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| Obedient Child by joanee20(op): 12:43am On Oct 08, 2016*. Modified: 11:04pm On Feb 03, 2024 |
Am just trying to see if I can write, what should I call this one, flash fiction or writing? Lol. Criticism please. Divepen1 Ozila missmossy He detested deceit and infidelity. Marriage, to him, meant putting an end to promiscuity—or was it adultery? How did I end up in this mess? I never thought I'd get caught, especially not like this. I married a man I felt nothing for. My parents pressured me, and I couldn't refuse. "He's a good young man," they insisted. "A devout Christian. He loves you like no other. What more could you want, dear?" "But Mom, I don't love him. I don't want to hurt him. I love someone else." "Listen, Ng, I speak from experience. Don't dismiss a good man. If he loves you deeply, it's for the best. He'll treat you right. He doesn't smoke or drink. Consider it," Mom urged, seeking Dad's support. "Angel, your mom's right. We can't deceive you. We love you and want the best. You may think it's old-fashioned, but we just want your happiness," Dad added. "But Dad, I can't live with someone I don't love," I cried. "Please don't make me do this." I was so confused. My head spun as if there were a party inside. My heart was in turmoil. Who am I to defy my parents' wishes? That's how I ended up in this sham of a marriage. But now, caught in a hotel room with another man I love, by my supposed husband, I wished I had disobeyed my churchy parents just once. |
| Re: Obedient Child by TheNathan(m): 7:08pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
We following |
| Re: Obedient Child by joanee20(op): 7:38am On Oct 09, 2016 |
TheNathan:Its kinda ended..thanks for commenting |
| Re: Obedient Child by ozila(m): 5:11pm On Oct 09, 2016 |
joanee20:no it can't end there na. you started cheating on him because you don't love him. you must continue oh |
| Re: Obedient Child by TheNathan(m): 7:26pm On Oct 09, 2016 |
ozila:Help me tell her |
| Re: Obedient Child by joanee20(op): 3:20pm On Oct 10, 2016 |
ozila:Lol..are you serious? don't have anything more to write o.. na trial ooo. Boss I hail o |
| Re: Obedient Child by joanee20(op): 11:11pm On Feb 03, 2024 |
[quote author=ozila post=50057369]no it can't end there na. you started cheating on him because you don't love him. you must continue oh BOSS, hwfr |
| Re: Obedient Child by joanee20(op): 11:13pm On Feb 03, 2024 |
ozila:BOSS, hwfr |