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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by veekid(m): 4:32pm On Nov 25, 2016
bibijay123:


lol I wasn't writing e_exams joor. So how did you know abt that?

How's your health?
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by toboski1(m): 4:36pm On Nov 25, 2016
olatex25:

yea, she deserve to rest bt if she decide to sell her story today I must b d first buyer, bt in as much dat she choose nt 2 sell. We deserve frequent update... Although i sent dat msg jst 2 gain her attentn nd 2 remind her dat it's been 2-3days of no update...
Bt bro wetin b ur own gan self, ''mafi lomi dasi"..

Padi mi calm down
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Jay542(m): 4:37pm On Nov 25, 2016
bibijay123:


lol God forbid ooo, I am not a killer
Lmao. Better do this 1 for us biko. That character is so annoying angry
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by dominique(f): 4:37pm On Nov 25, 2016
bibijay123:


I missed you guys too o, I don't know what's up with this migraine. Maybe its stress but m fine. Thank you sis, you?

Try and by plenty of rest. Visit a hospital if you have to. You'll be fine by God's grace
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 5:32pm On Nov 25, 2016
Bibi. I like how you drop the bomb, and let us crave for more. Welcome back, tutor.
grin

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 6:33pm On Nov 25, 2016
adetomdx:
How are you feeling now Bibijay?... Its my birthday, a dedication will do *winks*

wow! happy birthday to you love. sorry I just saw dis. You will get your special mention, no p abt that

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 6:38pm On Nov 25, 2016
Topscoque:
Sup bibijay123, hw body. Speedy recovery dear. 2day is my brthdy.... . Wont mind dedication of d nxt update


Awwn, I missed ur birthday, hope you had fun? I am much better now, thanks.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 6:39pm On Nov 25, 2016
room089:
Funmi isn't the killer!

From my crystal bulb I'm seeing a lady who used to be in mrs afolabi's employ as the killer!

Knowing bibi as a 'twister', you think she would go straight by using funmi we all have our minds on as the killer? Believe so only if you haven't read at least two of her works.

Bibi keep slaying; the Lord is your strength!

lol you sha..... Thank you boss

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 6:39pm On Nov 25, 2016
Okay this does it!!!
I hate Sly
(eyes roll @me for choosing a side)

Someone like him in real life would be a passionate but very unstable partner...he is very unkind too...recipe for abuse
I also have a peeve with people who love and keep big and potentially dangerous dogs lipsrsealed
I will stop now.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 6:42pm On Nov 25, 2016
dominique:


Try and by plenty of rest. Visit a hospital if you have to. You'll be fine by God's grace

Amen, thank u sis. I replied your mail, I don't know why you didn't get it. will resend

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 6:44pm On Nov 25, 2016
merahki:
Okay this does it!!!
I hate Sly
(eyes roll @me for choosing a side)

Someone like him in real life would be a passionate but very unstable partner...he is very unkind too...recipe for abuse
I also have a peeve with people who love and keep big and potentially dangerous dogs lipsrsealed
I will stop now.






lol don't be hating on poor sly joor

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 6:46pm On Nov 25, 2016
Creeza:
Bibi. I like how you drop the bomb, and let us crave for more. Welcome back, tutor.
grin


lol Thank you, missed ya!

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 6:50pm On Nov 25, 2016
merahki:


cheesy
This cracked me up!!!

Hello everyone...please forgive me for making my entrance like this....but this post was too funny for me to ignore, I dunno why!
Mz bibijay123....you write well cool....discovered this thread and have been following since

Team #canwestoptryingtomanipulateBibitodoourwishes tongue


lol thank you!

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 6:55pm On Nov 25, 2016
bibijay123:


lol don't be hating on poor sly joor

tongue
Good to have you back
And hope you got medical attention for the headache? My snap diagnosis is eye strain from screen activities...

( sending healing waves your way)

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 6:55pm On Nov 25, 2016
AyamConfidence:
Wow...hi everyone... Confidence is finally here...this story is just off the hook and I thought it would have ded before I got here but I'm happy it hasn't

First I want to thank Bibi for this story...the plot, the narrations from everybody's different angles is just on point... The followers of the story too...myself included are just too much cool

I'm here till the end of the story...ain't dropping till last bus stop

I wan join bibilets ooo hope entry form still remain cheesy

Bibijay123 I'm loyal ma

You are highly welcome o, yes form is still available.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by tunjilomo(m): 8:25pm On Nov 25, 2016
tunjilomo:
I guess Dupe is gonna be blamed for the murder
I am a good guesser,now she has been blamed.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by DaddySLY(m): 8:27pm On Nov 25, 2016
bibijay123:

lol don't be hating on poor sly joor
tell them! am a good guy embarassed

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by AyamConfidence(m): 8:45pm On Nov 25, 2016
bibijay123:


You are highly welcome o, yes form is still available.
thanks ma'am... Hope we getting an update soon
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:49pm On Nov 25, 2016
merahki:


tongue
Good to have you back
And hope you got medical attention for the headache? My snap diagnosis is eye strain from screen activities...it is a big deal, and a migraine would typically not drag on... during a check, your bp would be measured too....a high one can cause headaches

( sending healing waves your way)

Really? thanks babe.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Lleigh(f): 9:19pm On Nov 25, 2016
bibijay123:


Really? thanks babe.

I second that bibijay123, if you wear glasses please get your prescription rechecked.

Great update

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by vandops10(m): 7:32am On Nov 26, 2016
Front page baby
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by geraldmezi(m): 7:38am On Nov 26, 2016
Lol
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Eniqurl(f): 7:38am On Nov 26, 2016
I HATE FUNMI WITH MY WHOLE HEART... bitch!!

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:16am On Nov 26, 2016
Chapter Nineteen
Dedicated to flistly, adetomcmx_ happy belated birthday dear.




Mabel




" Tade open up please" I ponded on the door with my fist." You can't just shut yourself away from the world!" Tade had gone crazy when we received the call from Nigeria that his mother had been murdered by Funmi's friend. I knew part of it was my fault, if I hadn't insisted on bringing Funmi into our home we wouldn't have been in this mess. It was unfortunate that my poor mother _in_ law was gone all because of our bad decisions, both Tade's and mine. Truth be told, he had used Funmi and dumped her when he knew he was married and she had gotten all the whole blame. If only he had controlled himself on that night.



" Bell, come in" Tade said, opening the door for me. I entered our bedroom and looked at the mess he had created. He had broken the mirror on my drawer, it was then I noticed his hand was bleeding. I went out of the room and returned with the first aid box. I seated him down on our bed and fixed his wounded hand.


" Thank you," He said, when I was done.



" Tade what happened here in my absence? while I was away" I asked, staring into his deep brown eyes." Please tell me the truth"



He sighed roughly " I cheated with her"



His admission shocked me and pierced my heart . I knew he had slept with her but hearing it from him made it hurt all over again.



" Bell, I'm sorry. I deeply regretted it afterwards." He said, shaking his head with regret.



" I knew you slept with her" I said, " Why Tade? I was away only for few weeks!"



He looked shocked now and he seemed lost for words. " B...Bell.....You...you knew? damn!"



" Yes I knew. I am your wife for Christ sake! we have been together for almost ten years! don't you think I'd know when something is amiss? don't you think I'd know you by now? I knew as soon as I came back that something had changed in you, her, and between us. I am only sorry that Mother_in_ law had to pay for our mistakes. Why would Funmi's friend kill her?"



" Funmi killed her....Funmi killed my mother!" He cried out, " Bell, please I need you now more than ever, please don't leave me to face this on my own. I can't survive this without you."



" I am not going anywhere. Even though I want to kick you out and scratch your face for sleeping with somebody I took as a sister I won't leave. It's for better, for worse, remember?"



" Thank you Bell, thank you."



" Why did you think it was Funmi who killed your mother and not her friend?" I asked, pondering what the girl in question stands to gain.



" From the explanation my aunt gave, Funmi's friend was only a pawn in Funmi's game of revenge. The truth was glaring and obvious, the poor girl was too naive and she failed to see the evil in her so called friend. Why did Funmi send her to my mother? why was it on a day that the gate man goes on his leave? who else has a bone to pick with me?" He sighed furiously, and stood up." Bell, there's more. There's something else I didn't tell you. I doubt if you can forgive me this one but I would understand if you don't. Hell! I have really messed up our lives! I fear for Serwa's life now"



I sprang up as the truth in his words rang loudly in my ears. My Serwa, my baby? Funmi would have to run me through with a sword before she gets to my child.



" What should we do Tade?" I asked frantically.



" You both have to go back to the states " He said.



" No, I won't leave you to face this on your own. We will send Serwa to the states, my parents will get a nanny to look after her. She will be fine and safe with them." I said." You said.....there's more. What didn't you tell me?"



He looked away, eyes closed in either regret or pain." She came back here after we sent her away. She came to my office to see me."



So the bitch had lied to me! She had wanted to see Tade under the pretext of begging my forgiveness. Only God knows what she had up her sleeves the day she came to see me. Did Tade fall for her charms again? did he go back into her arms?was that what he was trying to tell me?



" Talk to me please" I said.



" She informed me that she was carrying my child" He said.



My knees buckled and I held onto the bed for support. This was even worse than I imagined. Not only had Tade cheated on me, betrayed my trust, broken our vows but he had gotten her with child! he had filled another woman's womb with his seed when I have always craved for another baby.




" How could you Tade, how could you? how could you do this to us, how could you destroy everything we have worked so hard to build in just one night! how many minutes did it take you to cum? was it worth it? if you were too Hot to think right you could have jerked off, you bastard!"



" Bell, I'm sorry. " He said, trying to touch me but I brushed off his hand. I don't know if this was a test but I don't think I can pass it. I don't think I can. He had destroyed us and everything we built. It was too much to bear and I felt utterly lost.


" Leave me alone," I said.


He walked out of the room silently and closed the door gently behind him. I placed my head on my thighs and cried my heart out.
******
Uche


" She has a chance right?" I asked shark, who had driven me to see Dupe.She had been quiet and refused to talk to us. We were also told she had refused to eat her food and Shark was really using his influence to ensure that she was as comfortable as she could be in such a dire place. Nobody had laid even a finger on her and for that I was grateful to him. Shark had gone to the morgue to see the corpse of the woman, he had seen the murder weapon as well and he had also gone to the place the incident occurred with some police officers. His conclusion was that it was a set up. The message the woman had sent to Dupe was still on her phone but the late woman's phone was missing. Her bedroom was also ransacked and her jewelries, gold, and some cash was missing. It was designed to make it seem like she had caught Dupe stealing from her and Dupe had killed her.



Dupe's parents and my mother had been in their church fasting and praying. Shark was also trying to track down Funmi but she had disappeared into thin air. Annie had practically moved in with us, she saw to my needs and offered her shoulder when I needed one to cry on.Dubem had returned home but he had locked himself in his room and right now he was the least of my problems.




" You have asked that a zillion times already, Uche ask one more time again and I'd be forced to leave you by the roadside and drive off." He grumbled.



" Sorry man, I am simply worried" I apologized.



" Worrying won't solve anything. Don't let her see that you are depressed, it will kill her." He said.



" I will try not to. Thanks for everything" I said.



" You are welcome," He replied tersely.



We continued the drive in silence. Each man to his thought and I could perceive that he was also worried and more shaken more than he was letting on.



" We are there," Shark said, killing off the engine of the car. We had driven to where the woman's gate man lived. Shark wanted to ask him some questions, he wanted to know the people who could want his boss dead and if he had suspected anything or anyone . " Do you want to stay in the car?" He asked.


" No."



He helped me out of the car and led me through a narrow stuffy passage. The stench of urine drifted to our noses and I knew the house was either in a ghetto or slum. Shark knocked on a door and we waited for some seconds before someone opened the door. Shark suddenly became rigid beside me, he drew in breath sharply and I heard him slam his fist into the wall or the poor old man's face?



" Shark, what are you doing?" I asked.



" Who are you people, I hope you are not police officers. I am tired of answering questions." the old man said.



" Shark, shark" I called but he remained silent. What was going on? why wasn't he already assuring the old man that we were not officers and that we came in peace?. " We are not police officers, papa love is that you? I am Dupe's husband and she always talked fondly about you."



" The poor girl." He said.



" Daddy" I heard Shark choke out, his voice was thick with emotions. It was a tone I never heard him use before. He sounded like a broken little boy." Is that you daddy? I am Sylvester."



There was a moment of silence. I wondered what was going on but I knew not to interfere.




" What nonsense is this?" The old man cried out in disbelief. " So you have dug into my past and you think you can fool me? You think you can impersonate my dead son? Have you no shame? to play with an old man like that?



" Daddy, don't you recognize your own son? Your flesh and blood?. Abosede cried every night when you were taken away. We all missed you and your face was etched in our hearts. Has time erased us from your memory? have you completely closed your heart against us? Mama never remarried, she was convinced you would one day come back go her. Have you forgotten Mama as well?"



The old man started sobbing. I could hear Shark sniffling as well and I knew that this was a reunion between a father and a son who had thought each other dead. The old man's hand brushed my arm as he pulled his son into his arms. They both wept like babies and I was gladdened in my heart that even in the midst of our woes God had rekindled their happiness.




TBC



Happy weekend guys!

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:19am On Nov 26, 2016
Lleigh:


I second that bibijay123, if you wear glasses please get your prescription rechecked.

Great update

Good morning babe. no I don't use glasses. Thanks, have missed out on sam and Remi.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:37am On Nov 26, 2016
veekid:

How's your health?
I am fine boo, you?

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by dominique(f): 8:39am On Nov 26, 2016
As we don make front-page na Godwin

So Sly committed murder just for nothing. He should sha do and defend Dupe then face the music.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 8:41am On Nov 26, 2016
And to think he killed Annie's mom for nothing sad nice write up, am following till the end!!!

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by veekid(m): 8:42am On Nov 26, 2016
bibijay123:


I am fine boo, you?


I'm good
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:46am On Nov 26, 2016
dominique:
As we don make front-page na Godwin

So Sly committed murder just for nothing. He should sha do and defend Dupe then face the music.

lol you really want Sly to go to prison ooo. Sis I don't know why my emails to u are not delivering. Good morning

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by yorhmienerd(m): 8:49am On Nov 26, 2016
One of the sweetest morning food served here on NL.

Sly killing Annie's mom is done based on the report the police officer gave him, he was simply misled by the officer

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 8:55am On Nov 26, 2016
I just got chills reading this now. Poor Annie lost her mum for nothing sad Mabel and Tade should not break up at all...


++++
Congrats on FP, Bibi

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