Lilly4endu:
Am not really happy but still waiting for the resurrection of the people you killed OP.

Missmossy:
What a terrible way to die big ups Silver1996, now we know what really went down.

All the dead people would see themselves in the spirit world

Gbest90:
Wow. Such an amazing story. It was educative, comic, suspense filled e.t.c
Infact you are the bomb!

shakibell:
who killed Abigail


na frustration kill her

Ibroslank:
NEXT

JerryOJerry6429:
God bless you silver

Mavikolo2020:
Wow, another great one from you silver, I pray for you, may the works of your hands take you places,, as God liveth so you shall excel in every areas of your life.

Once again, thanks for this wonderful story

Debbylicious:
This was a great read, filled with lessons of life

I'm totally awed by your writing skills and your ability to always keep your readers at the edge of their seats and guessing their brains out

You really are a good writer, your good works will take you places way beyond your imagination in Jesus name

shakibell:
who killed Abigail


na frustration kill her

enekwesylvia:
Chai! she killed herself by herself o. Na so you for kill me join with suspence. Am in love with your stories. Thanks for this Silver, you are a great writer.

SperoEmpire:
DAY 4 / 90 DAYS

kelvincoke:
this is wonderful, so sorry I could not read and follow the story due to Ramadan... nice one from silver, keep it up cos u are going places very very soon.
from the storyline, I tot it was the criminal the police were chasing that killed Abigail not knowing she herself cos her death. it seems she was destined to die dt particular Monday cos assuming mark sex her with d TT drug, he fit kill Abigail but mark did not, also Rebecca tried her own part but did not succeed and left with annoyance, Lucas show for the play was not tempted and had to push Abigail off him whereby hitting her head on d wall but she no die, Jennifer con top Abigail 1000ways to die by continuously hitting Abigail head on d wooden table but death did not knock Abigail.
now imagine ordinary slipping of her leg cos her hitting her head on d wooden bed of mark and no one to rescue her, hench her death. my questions are, why did Lucas not reach his friends and confess to them since he is a preacher, why did Brian, mark, Jeffery did not reach mark also. but this a story that if really it happened, some area have been twisted.
Weldone silver, u are just doing well my brother.

Adekunlated:
In answer to your question, Lucas thought she died when he pushed her, he got scared and that's why he couldn't tell his friends to avoid going to jail.

Brian and Jeffery weren't there when she died and they tried their best in saving Mark, if you read well, they were the ones finding things relating to her death.

Silver1996:
Wetin I do na

skubido:



Asin ehn, the end bin amaze me.. cuz no expect ham ator

Ayemileto:
So, After running across this story yesterday night, I stayed up all night just to finish it.



Silver1996, Na work you do. Your story was very interesting.

honourable356:
I just finished reading this story...

Indeed I have to give you credit..
Your uncanny ability to make the story unpredictable kept your audience glue to it.

Yes! Yes I am impressed in that regard.

However they are loophole here and there.
Unquestionable scene here and there.
Let's look at a few;

1. The policemen... You should have known that the Nigerian police hardly the NO for an answer...Having been humiliated by the boys,the Nigerian police do not let thing like that slide... especially when they claim they were chasing a criminal...it doesn't add up.

2. The gateman no matter how sleepy can't just miss someone carrying a body..No matter how stupid he might be.

3. Abigail was naked throughout?
Who does that?
The three intruders met her naked, how?
It doesn't add up.

However I must commend your effort in creating something exceptionally brilliant in suspense.

It won't take you long to be come a giant in this field.

He nods in admiration,...

Best wishes!!!

Silver1996:
It's just a fiction sir, thanks for reading.....really appreciate

honourable356:
Fiction or not...make no mistake about this for the so called fiction would one day brings you unthinkable wealth and exceptional recognition.

Therefore give your all whenever you pick up that pen phone or laptop to put words and words together to create a story.

You will err continually but you will eventually get it right.

Work hard on your make belief aspect of your stories!




You are certainly not far from THEM!.

Keep up the good work.