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Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 5:43pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
Dark, distant, Ice cold fire. Fastidious, punctilious, very zealous. Infuriating, exacting, but very compelling. Kiss me with the kisses of your lips, For your love is sweeter than red wine Maybe, maybe not, see if it will grow Or if it will rot... |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Nobody: 5:55pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
Ishilove: |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Nobody: 6:00pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
Ishilove: ☣ ☠ ∆ Okay. ∆ ☣ ☠
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Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:10pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
oyb: |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Nobody: 6:12pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
Ishilove: You know I'm referring to the thing that grows when you kiss a guy, right?? Don't mind the uncoth philistine weeing all of over your haiku |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:14pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
oyb:You, sir, need to repent and give your life to Jesus |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Nobody: 6:19pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
Ishilove: Wetin, is it not love that grows again? |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:30pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
oyb:Love between a man's legs? |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by chrisley(m): 6:44pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
Ishilove: Now you're getting me all teased up Close your eyes and picture you in my warm embrace kiss your neck slowly and bite your ears Touch the right spots at the right time Get your body all tensed and yearning Make you wet till you start drippin Take you to an ecstasy witout poppin ecstasy pill I nid your body all sweaty and drippy on mine Let's see if you can handle the strokes of a genius 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:47pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
chrisley:Oh dear... I can't compete with this |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by chrisley(m): 7:34pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
Ishilove: They said you are Nairalands' ironlady I thought you're rugged in all spheres of life But now you're seemingly frigid in bedmatics Dick fright now gat the best of you Ordinary this my petty unpoetic freestyle and you're trembling.. Supposing it was the likes of the poetic postmann, tsom or badbradley that spit theirs to moist your thighs... You go run leave your thread be that 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 8:57pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
chrisley:TSOM is not a poet |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by TSOM(m): 9:14pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
Ishilove: "TSÔM is not a [clear-cut] poet." ...On the pages of Nairaland. But his every comment has a tinge of poetic spice. Surprised folks still visit this SubSection. Gone are its 2014 glory days. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 9:41pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
TSOM:I never knew this section had any glory days post-2011 |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by TSOM(m): 9:54pm On Jun 08, 2018 |
Ishilove:It can't be that bad. It had a resurgence (if you call it that) in the later stages of 2013 and most parts of 2014. I know 'cause I visited and was sometimes involved, especially at the height of several rivalries here amongst folks like Firestár and others. |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Nobody: 5:44am On Jun 09, 2018 |
Ishilove: you are ignorant and i will educate you |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by J2381: 6:23am On Jun 09, 2018 |
Ishilove:yep it did, when I, the greatest poet in Nairaland, graced this subsection with my pen-is... |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by postmann: 11:53pm On Jun 09, 2018 |
chrisley: A familiar sound viberates from a mile, Drumsticks beat in their usual style They call to me in their pleasant rhythm Provoking my senses, compelling me to dream. Pulled like a metal in a magnetic field, My feet follow my heart's lead, To the call of this dance, Echoing from a great distance. Memories rise like a ghost called to heaven, Bursting through thick clouds of events forgotten... 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 4:51am On Jun 10, 2018 |
postmann:Chrisley, clean lyrics 1 Like |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by chrisley(m): 10:58am On Jun 10, 2018 |
Ishilove: I may not be the one to say the right words.. but I'm definately a guy that hits the cookie right Bury my head between your thighs and make you rumble between the sheets, eat you up and.. damn! My pen is vicious and my emotions hysterical.. my style is toxic but I'd rather sail on the shores of decency Now tell me Ishi what will it take for one to stroke your itchy hollow chambers.. just buy you kilishi? 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by armadeo(m): 11:31am On Jun 10, 2018 |
I don't get poetry. At all. Rhythmically applied poetry yes but all this Shakespearean type of talk tires me out. |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by J2381: 2:18pm On Jun 10, 2018 |
armadeo:what don't you get about poetry? |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:26pm On Jun 10, 2018 |
armadeo:You must be a scientist. Na dem no dey understand poetry |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:27pm On Jun 10, 2018 |
chrisley:Kilishi ko, shikili ni. Gerrarahere! |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by armadeo(m): 9:57pm On Jun 10, 2018 |
J2381: To be frank let's take this thread for example I don't understand anything written by the poet's. I known that are poems but I don't get it. Maybe in am shallow. Is ishilove talking about a potential love interest or death. It's not clear to me. |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by armadeo(m): 9:58pm On Jun 10, 2018 |
Ishilove: I am |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 11:39pm On Jun 10, 2018 |
armadeo:.
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Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 11:40pm On Jun 10, 2018 |
armadeo:Medical sciences...am I right or am I right? |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 11:46pm On Jun 10, 2018 |
Armadeo, darling, poetry is about painting images with rhyme and rhythm. Words are to us what stethoscopes are to doctors. The secret of understanding poetry is reading it not merely with your eyes but also with your mind. You let the words wash over you, open your mind and let our imagination do the visualisation. Poetry is more compact than prose. It tells a story in shorter time and as such no single word is a waste. One verse is an equivalent of several paragraphs of narration so read with your mind and imagination, not your eyes. With this in mind, reread the poem and discover if it is detailing a potential love interest, or death |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by armadeo(m): 4:34pm On Jun 12, 2018 |
Ishilove: Honestly I am literally literal. ( if that makes sense). The words I read hold no more meaning than they do at first glance. From what I can see it seems it's a potential love interest that may or may not be. Depends. But the love is dark and distant and described in other words that may represent an entity beyond human hence I said death particularly with the kisses. I still don't understand. Gives up..... Explain. Modified. I told you that guy was strolling around the hood. Pls ignore 1 Like |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 5:42pm On Jun 12, 2018 |
armadeo:QED. Now was that so difficult? It's simple if you don't read with your eyes... I reported him and subsequently the mods dragged him back to the psychiatric ward he escaped from 1 Like |
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 5:43pm On Jun 12, 2018 |
Ishilove:Armadeo, I can see you deliberately ignored this... |
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