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Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 8:43am On Jun 08, 2019
UyaiIncomparabl:
No. You cannot. The story is not intriguing enough.
You have started... Write your own... Over ripe pawpawundecided
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by yungbanks(m): 9:08am On Jun 08, 2019
Abeg no cut am like that make it longer pls oooo am glued here
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 10:48am On Jun 08, 2019
yungbanks:
Abeg no cut am like that make it longer pls oooo am glued here
the Main Story Is Coming Soon
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by Adaibeku(f): 1:29pm On Jun 08, 2019
IamPlato:
8:15pm

Tonight was the cross over, the sound of knock outs can be heard in the distance and at close range as well. Jane was in the front yard playing as lights shinned brightly in the compound; luckily the power company had decided they enjoyed the light for the night because they might not be so luck tomorrow. Jane was sitting down and reading through a picture book, her mother is seated on a chair with attention on her phone; Wale walked to Jane and whispered to her

“My dad left his car open, let’s go and drive it” he said, Jane smiled and quickly left with him without her mother noticing

They both got to the car, he opened the back door and they both entered the car; the light in the compound brightened the inside of the car then suddenly the lights all went out and darkness over thrones

“Nepa have take light” she said

Don’t worry they will bring it back” he said and held her close and slowly he started rubbing her thigh again as his hand travelled to her pant, she jerked lightly

“Stop” she said

“Sorry” he immediately said

“Let me show you something” he said as he unzipped his trouser and pulled out his private part

“What is that” she asked

“Let me show you something, you will like it” he said then started opening her legs

“Stop... my mummy will talk” she complained

“Wait... they will not know na” he said as he continued with pulling her pant but she struggled

“Leave me alone” she said but he applied more force and suddenly the car door opened and someone pulled Wale into dark forcefully; Jane became afraid as she looked around in the dark and adjusted her pant. Wale’s head was slammed against the wall and blood from his head stained the wall; Jane is silent with eyes wide open and suddenly she is startled by the shattering of the car door’s glass, Wale’s head was slammed against the glass as blood spilled on Jane’s face. She screamed out as she opened the other door and ran off screaming... Nepa restored the light; people can be heard screaming “UP NEPA!” as Wale’s dead body hung from the car’s door...

“Why did you do it?” Eniola was angry

“He wanted to rape her” Eric said

“That was never part of your mission” she said loudly

“You want me to watch him rape the little girl” Eric said

“Don’t watch! Walk away”

“You will be punished” Eniola said and drew out her wipe, Eric laid flat on his stomach without a word, Eniola raised her wipe but hesitates, she puts down her hand slowly

“Rise” she said

“Thank you Grand ma” he said as he got up

“Don’t thank me just yet, I will still punish you” she said; he sat on the floor thinking, she stared at him for some seconds then walked over and sat beside him, she looked at the clock it was 9:30pm

“You are the future leader of the Tribe of Kane... You must learn to turn your eyes from certain things... but I understand that you are caught between Gods” she said and he looked at her as he didn’t understand her last statement

“I will tell you the last part of the story then you go for your last kill” she said and he nodded lightly

“Until 4000 years ago Yahweh broke the rule but it got worse because after the Rebellion of Yahweh’s celestial (Lucifer), millions of Yahweh’s Celestials trespassed into the northern expansion and causing havoc, forcing Kanedara to kill them all.

Kanedara later discovered that Yahweh his brother had broken the RULE OF MAN, he then requested that Yahweh allowed him have his own share of man but Yahweh was in disagreement, Kane then threatened to summon the attention of their father, this prompted Yahweh and Kanedara to go into battle. Before the battle Yahweh began seeing reasons why he should never have made men as his father had instructed; the evil of men had increased but then Yahweh was able to find a man and his family, a man who gave him hope that man could be better; this man’s name was Noah. Yahweh instructed Noah to build an ark and stay in it with his family while he ended the rest of the human race. Yahweh then created the great flood, he created this flood for two reasons: To deceive his brother that he had ended the human race entirely and secondly to stop man from noticing the universe was at war just in case his brother didn’t fall for the deception.

Kanedara had come for war but Yahweh showed him that he had ended the human race, Kanedara saw through the deception and this prompted the war... their incredible power levels destroyed the biggest and most beautiful planet Jupiter leaving this planet full of liquid fire and a Hurricane known as the Nova Hurricane, scientists call it THE RED SPOT... it also froze up Pluto and made it very unstable and it became the waste land of the most malevolent elemental spirits; all other planets were affected except earth which Yahweh had protected seriously and is still protecting to this day... he protected the earth so much because he didn’t want the same destruction that happened during the rebellion of Lucifer to repeat itself because he knew it was going to be worse this time.

Yahweh managed to subdue Kanedara and imprisoned him in what was known as the Cosmic force but Kanedara’s consciousness escaped the cosmic force without Yaweh knowing. And on the day the entity Christ was born Kanedara planted his seeds in seven women of specially chosen nationalities and this led to our birth today... the prophecy holds that one day Kanedara would be freed from the Cosmic force and his full powers will be restored unto him” she ended; Eric was silent as he thought

“What is it?” she asked

“What if Yahweh ends us” he asked

“(smiles) He wouldn’t” she said

“Why are you so sure”

“He loves his brother” she replied...

11:30pm

People crowded the compound as Wale’s lifeless body laid on the floor with blood stain all over, side talks everywhere in the compound, Wale’s mother crying bitterly, his father talking with police officers. Nobody knew what really happened because even Jane could not give enough detailed explanation about the incident; she sat beside her mother who held her close. They had searched the compound and found nothing

“I am very sorry about this incident” Mr Ogene said to Wale’s father Mr Ayo

“Stay away from me” Mr Ayo said in anger

“Calm down” a police man said

“We are entering a new year soon, we cannot allow this ruin us” Mr Ogene said

“Your daughter killed my son and you have the guts to talk this rubbish to me” he said angrily

“Don’t you ever say that... how will you say my little girl killed your son?” Mr Ogene got angrily

“You are very mad” Mr Ayo said approaching Mr Ogene but the police held him back as they argued; people gathered to calm them down

“It’s okay” a police man said

“Look at this idiot! Coming to talk about New Year with me” Mr Ayo said

“You are very stupid! How do you think my daughter would kill your son” Mr Ogene replied; the neighbours separated them and Mr Ogene walked away; his phone then rings, he walked away as he picked the call

“Hello?”

“Hello?” he said moving to the back yard to get network; the lights suddenly goes out again and there was darkness; Mr Ogene had his eyes to his phone

“Funny how the things we do come back haunting us” Eric said sitting on the fence, Ogene turned to see him but couldn’t see his face just blue eyes that glowed

“Who are you?” Ogene asked, Eric came down from the fence

“I saved your daughter from getting raped from that little animal; unfortunately there was no one to save my mother when an animal like you and your friends raped her”

“What... Who are you?” Ogene’s eyes widened in disbelieve

“I am your past” he said moving closer to Ogene who was looking scared

“Please stop” he said

“Did you listen to her cry when you shot her head open?” Eric asked, Ogene obviously remembered

“Oh my God... You... You are...” he couldn’t complete it as Eric stared into his eyes

“Eric Kane” He moved swiftly and stabbed him with the spear under the jaw piercing out from the top of his head with blood gushing out from under the jaw and blood flowing down from the head, he pulled out the spear and the body dropped to the ground. Eric looked to his right to see Jane standing and staring at him and suddenly there was a loud thunder clap followed by a heavy rain; quite unusual for rain to fall on this day.

Jane and Eric stared at each other, both soaked in the rain... blood and water dripping from the tip of the spear, thick lightening brightened the view in seconds as they both stare each other in the eyes... blood from Ogene’s corpse mixed with water flowed towards Jane’s feet as they still stared at each other; another lightening bright their faces then the third lightening flash revealed that Eric had vanished... Jane still in the rain all soaked then the rain makes a sudden stop

“Happy New year!!!” the shouts can be heard in the distance; heavy fire works were fired into the night sky; Jane stood still looking at the blood on the floor- for strange reasons she didn’t scream... what something was definitely going through her mind...

The Birth

Of

Eric Kane
kudos ...dis ur story looks true than
Just mare story
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by Adaibeku(f): 1:32pm On Jun 08, 2019
UyaiIncomparabl:
No. You cannot. The story is not intriguing enough.
U cant even lift a pen overipe paw paw
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 2:12pm On Jun 08, 2019
Adaibeku:
kudos ...dis ur story looks true than Just mare story
thanks grin
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 3:21pm On Jun 08, 2019
Eze2000:
Understood and you are welcome.

In all you do, remember, selling on okadabooks will being you money to buy more data only. On the other hand, Amazon will bring money to pay bulls and buy a car.


Good luck!
Can You Help Me Proof Read A Book?
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by Eze2000(m): 3:28pm On Jun 08, 2019
IamPlato:
Can You Help Me Proof Read A Book?
Nope, I am always so busy now. Anytime you see me on NL I am just resting or suffering from writer's block.

This is how you can do it. Google software that can read out words. I have forgotten the name but they are free. Download one, copy paste your work in and listen to the words read out to you. Wherever you hear a mistake pause and correct.
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 3:30pm On Jun 08, 2019
Eze2000:
Nope, I am always so busy now. Anytime you see me on NL I am just resting or suffering from writer's block.

This is how you can do it. Google software that can read out words. I have forgotten the name but they are free. Download one, copy paste your work in and listen to the words read out to you. Wherever you hear a mistake pause and correct.
okay Thanks. Is It Available On Tabs
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by Eze2000(m): 3:32pm On Jun 08, 2019
UyaiIncomparabl:
No. You cannot. The story is not intriguing enough.
What would be your idea of a good story
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by Eze2000(m): 3:38pm On Jun 08, 2019
IamPlato:
okay Thanks. Is It Available On Tabs
Tab uses apps. Find the one that is an apps. Check first.

As for me, I use Grammarly and ginger checker. I proofread my work myself right in the ginger check so I can restructure the whole if need be.
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 6:16pm On Jun 08, 2019
Eze2000:
Tab uses apps. Find the one that is an apps. Check first.

As for me, I use Grammarly and ginger checker. I proofread my work myself right in the ginger check so I can restructure the whole if need be.
thanks I Found One i Just Downloaded It
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by Eze2000(m): 6:54pm On Jun 08, 2019
IamPlato:
thanks I Found One i Just Downloaded It
You are most welcome, my dear.
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 7:48am On Jun 09, 2019
Eze2000:
You are most welcome, my dear.
Good Morning Sir. I Still Need Your Help On That Amazon Stuff, can I Chat You Up On Whatsapp
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by Eze2000(m): 7:59am On Jun 09, 2019
IamPlato:
Good Morning Sir. I Still Need Your Help On That Amazon Stuff, can I Chat You Up On Whatsapp
Ok, have you got my number?
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 1:22pm On Jun 09, 2019
Eze2000:
Ok, have you got my number?
No...
Re: The Birth Of Eric Kane (SHORT STORY) by IamPlato(op): 10:13am On Jun 10, 2019
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