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MY HEART (LET ME BE) by Kayode Joshua
Let me be! Oh, independent heart of mine Why won't you let me be? Why do you keep controlling me?
My mind seems powerless When you show your prowess I wish I could protest, But you take total control of me The more I claim to control you The more you overpower me
You force tears out of my eyes You erupt a feeling which never dies I cant stop trying, The more I try the more it seems I'm dying
Your determination marvels me The more the NOs come The more you go At your distress I am more or less useless
You, do I detest But who you love I love Oh, independent heart of mine Let me be!
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Your poem is nice, thumbs up. The message is quite clear. Try working on arranging the lines and stanza properly, 'cos it might not impress a layman! My one cent though

doggedemmy:
Your poem is nice, thumbs up. The message is quite clear. Try working on arranging the lines and stanza properly, 'cos it might not impress a layman! My one cent though

Thanks a lot . About the arrangement, I did that while typing but when I posted it it came out this way.

Nice poem

KayodeJSK:
MY HEART (LET ME BE) by Kayode Joshua
Let me be! Oh, independent heart of mine Why won't you let me be? Why do you keep controlling me?
My mind seems powerless When you show your prowess I wish I could protest, But you take total control of me The more I claim to control you The more you overpower me
You force tears out of my eyes You erupt a feeling which never dies I cant stop trying, The more I try the more it seems I'm dying
Your determination marvels me The more the NOs come The more you go At your distress I am more or less useless
You, do I detest But who you love I love Oh, independent heart of mine Let me be!
Thanks for reading Your comments or reviews will be appreciated.

nice poem