t.c .He wasnt as rich as my aunty but he was quite comfortable living with the money he earns as the personal assisant to the C.E.O of a multinational company while my Aunty was the C.E..O of a real estate agency left to her by my grandparents before their death..Everything was going on fine until the day uncle jeff called me to his room to get what he got for me, My aunty was not home and I just got back from school at that time, when I got to his room I was shocked at what I saw....

Please am sorry the updates are short..am quite busy but I promise to be update in the morning and night..and please dont just view ,ur corrections , critics and encouragments would be appreciated.Thank you

dammyluv911:
let's go dia

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laspeck:
Please am sorry the updates are short..am quite busy but I promise to be update in the morning and night..and please dont just view ,ur corrections , critics and encouragments would be appreciated.Thank you

but u shldnt start with a short update. Nice story anyway. Waiting for more and let it be long. Oliver Twist asks for more.

laspeck:
Akinsola Aderonke is a smart and beautiful girl and she could pass for a model,the first and last of Mr and Mrs Akinsola but she lost her parents to the cold hands of death in a plane crash when they were coming from America to settle permanently in Nigeria but she was d only one that miraculously survived the crash.

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