WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? - Jobs/Vacancies

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WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by Nobody: 12:34pm On Apr 22, 2017

Please kindly find the attached resume for your perusal (FILE SIZE 32kb) Absolutely stand to be corrected.

Thanks.

Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by Dajugba: 2:44pm On Apr 22, 2017

Much adjustment has to be carried out on your cv. In as much some information are valuable to personal growth in life, it is not necessarily important to note them in cv, because good leadership skills, worth and experience are not mainly seen on document, but rather in solving problems when you are being employed

I can put your cv in good order. But little token. Will You pay??

Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by Abiss19(m): 3:07pm On Apr 23, 2017

@ Dajugba. I don't think it is good enough you wanna take a token from him before you help put his CV in order. We should be good Nigerians!

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Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by Dajugba: 6:36pm On Apr 23, 2017*

Abiss19:
@ Dajugba. I don't think it is good enough you wanna take a token from him before you help put his CV in order. We should be good Nigerians!

Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by irsakant: 8:58pm On Apr 23, 2017

Dajugba:
Much adjustment has to be carried out on your cv. In as much some information are valuable to personal growth in life, it is not necessarily important to note them in cv, because good leadership skills, worth and experience are not mainly seen on document, but rather in solving problems when you are being employed

I can put your cv in good order. But little token. Will You pay??

I can do it far better at N1,700 but a CV review is absolutely free (TERMS & CONDITION apply.) Whatsapp me on : +2348037989242

Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by irsakant: 9:00pm On Apr 23, 2017

Abiss19:
@ Dajugba. I don't think it is good enough you wanna take a token from him before you help put his CV in order. We should be good Nigerians!

Why can't you start up and run it free?

Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by MrDKR(m): 10:33pm On Apr 23, 2017*

D general work xperience is okay! Bt there are some stuffz dat are old fashioned. Example, objective, it should b removed & b replaced wit personal summary, remove your state of origin, LGA, religion, marital status, even your date of birth should be removed etc...

CV information should be centered on stuffz that will help convince your employer that you can get the job done.

Halla me on mesidorukis@gmail.com, I will help you more tips on how to write a better CV free of charge!

Kind Regards,

DKR

Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by Nobody: 8:38am On Apr 24, 2017

Your CV isn't too bad but it just needs a little editing.

1. Your career objective is too cliché and vague, it looks like what one will find on any Paperlace, Ishilove or Madcow1's CV. It should be more specific, something like
"To build upon my existing corporate finance skill set in both analytics and transaction execution, leading to increasingly responsible positions in treasury"

2. Your personal data has too many redundant information in it. Take out your religion, your nationality, and languages spoken (except you are a polyglot or you can speak any of the international languages that would give you an edge).

3. Take out your primary school leaving certificate, it is of no use (except you are applying for a government job).

4. Your work experience should be arranged chronologically, starting from your recent job.

5. Your professional accomplishments isn't particularly 'professional' neither is it an accomplishment. I'd advise you take it out.

6. There are a couple of typographical errors on your CV, take the time out to proof-read and correct those mistakes. For example, 'Achievements' was spelt as 'Achivements'.

LastMumu

Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by Nobody: 8:56am On Apr 24, 2017

LastMumu:
Your CV isn't too bad but it just needs a little editing.

1. Your career objective is too cliché and vague, it looks like what one will find on any Paperlace, Ishilove or Madcow1's CV. It should be more specific, something like
"To build upon my existing corporate finance skill set in both analytics and transaction execution, leading to increasingly responsible positions in treasury"

2. Your personal data has too many redundant information in it. Take out your religion, your nationality, and languages spoken (except you are a polyglot or you can speak any of the international languages that would give you an edge).

3. Take out your primary school leaving certificate, it is of no use (except you are applying for a government job).

4. Your work experience should be arranged chronologically, starting from your recent job.

5. Your professional accomplishments isn't particularly 'professional' neither is it an accomplishment. I'd advise you take it out.

6. There are a couple of typographical errors on your CV, take the time out to proof-read and correct those mistakes. For example, 'Achievements' was spelt as 'Achivements'.

LastMumu

So right on point. I guess that's why you are last mumu. In fact, you made more reasonable points than our token-brothers

Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by Omoluabi16(m): 9:54am On Apr 24, 2017

TheSlyone2:
So right on point. I guess that's why you are last mumu. In fact, you made more reasonable points than our token-brothers

lol. token brothers indeed.. @ last mumu nice suggestions.

Re: WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CV ??? by Nobody: 4:22pm On Apr 24, 2017

LastMumu:
Your CV isn't too bad but it just needs a little editing.
5. Your professional accomplishments isn't particularly 'professional' neither is it an accomplishment. I'd advise you take it out.

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