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Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 5:43pm On Jun 08
Dark, distant,

Ice cold fire.

Fastidious, punctilious, very zealous.

Infuriating, exacting, but very compelling.

Kiss me with the kisses of your lips,

For your love is sweeter than red wine grin grin

Maybe, maybe not, see if it will grow

Or if it will rot...
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Nobody: 5:55pm On Jun 08
Ishilove:
Dark, distant,


Maybe, maybe not, see if it will grow




kiss kiss kiss
Re: Fuzzy Spot by OrestesDante(m): 6:00pm On Jun 08
Ishilove:
Dark, distant,

Ice cold fire.

Fastidious, punctilious, very zealous.

Infuriating, exacting, but very compelling.

Kiss me with the kisses of your lips,

For your love is sweeter than red wine grin grin

Maybe, maybe not, see if it will grow

Or if it will rot...






☣ ☠


Okay.


☣ ☠

Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:10pm On Jun 08
oyb:


kiss kiss kiss
grin grin kiss
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Nobody: 6:12pm On Jun 08
Ishilove:

grin grin kiss

You know I'm referring to the thing that grows when you kiss a guy, right?? wink

Don't mind the uncoth philistine weeing all of over your haiku grin
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:14pm On Jun 08
oyb:


You know I'm referring to the thing that grows when you kiss a guy, right?? wink

Don't mind the uncoth philistine weeing all of over your haiku grin
You, sir, need to repent and give your life to Jesus angry
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Nobody: 6:19pm On Jun 08
Ishilove:

You, sir, need to repent and give your life to Jesus angry

Wetin, is it not love that grows again?
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:30pm On Jun 08
oyb:


Wetin, is it not love that grows again?




Love between a man's legs?
Re: Fuzzy Spot by chrisley(m): 6:44pm On Jun 08
Ishilove:
Dark, distant,

Ice cold fire.

Fastidious, punctilious, very zealous.

Infuriating, exacting, but very compelling.

Kiss me with the kisses of your lips,

For your love is sweeter than red wine grin grin

Maybe, maybe not, see if it will grow

Or if it will rot...




Now you're getting me all teased up

Close your eyes and picture you in my warm embrace

kiss your neck slowly and bite your ears

Touch the right spots at the right time

Get your body all tensed and yearning

Make you wet till you start drippin

Take you to an ecstasy witout poppin ecstasy pill

I nid your body all sweaty and drippy on mine

Let's see if you can handle the strokes of a genius

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Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:47pm On Jun 08
chrisley:



Now you're getting me all teased up

Close your eyes and picture you in my warm embrace

kiss your neck slowly and bite your ears

Touch the right spots at the right time

Get your body all tensed and yearning

Make you wet till you start drippin

Take you to an ecstasy witout poppin ecstasy pill

I nid your body all sweaty and drippy on mine

Let's see if you can handle the strokes of a genius
Oh dear... embarassed embarassed

I can't compete with this cheesy
Re: Fuzzy Spot by chrisley(m): 7:34pm On Jun 08
Ishilove:

Oh dear... embarassed embarassed

I can't compete with this cheesy


They said you are Nairalands' ironlady

I thought you're rugged in all spheres of life

But now you're seemingly frigid in bedmatics

Dick fright now gat the best of you shocked




Ordinary this my petty unpoetic freestyle and you're trembling..

Supposing it was the likes of the poetic postmann, tsom or badbradley that spit theirs to moist your thighs... You go run leave your thread be that grin

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Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 8:57pm On Jun 08
chrisley:



They said you are Nairalands' ironlady

I thought you're dogged in all spheres

But now you're seemingly frigid in bedmatics

Dick fright now gat the best of you shocked




Ordinary this my petty freestyle and you're trembling

Supposing it was the likes of the poetic postmann, tsom or badbradley that spit theirs to moist your thighs... You go run leave your thread be that grin

TSOM is not a poet grin
Re: Fuzzy Spot by TSOM(m): 9:14pm On Jun 08
Ishilove:

TSO.M is not a poet grin

"TSÔM is not a [clear-cut] poet." ...On the pages of Nairaland. But his every comment has a tinge of poetic spice. wink

Surprised folks still visit this SubSection. Gone are its 2014 glory days.

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Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 9:41pm On Jun 08
TSOM:


"TSÔM is not a [clear-cut] poet." ...On the pages of Nairaland. But his every comment has a tinge of poetic spice. wink

Surprised folks still visit this SubSection. Gone are its 2014 glory days.
I never knew this section had any glory days post-2011
Re: Fuzzy Spot by TSOM(m): 9:54pm On Jun 08
Ishilove:

I never knew this section had any glory days post-2011
It can't be that bad.

It had a resurgence (if you call it that) in the later stages of 2013 and most parts of 2014.

I know 'cause I visited and was sometimes involved, especially at the height of several rivalries here amongst folks like Firestár and others.
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Nobody: 5:44am On Jun 09
Ishilove:

Love between a man's legs?

you are ignorant and i will educate you smiley kiss
Re: Fuzzy Spot by J2381: 6:23am On Jun 09
Ishilove:

I never knew this section had any glory days post-2011
yep it did, when I, the greatest poet in Nairaland, graced this subsection with my pen-is... grin
Re: Fuzzy Spot by postmann: 11:53pm On Jun 09
chrisley:



They said you are Nairalands' ironlady

I thought you're dogged in all spheres

But now you're seemingly frigid in bedmatics

Dick fright now gat the best of you shocked




Ordinary this my petty freestyle and you're trembling

Supposing it was the likes of the poetic postmann, tsom or badbradley that spit theirs to moist your thighs... You go run leave your thread be that grin




A familiar sound viberates from a mile,
Drumsticks beat in their usual style
They call to me in their pleasant rhythm
Provoking my senses, compelling me to dream.
Pulled like a metal in a magnetic field,
My feet follow my heart's lead,
To the call of this dance,
Echoing from a great distance.
Memories rise like a ghost called to heaven,
Bursting through thick clouds of events forgotten...

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Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 4:51am On Jun 10
postmann:




A familiar sound viberates from a mile,
Drumsticks beat in their usual style
They call to me in their pleasant rhythm
Provoking my senses, compelling me to dream.
Pulled like a metal in a magnetic field,
My feet follow my heart's lead,
To the call of this dance,
Echoing from a great distance.
Memories rise like a ghost called to heaven,
Bursting through thick clouds of events forgotten...



Chrisley, clean lyrics cheesy

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Re: Fuzzy Spot by chrisley(m): 10:58am On Jun 10
Ishilove:

Chrisley, clean lyrics cheesy

I may not be the one to say the right words.. but I'm definately a guy that hits the cookie right

Bury my head between your thighs and make you rumble between the sheets, eat you up and.. damn! My pen is vicious and my emotions hysterical.. my style is toxic but I'd rather sail on the shores of decency

Now tell me Ishi what will it take for one to stroke your itchy hollow chambers.. just buy you kilishi? wink

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Re: Fuzzy Spot by armadeo(m): 11:31am On Jun 10
I don't get poetry.

At all.

Rhythmically applied poetry yes but all this Shakespearean type of talk tires me out.
Re: Fuzzy Spot by J2381: 2:18pm On Jun 10
armadeo:
I don't get poetry.

At all.

Rhythmically applied poetry yes but all this Shakespearean type of talk tires me out.
what don't you get about poetry?
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:26pm On Jun 10
armadeo:
I don't get poetry.

At all.

Rhythmically applied poetry yes but all this Shakespearean type of talk tires me out.
You must be a scientist. Na dem no dey understand poetry
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 6:27pm On Jun 10
chrisley:


I may not be the one to say the right words.. but I'm definately a guy that hits the cookie right

Bury my head between your thighs and make you rumble between the sheets, caress and.. damn! My pen is vicious and my emotions hysterical.. but I'd rather sail on the shores of decency

Now tell me Ishi what will it take for one to stroke that itchy hollow chambers.. just buy you kilishi? wink
Kilishi ko, shikili ni. Gerrarahere! cheesy
Re: Fuzzy Spot by armadeo(m): 9:57pm On Jun 10
J2381:
what don't you get about poetry?

To be frank let's take this thread for example I don't understand anything written by the poet's.

I known that are poems but I don't get it. Maybe in am shallow. embarassed embarassed embarassed

Is ishilove talking about a potential love interest or death. It's not clear to me.
Re: Fuzzy Spot by armadeo(m): 9:58pm On Jun 10
Ishilove:

You must be a scientist. Na dem no dey understand poetry

I am
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 11:39pm On Jun 10
armadeo:


To be frank let's take this thread for example I don't understand anything written by the poet's.

I known that are poems but I don't get it. Maybe in am shallow. embarassed embarassed embarassed

Is ishilove talking about a potential love interest or death. It's not clear to me.
.

Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 11:40pm On Jun 10
armadeo:


I am
Medical sciences...am I right or am I right? cheesy
Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 11:46pm On Jun 10
Armadeo, darling, poetry is about painting images with rhyme and rhythm. Words are to us what stethoscopes are to doctors. The secret of understanding poetry is reading it not merely with your eyes but also with your mind. You let the words wash over you, open your mind and let our imagination do the visualisation.

Poetry is more compact than prose. It tells a story in shorter time and as such no single word is a waste. One verse is an equivalent of several paragraphs of narration so read with your mind and imagination, not your eyes. kiss kiss

With this in mind, reread the poem and discover if it is detailing a potential love interest, or death smiley
Re: Fuzzy Spot by armadeo(m): 4:34pm On Jun 12
Ishilove:
Armadeo, darling, poetry is about painting images with rhyme and rhythm. Words are to us what stethoscopes are to doctors. The secret of understanding poetry is reading it not merely with your eyes but also with your mind. You let the words wash over you, open your mind and let our imagination do the visualisation.

Poetry is more compact than prose. It tells a story in shorter time and as such no single word is a waste. One verse is an equivalent of several paragraphs of narration so read with your mind and imagination, not your eyes. kiss kiss

With this in mind, reread the poem and discover if it is detailing a potential love interest, or death smiley

Honestly I am literally literal. ( if that makes sense). The words I read hold no more meaning than they do at first glance.

From what I can see it seems it's a potential love interest that may or may not be. Depends.

But the love is dark and distant and described in other words that may represent an entity beyond human hence I said death particularly with the kisses.

I still don't understand.

Gives up.....


Explain.


Modified.

I told you that guy was strolling around the hood. Pls ignore

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Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 5:42pm On Jun 12
armadeo:


Honestly I am literally literal. ( if that makes sense). The words I read hold no more meaning than they do at first glance.

From what I can see it seems it's a potential love interest that may or may not be. Depends.

But the love is dark and distant and described in other words that may represent an entity beyond human hence I said death particularly with the kisses.

I still don't understand.

Gives up.....


Explain.
QED. Now was that so difficult? It's simple if you don't read with your eyes... smiley kiss


Modified.

I told you that guy was strolling around the hood. Pls ignore
I reported him and subsequently the mods dragged him back to the psychiatric ward he escaped from grin

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Re: Fuzzy Spot by Ishilove: 5:43pm On Jun 12
Ishilove:

Medical sciences...am I right or am I right? cheesy
Armadeo, I can see you deliberately ignored this... wink grin

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