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kongru:
missquote....I respect your Personality but i found it hard to believe you are not an ashawo in brothel or you are closely related to one because the analysis here is beyond research but full of experience

khwhaaat??! that's mean

my criticism is not posted for discussion.....I wish to direct my view towards missquote

Nothing is beyond research. Whenever we see talent, we should encourage it, not pointing fingers(indirectly).

For your info, Jack London wasn't a dog/wolf but he wrote "Call of the Wild" from the perspective of a wild animal. Does it mean he was a wild animal?

kongru:
missquote....I respect your Personality but i found it hard to believe you are not an ashawo in brothel or you are closely related to one because the analysis here is beyond research but full of experience

such a dumb fellow you are so I have to be a criminal before I can write a crime story, I should first go live with wild animals or probably in the zoo before I can come up with a Fable. You are too shallow to be in this literature session. My advice, go read your books and prepare for your WAEC, the exam is close

evaZee:
such a dumb fellow you are so I have to be a criminal before I can write a crime story, I should first go live with wild animals or probably in the zoo before I can come up with a Fable. You are too shallow to be in this literature session. My advice, go read your books and prepare for your WAEC, the exam is close

gbam...dahs all

evaZee:
such a dumb fellow you are so I have to be a criminal before I can write a crime story, I should first go live with wild animals or probably in the zoo before I can come up with a Fable. You are too shallow to be in this literature session. My advice, go read your books and prepare for your WAEC, the exam is close

on behalf of mizquote and her many fans, thank you

these are life experiences,I can put a mental image to every scene, I must confess, that you are extremely talented, this is not just literature, cos I can relate to some of the scenes, I am very impressed

Bleep haters continue my daughter

Honestly @ mizquote, I lyk ur write-up.if u dnt mind,i av a small biz proposal for u.

ambs50:
Honestly @ mizquote, I lyk ur write-up.if u dnt mind,i av a small biz proposal for u. Contact me on 08110417123

business prop indeed

thanks everyone for your comments. I appreciate. next update soon.

missfrancess:
Bleep haters continue my daughter

thanks mum and happy mothers day.

cekhoe:
these are life experiences,I can put a mental image to everyone scene, I must confess, that you are extremely talented, this is not just literature, cos I can relate to some of the scenes, I am very impressed

thanks dear.

ambs50:
Honestly @ mizquote, I lyk ur write-up.if u dnt mind,i av a small biz proposal for u. Contact me on 08110417123

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I will contact you in the evening. thanks

manuel80:
hmm so Maggie's baby was a boy nice story misquote hmm so Maggie's baby was a boy nice story misquote

thanks.

mizquote:
thanks dear.

just keep it up,and you will make a good script writer also

we're the updates keep them coming missy

Waooo....am jus short of words....nice story...the sky is ur begining sis...i salute u...keep it up

Well,i believe Kongru is trying to praise the creative imagination of the writer 'MAYBE'. But if not,just ignore.

wow! Now am falling in love, don't ask me with what or who; misquote your talent is unmatched and your ink unfailing. I pray e no go end for nairaland or for pleasure howbeit why e be say everyone wen drop name be badass. I for drop my own o but antecedent no go forgive me if the outcome na like the rest. Lol

she felt pressure on her stomach, she wanted to ignore but it came over again, the lame pain.

she tried to touch her stomach but couldn't feel it, in fact her body felt foreign.

then she peered open her eyes, she couldnt see nothing, just darkness. she closed her eyes.

willing her body and sight she open them, this time, she saw things blurry.

where was she? she thought.
she could see but nothing held meaning. this wasn't her room in the brothel neither was it her customer room.

she looked over her, then the memory came rushing.
she was pregnant. yes.

A man was on her ballooned stomach griding her when she wet herself, she thought it was urine until she realized she was indeed in labour.

fear over rode her and she began to panic, her customer quickly wore his trouser, his condom still glued to him as he ran out.

she didnt know what to do as her contraction began, she didnt have any money on her except for the four hundred her last customer dropped as he fled.

she picked it as she went in search for her friend, she met her and she was with a customer who was handling her massive boobs shamelessly.

maggie noticed the fear in her eyes, and knew at that moment her baby was about crossing the bridge to this sinful world.

maggie excused herself after assuring her sexually starved customer she would be back soon, he smacked her bum as she stood.

she remembered the fat nurse eyes on her like a forbidden parcel, how she said she was anaemic and might die in her clinic.

the pain she felt as the baby struggled to come to the world excitedly, she didn't believe the child would be this strong willed to want to taste the world.

the last she remembered was the baby head coming out and causing a huge tear.

then she blanked out.

where she saw her late family mocking and teasing her, her late dad pulling her hair.

she looked around, wondering where her baby was.

soon a woman came, the fat nurse with a tiny baby in a small old wrapper.

she collected the baby.
the nurse said "feed her, she's hungry".

she instinctively brought out her lame bre.last and stucked the nipple in the baby's mouth.

the baby sucked hungrily.
at that very moment, she felt overwhelming love, stronger than any other feeling she had ever had.

for her baby.

for her daughter.

I guess she gave birth to a baby boy but was exchange with a girl by d nurse.

Dz story is dah bomb!

now curiosity is wearing me. What would become of her son? I hope son has not had a canal knowledge of mother already? o! I remember mother no day do underage except in extreme case. Would mother son unite or would son marry mother's daughter... Wow misquote you've got my thought racing above speed-limit.

Mizquote are you married?...... If not, will you marry me?---- you`re awesome

while waiting for the next update, I went through the story again,, and to be honest, this would make a good script for a movie, you should consider it miss,this is just more like someone's life history, you are talented, keep it up

kip it up

I'm wowed, mizquote u r d best. Can't bliv I caught up, just started xterday... But pls, more updates o.

So started 1am, and am here Already. Captivating, suspense filled! Weldone mizqoute.

I see you viewing should we be expecting an update?