Drunken In Love - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| Drunken In Love by Morelaa(op): 8:42pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
Oh my lover,
thou art has Fair as the moon,
your smiles are like ray of sunshine,
your words as cold has winter. You have me me drunken in love nevertheless, I can't restrain my fast heart bites, I can't stop the glow in mine eyes all because am drunken in love. Yet, it tickles ,yes I feel butterfly in my stomach I can't stop my feet from tanting , nor my lips from chanting ur name. oh my love for every word u speak, are like music in mine ears, and like little bairds singing sweetly in the tree. younder I wander , have I been enchanted or am I drunken in love.... |
| Re: Drunken In Love by redon12(m): 9:24pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
Morelaa:Awesome!!!!... wait till my buddies read this |
| Re: Drunken In Love by SalomonKane: 7:37am On Nov 05, 2016 |
Morelaa:Your poem is not properly arranged. How come you only used archaic words on the first stanza alone? |