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Etisalat Flash Fiction Competition (best Story So Far) by LeMubs(op): 9:18am On Nov 10, 2016
******* MY FIRST LOVE

He had the most beautiful eyes.The pair, blue to a fault, almost unreal; my heart would skip a million beats when ever our eyes met.I would get butterflies whenever his cheeks dimpled, and the corners of his eyes wrinkled. Our friends teased him about his oddly shaped head:like an acorn his head was cone-shaped,one look at it would remind me of the dinosaurs in Jurassic park. However I was indifferent,I accepted his flaws and idolized him. His name was Mevi and he was the newest boy in my class.

"Mevi smiled at me" said Tanya, the daughter of our english teacher one day during break time. I felt betrayed. How could Mevi do that to me?. Tanya was the prettiest girl in our class,her gap tooth and dimples singled her out and she was obviously prettier than I was but then, Mevi belonged to me;he was my precious.

"Mevi touched my face" Mapo blurted during our walk home. I shuddered. Mapo was a girl with a petite figure and I was round and fat like a mortar. Almost instantly,I coveted her body,maybe Mevi liked petite girls.
I was wrapped in a cloak of uncertainty:when will Mevi talk to me?

Then one day,he came to my seat and asked if he could borrow my pencil, tears of happiness flooded my heart as I handed him my neatly sharpened pencil. Our hands accidentally touched and I felt as though I was touched by an angel. He was back to borrow my book;then my eraser and then my ruler but Mevi never smiled at me like he did to Tanya; he never touched my face.
The next week at school Mevi was absent,he never returned. I was inconsolable,he was my first love and he left with my heart.



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https://prize.etisalat.com.ng/flash-fiction/voteall.php?id=696

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Re: Etisalat Flash Fiction Competition (best Story So Far) by HelenaG(f): 1:25am On Nov 12, 2016
Want to trade votes?
Re: Etisalat Flash Fiction Competition (best Story So Far) by LeMubs(op): 12:02pm On Nov 12, 2016
HelenaG:
Want to trade votes?
Sure
Re: Etisalat Flash Fiction Competition (best Story So Far) by HelenaG(f): 2:24pm On Nov 12, 2016
Hi LeMubs, Iv just voted for you. Kindly reciprocate. My link is https://prize.etisalat.com.ng/flash-fiction/voteall.php?id=2454

Thank you

LeMubs:
Sure
Re: Etisalat Flash Fiction Competition (best Story So Far) by LeMubs(op): 5:44pm On Nov 12, 2016
HelenaG:
Hi LeMubs, Iv just voted for you. Kindly reciprocate. My link is https://prize.etisalat.com.ng/flash-fiction/voteall.php?id=2454

Thank you
Thanks so much
I'm on your page rn
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