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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Zehner(f): 5:46pm On May 28, 2016 |
About 3 weeks ago I got stuck in traffic and I was pressed so badly I needed to pee, this was somewhere in Oshodi. Myself and the other lady in the car jumped down and started looking for where to pee soon we came across a bouncer by the gate and I greeted him and begged that we were pressed. He told us to walk straight down and upon entering the compound I realised it was a brothel. Girls of different shapes and sizes were there, some were drinking and some were smoking. I approached one of them. She was so pretty and polite showed us where to pee and even took us afterwards to another exit so we could catch up with our car. I kept thinking what made her turn to prostitution....this incident and this your stuory has changed my views about prostitution. These girls are human and face a lot of hardship. Kai...my people. Na condition make crayfish bend. I have learnt to not judge anymore. Nice story @ mizquote. well done 16 Likes 1 Share |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 7:50am On May 29, 2016 |
I have been having series of goosebumps of recent, the first I had was the last time I spoke to my mum alive. I couldn't explain it then, but I feel within me the appearance of that was a way of my mum assuring me of her presence- her love. Aunty Maggie, had been such a great friend to my mother, her loyalty to my mum is unwaivering even in death. As she gently pulled the pillow off my face, I couldn't bare to look at her, those eyes of hers made my pain unbearable. she didn't say anything for a while, she cleared her throat and wiped her eyes with the back of her palm, she asked I look at her. I did. I notice the seriousness, I knew within me she wanted to tell me what I have always avoided to hear - reality. I didn't say a word as she spoke, I made my face expressionless. I just watch as she spoke, in almost a whisper. I paid attention to her physical appearance, I had to do that, so I could be bold and not cry. I noticed her aging face, her very visible drooping eye bags, her wrinkled face, the stretch mark on her arm, her discoloured face, I had myself comparing her to my mum who was very pretty, with a nice dentition. Aunty Margaret, might not be very physically attractive but she had got a gold-plated heart. I watched as she dug her hand in her bra and brought out some squeezed currencies, she counted them and gave me some for my upkeep. I murmured a 'thank you', as she made to the door. I went back to my bed and nippled on the bread she brought I reminisced on the words she said. "you have to grow up fast, this world isn't a bed of roses". I didn't know exactly why she said that but my intuition knew something was up. 3 Likes |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Zehner(f): 8:18am On May 29, 2016 |
Hmmmm....and the cycle continues 1 Like |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Niwdog(m): 6:17pm On May 29, 2016 |
Abeg don't introduce this one to prostitution |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by donaldphilipizu(m): 9:01pm On May 29, 2016 |
its a gradual process.... still got ur bk |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Bishops10(m): 11:57pm On May 29, 2016 |
Recycle |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Luckymay(f): 12:56am On May 30, 2016 |
Hmmm |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by oruchechuks(m): 8:17am On May 30, 2016 |
Eyah so touching. This life may not offer you the best after all |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Eniqurl(f): 1:16pm On May 30, 2016 |
More please |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by franciseromosel(m): 1:57pm On May 30, 2016 |
Nice piece ,Mizquote...But wait oh,why the choice of your moniker. |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by rfnextar8(m): 8:39am On May 31, 2016 |
what a nice write up it is indeed lovely more ink to your pen awaiting more updates thanks in anticipation |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by OracleJames612: 4:37pm On Jun 09, 2016 |
Well done Mizqoute. Ur story is really interesting. |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by K9blunt(f): 5:30pm On Jun 10, 2016 |
Gmekx: I am not a fan of poem, but guy you killed this..... Very impressive! 1 Like |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by oye9ja(m): 4:56pm On Jun 27, 2016 |
When are you giving us the next update...it's been quite a while now. |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Nobody: 5:16pm On Jun 27, 2016 |
smh...abandoned project
This is why I check to see if a story has been completed before I follow |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by manuel80(m): 7:21pm On Jun 27, 2016 |
kushkingstalin:I'm sure she didn't abandon this project.. I mean she wouldn't just leave the story and people hanging here on purpose..there's a reason and its just a matter of time |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Nobody: 3:54pm On Jun 28, 2016 |
evaZee: frostland: Only if you can remember that (guess on page 3-5 on this thread) Sara's mum was seriously sick and obviously it was from her last "runs". Guess I'm right @MizQuote |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by feyorpe: 5:00pm On Jul 04, 2016 |
@mizquote, u are just too much! The caption of Ur story really caught my attention that I had to read into the lines both day and night... It is "cocastic". Qudos and More update pls... |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by dayoakinns(m): 9:25am On Jul 06, 2016 |
I started this story yesterday and here am i hanging for more update. you are talented |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Nobody: 5:58pm On Jul 10, 2016 |
cum complete am na,enjoyin viz already o |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by missfrancess(f): 6:13am On Jul 11, 2016 |
misquote long time pls continue am wit u |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by paddy4jungle: 9:05pm On Jul 12, 2016 |
I cry 4 life. I weep 4 human misery Misery wrought on humans by humans Misery brought on lovely people by their loved ones? Mizquote I nominate u 4 African masterpiece writer 2016 I will never look down on these ladies again 4 as long as I live |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by PWEETYWIZZY(f): 10:08pm On Jul 12, 2016 |
Dis story is jst indescribable, it wow's ma imagination. Good job girl |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by tobianodino(m): 9:59pm On Jul 18, 2016 |
Love up sis....nice story
more dataa to ur phone nd answer dis guys way dy die 4 na lol |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by SweetieConstie(f): 11:00am On Aug 16, 2016 |
Very nice story, Mizquote... Please, kindly complete it... Thanks! |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Brightolanton(m): 10:53pm On Aug 16, 2016 |
mizquote:thumbs up dear. You have shown an enviable level of consistency on this forum, I seriously admire that about you sweetie |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 11:00am On Aug 17, 2016 |
I'm quite surprised, people re still following this story. thumps up my loyal readers. I shall be back soon. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by genius43(m): 12:13pm On Aug 17, 2016 |
mizquote: Please do |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Daeveed(m): 12:11pm On Aug 18, 2016 |
Nice One... Am Really Enjoyinq Our Story |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by LuvU2: 9:16pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
mizquote:I just read everything. U re a brilliant writer Pls do update soon. |
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by yeminiz(m): 11:57pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
add more update...who wouldn't love such an interesting story line like this...sharp sharp |
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