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i don show. Thanks bro alamiendagash

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m sowei boss next tym i'll remember to do dat.

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I dey here sar.

Dora left her apartment at 8:30am in the morning for her usual morning excersise, normally her excersise would commence around 6:30 but today was no ordinary day,she needed to solve the mystery at hand and she needed not to be afraid of the light of the day.

she jogged passed an article shop and stopped.

Madam I want to buy a knife

which type, I get dem plenty oo,dagger, kitchen knife....ooo,which one. the article vendor replied.

can I see all of them? Dora asked

OK na,let me bring dem, she brought out the knives and Dora bought one to avoid suspicion.
If a big article vendor like this can't sell this knife then who else can,she said in thought

madam you wan buy anything again?.the airtcle vendor's voice snapped her out of her thoughts.

no........ good day

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Nichole walked towards the estate gate and looked back to see if anyone is following her,when she saw no one she quickly composed herself to avoid suspicion from the estate guards. She wondered where she would go to since she had no friends in lost city. just then she saw a Lady jogging towards her direction,she quickly recognized her,she was the lady detective her father hired for her step mom's murder case.At least I might get myself a friend in this city, she said in thoughts and called out to her.

Dora looked up to see someone calling her, she tried to ignore but the lady calling was familiar.... she tried to place her face but just couldn't, so she jogged towards another direction. few minutes she turned to see the same Lady running to catch up with her, it doesn't look like she was stalking her,then there must be something so important she wants with her. she stopped and waited for Nichole to get to her and speak. But was disappointed when she stood there telling her she wants to be her friend. Today is a waste she said in thoughts,

Can I walk you home please? Nichole asked

no you can't ,how old are you ?,19,20. go home girl momma would be worried

I am 19 but am no longer a little girl, she said

and who gave you that impression kid....

am no little because Am a Williams, she replied.

yes...... I said it,the rude ass of the Williams, where are your guards, don't tell me you sneaked out, come am taking you home, Dora said, dragging her with her ear.

Let me go please, she freed herself and almost ran into a speeding car,she fell due to shock.

you see what am saying kid,come along let's get you cleaned up, she said walking away

OK.....am coming
*******************

she assisted Nichole in removing her shorts which were partially covered in mud when she felt something sharp hit her, jezzzz the chronicles she exclaimed and looked at Nichole.

what us it, lady Dora it's just a knife,Nichole said

young lady its a boning knife,how come its in your possession?, she asked

I bought it abroad, she replied nonchalantly

this kind of knife is actually connected to your step momma's murder,since you are in possession if a type also,you might be the murderer

no.....please, you are a detective, you should know better it's coincidence, Nichole said

let's go home,I would interrogate every member of your family, it seems the murderer is within the family

can today get any worst? Nichole asked herself

Like I've known... Ts nicholes mother at work

thanks fr the invite Ma'am. nice story u got here.ride on

********** continuation********

Dora droved into the Williams building, she looked at Nichole who had no expression on her face, how can a supposed murderer be so calm, she wondered and sighed. The Williams family was really a bunch of mysteries.

Get down kid, we are here now,she said

OK...., can I get my knife please?, Nichole asked surprising Dora.

look here young lady, do you know what you are in for? you are a supposed murderer, I should be arresting your sorry ass.

it hasn't been proved Dora.... Nichole replied.

I would take care of that, Dora said with irritation.

where are you coming from?.a voice asked

mom,am sorry i just had to do something,she replied not looking at the direction of the voice

who is your mother,the voice replied.

that should be dad,or kester, she turned to see her grandma June, the devil has arrived

grandma when did you arrive?

is it your business, who is she? grandma asked referring to Dora

the Lady dad hired for the murder case, she replied bluntly,she came for questioning

then call everyone
*******

grandma June is a heavily built woman who derives joy in pok- nosing into people's affairs, she rules like a dictator and has also extended it to her son's home,little wonder Daniel Williams always has one business deal or another to seal whenever she is around

good morning sir Williams, Dora greeted

good morning miss makamora

I came to ask your family some questions regarding the murder of Lady Jane.

OK go on,

sir, where were you as at the time the murder was reported?

in my house,he replied

what about Nichole and lady Melissa....

we were here together, to teach this ill mannered daughter of mine some morals,why all these questions.

the murder of Lady Jane was a very brutal one and her murderer was not smart.

how did you know the murderer was a" her".Melissa asked.

you all would agree with me that the first weapon of a woman is a knife,and a knife was driven deep into her heart,if the assailant was a man he would remove the knife quickly for her to die so fast,but the knife was left,which means the assailant was remorseful after the deed was done and could not save her or she was blinded by rage. the scene if the murder was covered with drip blood and footprints instead of splash blood. which means the deceased was standing and she might also had a conversation or a combat with her assailant. she fought for her life.A woman would have stabbed her directly in the stomach and not in the heart,this shows her assailant was not very mentally stable, or was hypnotised

hmmmm how do we link this to you questioning us.

the knife used was a special knife, a boning knife, from the Peruvian group of knives.

so.....? kester asked

I found a similar knife with Nichole here

Nichole .....they chorused

how come?....Melissa asked I don't believe it

I believe it, she looks like one not mentally stable,grandma June said


mom,you can't say that,sir Williams said

shut up Daniel, never speak when am speaking, understood?

yes ma.sir Williams answered

Nichole say something, Melissa urged

Nichole looked at everyone like a slowpoke and ran upstairs

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Present, sir

M suspect in mellisa or madam June ...a own take thou.

ohhh my god....Nichole what did you do,you knew about this case and you had such under your possession, are you dump or something??. Melissa barked

mom....how was I expected to know about the knife,I thought it was all about a normal kitchen or orange knife,how could I know there are other people... in Nigeria who knew about the Peruvian knife,Nichole defended.

it's your business, you are now a prime suspect, could Jane not just die on her own and atleast rest in peace.. Melissa said

mom...you hate her that much.....am beginning to suspect you mom.

suspect all you want....

she looked at her mom with mixed emotions, no......mom could not have done this, I swear I know the culprit, yes....I swear but am I really sure? she asked herself.

*******"***
I have a search warrant for miss Nichole Williams, come out now I want to search your properties. Dora said

move aside, see don't toil with my things they are pretty expensive, you know,Nichole said calmly

there is something about this girl, Dora thought to her self.she got into the room and she gasped at what she saw. the room was a description of a perfect shrine,black bed spreads, curtains tiles and a little touch of dark green,she put on the lights and sighed in relief, she looked under the bed nothing, looked into the closet and brought a black bag,as she was about opening the bag, her eyes caught a notice on top one of the metal boxes,she went towards it, looked around and smiled she read the notice again and again " dangerous ways". she looked for any lock,or password but there was none,she was surprised and at the same time curious to know what was in the box,she opened it and saw papers, she looked closely and began to remove then one after the other,then she saw them,in different sizes and shapes,she saw the fins,majors,hunting and she saw it the Peruvian. who was this girl,a knife maker or a police agent attached to criminology, she got up and turned to go back to the sitting room lifting the metal box, but she remembered the bag.she dropped the metal box and picked up the bag,she opened it and saw irrelevant papers and books.looks like this lady has no diary, then something fell of the bag,she looked at it but was surprised at wat she saw a foreign identity card,
Nichole kelvin Williams,a professional hit man for the boson squad south Africa, so she was an assassin, criminal, terrorist name it,she was not legal,she looked up to see Nichole looking at her with a smile

thanks

So Nichole b assassin Neva saw dat komin

I hope this is a beautiful story just like your smile?

Okiajnr:
I hope this is a beautiful story just like your smile?

I think it would be, and for my smile you would get a lot of it

seems as if Am watching American film.... glued to ma fone next pls

StellamarisIII:

I think it would be, and for my smile you would get a lot of it

Anticipating

Wow, young lady you are good. Am still expecting the rest of the story, Keep it up especially thats smile

StellamarisIII:
Can you please take me to her corpse,detective Dora asked the mortuary attendant.

Yes MA, come with me. he replied

OK thanks.

They walked through different rooms until the came to a room ,she looked up at the inscription on the door which read, " We were once like you and soon you would be like us". she quickly muttered God forbid,the mortuary attendant looked at her and smiled, it wasn't his first time of seeing someone do that here,but the truth was no matter how you try to deny it. it was the truth.

he knocked and open the door, detective Dora looked around but found out that the room was empty with only the corpse of Jane Smith in it.

We had to move her here on the demands of sir Daniel Williams, since he thought you might not really have much time.the attendant said when he saw the confusion on her face.

OK,she replied, she looked st the wound she died from everyone knows it was a knife but there was something peculiar about that wound,she couldn't have stabbed herself with a knife and the wound would be like that, it was a wound inflicted by so much force, meaning the deceased had try to fight for her life.so it was a murder, she concluded and she vowed to find the murderer but first she would go to the police station to see the knife that was removed from her heart.

OK,I would be back, she said to the attendant who was amused that she has been staring at the dead woman's body since she came.

****************

good afternoon officer, can I see your d.p.o,he is expecting me,she told the men at the counter

this madam fine sha, see backside chai......... the first officer at the counter said to the other officer.

oya make we delay am,the other suggested.

madam oga no de,the first police replied

show me the way to his office,she demanded

I say e no de. he fired back

I am detective Dora makamora

ohhhh na you, you for just talk na,go that side the other door, he pointed

thank you

eeh anything for the boys

Nice1 bro but few observations....we must learn to be better dan nollyhood. Der re few errors here.....
1. U said she was poisoned but how come knife wound again
2. D D.P. O re not usually in charge of a prisoner or inmates its usually d Chief warder ....after any court proceedings d mata is out of police but remanded in prison custody....



Nice one ...

jidxin:

Nice1 bro but few observations....we must learn to be better dan nollyhood. Der re few errors here.....
1. U said she was poisoned but how come knife wound again
2. D D.P. O re not usually in charge of a prisoner or inmates its usually d Chief warder ....after any court proceedings d mata is out of police but remanded in prison custody....



Nice one ...

thanks, I really didn't notice, its a mistake I made since I don't like writing a rough copy of my work.

I really appreciate, but am not a " bro"

I thought I told you never to toil with my things,Nichole said smiling

what are these doing in your possession? Dora asked her

its actually none of your business, she fired back, can I have my things

I should arrest you, Nichole, why did you kill lady Jane Smith

Doranda makamora am I right? she asked smiling when she noticed she got her thinking

I asked you a question Nichole,she said trying to mask her surprise

I killed her yes....but not with a knife,

so how did you kill her? Dora asked confused

with my hatred for her,I loved her but she didn't reciprocate, her love was only for kester, kester thought it was the incident of theft and accusations that drove her away, it was my hatred.

she could have loved you, but you didn't see it, how could she have the same love for you as she did for her son...., you were her step daughter.... not her biological daughter

I was her biological daughter, Nichole blurted

ho.....w do you mean? Dora asked

come.....Dora mom Melissa would answer it,Nichole replied

Dora sighed,how could she continue with this case,now that someone knew her that much in Nigeria, it would be risky, I cant be exposed now,I would bring in detective Xavier into the case, she concluded

**********

lady Melissa, is Nichole actually your biological daughter? Dora asked

yes she is the love child of Daniel and Melissa, grandma June replied

I was not asking you, ma June, she said suspecting both grandma June and Melissa had something to hide

yes.....she is, I bore her


how can you bear me mom,when you didn't bear kester....don't you know we are twins....ohhhh I get the nurse lied to you I was already a day old,Nichole said smiling while kester and Sir Williams looked confused.

what are you talking about Nichole,Melissa asked

stop the pretence mom,who is the suspect!!!!!

9ce storyline. Bt i still feel d lot of revelations dat came out, were so sudden. There were less suspense, and i bet u, if u had taken ur time, we wld have had more pages dan these. However, dis a 9ce job. Keep it up.

StellamarisIII:



thanks, I really didn't notice, its a mistake I made since I don't like writing a rough copy of my work.

I really appreciate, but am not a " bro"

oh im sowie sis

vakjay08:
9ce storyline. Bt i still feel d lot of revelations dat came out, were so sudden. There were less suspense, and i bet u, if u had taken ur time, we wld have had more pages dan these. However, dis a 9ce job. Keep it up.

I quite agree wit u except our assumption is only wrong nd has nothing to do wit her murder

jidxin:
I quite agree wit u except our assumption is only wrong nd has nothing to do wit her murder

yeah dats right we cld not guess correctly.

vakjay08:
yeah dats right we cld not guess correctly.

the story is nor finished and I haven't disclosed anything about her murderer

josh005:
Wow, young lady you are good. Am still expecting the rest of the story, Keep it up especially thats smile

thanks young man,u would also get to smile

StellamarisIII:


the story is nor finished and I haven't disclosed anything about her murderer

Op u doing a 9c job just keep it up. We are ffg

vakjay08:
Op u doing a 9c job just keep it up. We are ffg

thanks all

hahahaha...........me kester Nicholas Williams a twin,dad, Lady.......Melissa he called sarcastically, why didn't you tell me that we had a film to make today,kester said

kester,please you have to believe me am saying the truth. Nichole cried

what's going on here?, Sir Williams asked

I would handle it son,sit down. grandma June said

why not shut up old witch, you always want to play the modern homemaker, when you see nothing but a modern home breaker. why are you this wicked?.kester asked

young man are you talking to me,son you sit and watch him.......

mom,sit down,Sir Williams said

son.......grandma June cried

I won't sit and let you disgrace me before a stranger.mom, its OK. Sir Williams ordered

A murder case has turned into family drama,I really need to leave this place.Sir Williams I would go look for some clues now.Dora said trying to escape the eyes if her new enemies kester and Nichole. she was not comfortable with the way kester has been staring at her.

Wait detective,!! he called out just when she got to the door.

what is it,? Sir kester, she asked politely trying to hide her anger

these. .. two,(he said pointing at Nichole and Melissa.) has something to say,maybe you might get more clues from them.he concluded stressing the word clues.

OK I would wait, she replied defeated.

I would unveil what you are hiding detective, he vowed.
excuse me...he said and walked out.

**""""*"""""
Get as much information about Dora makamora

the detective Lady?... the reciver asked

yes.....everything


OK boss, am on it.

he cut the call and smiled here was the power of money, he smiled to himself, few weeks back he had little to eat but now.... he was been addressed as a boss

Kester turned boss hw?