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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 10:27am On Feb 28, 2016
finally unbanned.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by pixtuk(m): 10:33am On Feb 28, 2016
Who banned you? why? how? when? God pass them all
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by doncharleyosumo(m): 2:38pm On Feb 28, 2016
Happy Sunday Misquote.

It would be nice for us to see an update of your fictional story. I in particular am quite eager to know how she was able to scale through giving birth to her baby daughter and getting an accommodation, while still holding on to her "hussle".

Did she eventually find someone who turned her blood from black to blue? Or did the story tapper into a tragic climax?

We anxiously await the rudder of your imagination to steer us through this unanswered suspense.

Thanks!

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 3:38pm On Feb 28, 2016
thanks everyone for your comments.
I shall update soon, lemme finish my party rice first.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 3:39pm On Feb 28, 2016
pixtuk:
Who banned you? why? how? when? God pass them all
I was quite surprised.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by missfrancess(f): 6:06pm On Feb 28, 2016
Nice one continue my daughter... Lol na joke oooooooooooooh
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Nobody: 7:42am On Feb 29, 2016
mizquote:
thanks everyone for your comments.

I shall update soon, lemme finish my party rice first.

eeeeh, share d rice nah. Anyway i forgot so soon you look like someone who could finish a basin of rice under four minutes
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Emmyddon74: 8:33am On Mar 01, 2016
More update pls
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by pguy(m): 12:27pm On Mar 01, 2016
Waiting
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by pguy(m): 12:27pm On Mar 01, 2016
Woman.... What's taking u long if u can't its better u end d story than kipin us waiting. Out of here
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 2:18pm On Mar 01, 2016
missfrancess:
Nice one continue my daughter... Lol na joke oooooooooooooh


OK mummy. lolzz.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 2:19pm On Mar 01, 2016
pguy:
Woman.... What's taking u long if u can't its better u end d story than kipin us waiting. Out of here

OK sir.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 2:19pm On Mar 01, 2016
Emmyddon74:
More update pls
OK.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 2:20pm On Mar 01, 2016
discoprophet:


eeeeh, share d rice nah. Anyway i forgot so soon you look like someone who could finish a basin of rice under four minutes

I had over a basin, I don't joke with party rice.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by manuel80(m): 7:04pm On Mar 01, 2016
undecided undecided
pguy:
Woman.... What's taking u long if u can't its better u end d story than kipin us waiting. Out of here
must you be this rude.. the lady just said she'll update soon so why lash out undecided
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by doncharleyosumo(m): 7:30pm On Mar 01, 2016
pguy:
Woman.... What's taking u long if u can't its better u end d story than kipin us waiting. Out of here

I won't be surprised if someone like you have not published a single book worth reading because it's quite obvious from your comment that you don't know how mentally tasking creating fictional stories can be.

Misquote, take this break and plot a solid progression in your plots and a befitting climax.

Kudos on your effort so far.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 4:51pm On Mar 02, 2016
' Veronica maternity' clinic stood adjacent to the town cemetery, it had a dull-brown-dirty look, the zinc was rusty thanks to age.

the clinic was where the market women who couldn't afford the luxury of going to a private clinic went for their antenatal.

The inside of the clinic held no better sight, it was dirty and not fit for a poultry house but financial situation force women to go there as the maternity charge was not on the high side and quite affordable.

the clinic boast of a security man who was always drunk, a secretary who was a spinster in her late forties, an aggressive nurse and a lazy ward maid.

Madam veronica, 'iya kudi' as she was called by her friends prides herself as a medical personnel and owner of a maternity clinic, she never knew she would come this far, she wasn't a nurse, she took after her mum who delivered pregnant women of their children.

On that fateful day, she was in her clinic, at her office calculating the estimate she needed to sponsor her 'sugar-boy', to Italy, he had been her best, he was the most loyal, most respectful, most hard working and his service on bed was out of the world.


Kayode Yusuf, was the best thing that had ever happened to her, though, she was twenty years older, age was insignificant. she loved the way he sought to please her, to spice her world, he proved his loyalty to her by always going beneath her, tasting her and marching her sexual prowess and taking her to paradise.

she was obsessed with him, she was taken aback when he told her of his plans of traveling to Italy to join his friends who where into drug peddling.

Iya kudi refused bluntly, her sugar-son was vexed and left but after two weeks when she couldn't endure the torment of being far from him she took her bulky and beefy body to him.

He meant business, he refused to touch her until she promised to give him the money for his supposed trip, longing to eat the forbidden fruit she agreed, he was happy and took her to the greatest height of sexual intimacy.

Iya kudi, after realizing that all her savings wasn't enough to sponsor her sugarboy she became sad and became desperate for money.

Her attention was called by her secretary that two women where in labour and one of them looked sick and may need to be operated.

she went to see them.

she was shocked when she saw Mama chisom, the woman had been her customer for ten years now, having birthed eight children in ten years, all baby girls. she was shocked the woman had come again to deliver her ninth child.


iya kudi also knew the lady with the sick pregnant woman, she knew her name was Maggie for she once came for an abortion procedure that damaged her womb. she knew they were prostitute.

she asked Maggie to go get some injections and drugs which she wrote down.

she checked how far Mama chisom had dilated and knew she was due soon.


she also checked the emaciated prostitute and noticed her cervix was a bit tight, she inserted some drugs that would aid the dilation process.

An hour later, Maggie wasn't back yet and the lady she came with was becoming weak, iya kudi didn't want the lady to die in her clinic but something happened, she heard the lady say with a tiny voice " its coming, its coming".


she went over and truly the baby head was out, she urged the lady to push, the lady pushed and fainted.

she had given birth to a baby boy.


Ten minute later, Mama chisom pushed her baby out.

A bouncing baby girl.

when mama chisom saw the baby she wailed loudly.
"not a girl again".

the other nurse was fixing a drip on the prostitute hand while her son cried loudly.


Mama chisom looked at iya kudi and said "pls help me".

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by manuel80(m): 7:09pm On Mar 02, 2016
hmm so Maggie's baby was a boy nice story misquote winkhmm so Maggie's baby was a boy nice story misquote
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by doncharleyosumo(m): 8:06pm On Mar 02, 2016
Mizquote: with this level of intrigue, I believe your story will be a nairaland best-seller...
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by arabaribiti(m): 8:45pm On Mar 02, 2016
Pick me pick me arabaribiti lovely story you are da bomb
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by sheycrown(f): 9:53pm On Mar 02, 2016
Maggie sold/exchanged her son with Iya Kudi's daughter... Ummn,didn't see that coming, well done Misquote.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by sameesyd(m): 10:33pm On Mar 02, 2016
:- cryX ahh, mama chisom wetin u wan do. I hope is not wat I'm tinkin. Mizquote d deliver as e d hot.
More inspiration to ur already inspired brain

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Jumizie13(f): 10:42pm On Mar 02, 2016
Wow wow wow. i never see diz coming
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by haryodejy(m): 11:20pm On Mar 02, 2016
I can only say one thing..OK two...mizquote unr excellent and I must marry u
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by omokenny94a(m): 12:21am On Mar 03, 2016
This story has been #Interesting from day one

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by manuel80(m): 8:52am On Mar 03, 2016
haryodejy:
I can only say one thing..OK two...mizquote unr excellent and I must marry u
lol for your mind. hehe
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by haryodejy(m): 9:55am On Mar 03, 2016
manuel80:
lol for your mind. hehe
baba I serious o, so she can tell me bed time stories...misquote or i lie ni
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by missfrancess(f): 4:24pm On Mar 04, 2016
continue smiley
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by SPDAZZY(f): 11:51pm On Mar 04, 2016
Hmmmmmm. This is serious.

Well done mizquote
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by kongru(m): 1:52am On Mar 05, 2016
missquote....I respect your Personality but i found it hard to believe you are not an ashawo in brothel or you are closely related to one because the analysis here is beyond research but full of experience

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by haryodejy(m): 6:01pm On Mar 05, 2016
kongru:
missquote....I respect your Personality but i found it hard to believe you are not an ashawo in brothel or you are closely related to one because the analysis here is beyond research but full of experience
now dats stale and derogatory

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by 2muchM: 10:03pm On Mar 05, 2016
Been refreshing my browser for 3 days now. Just post an update

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