For The Pen - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| For The Pen by zanieike(op): 6:34pm On Oct 06, 2019 |
The pen is my best friend during my sad days It lets me pour down my thoughts It knows the rot in my saddened soul So it anchor my sanity like a captain Sailing to keep me from the Claws of depression With each word I write I feel alive Like a fish in this ocean of anguish Swimming to happiness ©zanieike |
| Re: For The Pen by scarphase(m): 7:16am On Nov 14, 2019 |
Nice!! I get turned on when through my actions and thoughts, the pen romances the paper! Nice poetry. You are not alone in the thoughts |
| Re: For The Pen by zanieike(op): 9:04pm On Nov 15, 2019 |
Thank you scarphase: |
| Re: For The Pen by noble4d(m): 6:45pm On Nov 30, 2019 |
zanieike:Good job bro but it'll be lovely if you structure your poem to be: 1 couplet, 1 quatrain and 1 tercet. There is a run on line in line 4,5,6 |
| Re: For The Pen by zanieike(op): 3:23pm On Dec 02, 2019 |
noble4d:ok. Thanks for the review. I appreciate |
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