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Re: by Kaycee9242(m): 5:22am On Jul 08, 2020
Tominix:
I got banned cry so sorry guys
U are welcome
Re: by becca2017(f): 10:24am On Jul 08, 2020
Tominix:
I got banned cry so sorry guys
Awww sorry
Re: by Tominix(op): 10:23am On Jul 09, 2020
Kaycee9242:
U are welcome
thanks, funny enof i got banned twice
Re: by Tominix(op): 10:25am On Jul 09, 2020
becca2017:
Awww sorry
Yeah, grin, this spam bot shit. is a pain in the ass cry
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Re: by Tominix(op): 10:25am On Jul 09, 2020
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Re: by Tominix(op): 10:56am On Jul 09, 2020
Episode 004
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they came to a open clearing panting widly and held on to a tree stump for support.
"whats was that" korede said with his eyes darting.
"who knows huh , he just took off like a mad dog" mayo said with contempt.
"hey!, i guess you are the mad one here" ike retorted.
"guys, we can't to start an arguement we are in middle of nowhere" david said with frequent gasps for air.
"thats right all thanks to him" david muttered.
just then they heard the scream again.
"hey guys over there" korede who has been silent all these while shouted and took off.
as soon as they stopped to rest saw a beam of light in the distance just then they noticed they were on a subway track.
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Treading with caution they walked on discarded bottles towards an open tunnel which seemed to look like is was abadoned for ages.
Suddenly they were startled by a whistle then a wide laughter.
then the lights flickered on revealing three masked men.

SORRY FOR THE SHORT UPDATE.
ONE MORE EPISODE TO END BOOK ONE.
_____STAY TUNED_____
Re: by Tominix(op):
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YEAH
updates already here
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Re: by becca2017(f): 11:45am On Jul 09, 2020
Nice one grin
Re: by Kaycee9242(m): 12:00pm On Jul 09, 2020
Thanks for d update op
Re: by PrudySara(f): 12:03pm On Jul 09, 2020
Thanks for the mention dear.. I'll grab a seat.
Tominix:
Iamgprince . Tunjilee003 . Khriztal . Rozz . Becca2017 . Skubido . Lilly4endu . Yungbanks . Kaycee9242 . Prudysara . Chimmyt Ann2012 . Bobosneh . Sensitivity1245 OYA OH
YEAH
Re: by Section1000: 2:56pm On Jul 09, 2020
[quote author=Tominix post=91536308][ Section1000

Thanks for the invite.
Re: by Section1000: 3:01pm On Jul 09, 2020
Bro, am not trying to downgrade your work. But, I observed that your work lacks setting and plot. I may be wrong though, due to the fact that I skimmed.
Re: by Tominix(op): 4:02pm On Jul 09, 2020
Section1000:
Bro, am not trying to downgrade your work. But, I observed that your work lacks setting and plot. I may be wrong though, due to the fact that I skimmed.
Yeah, am an amatuer writer. I need critic for me to improve smiley
Re: by Tominix(op):
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Re: by Tominix(op): 4:40pm On Jul 09, 2020
becca2017:
Nice one grin
Thanks tongue
Re: by Tominix(op): 4:40pm On Jul 09, 2020
Kaycee9242:
Thanks for d update op
u wellcome
Re: by Tominix(op): 4:42pm On Jul 09, 2020
PrudySara:
Thanks for the mention dear.. I'll grab a seat.
seat for front roll sha make i see ur face cheesy
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Re: by Tominix(op): 4:42pm On Jul 09, 2020
Section1000:
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u wellcome
Re: by Tominix(op): 4:44pm On Jul 09, 2020
Okay here is the deal am going to wrap book one quickly to plan ahead for two i just need your constructive and encouraging comments and critics then we are good to go
Re: by Tominix(op): 4:45pm On Jul 09, 2020
Iamgprince . Darexezekiel section1000 Tunjilee003 . Tallestbabe goldwaters Khriztal . Froze6 ifunaya01 Rozz . Whispero whizpero sussybabe Becca2017 . Skubido . Ironman007 mairirie Lilly4endu . Afrika4real sheba222 Yungbanks . Kaycee9242 . Prudysara . Chimmyt Ann2012 . Bobosneh . Sensitivity1245 tominixtominix tominix . Tominix . OYA OH
YEAH
updates already here
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Re: by Section1000: 6:16pm On Jul 09, 2020
Bro, your updates are very, very, very, very short...

I had to emphasize the very... Work on writing at least a thousand words per post
Re: by Tominix(op): 7:22pm On Jul 09, 2020
Section1000:
Bro, your updates are very, very, very, very short...

I had to emphasize the very... Work on writing at least a thousand words per post
Yeah, i had to charge my batt was low, will try bro. Pls criticize my work in order to make me improve
Re: by Section1000: 9:16pm On Jul 09, 2020
Tominix:
Yeah, i had to charge my batt was low, will try bro. Pls criticize my work in order to make me improve
Ok man. Lets do this wink
Re: by PrudySara(f): 11:45am On Jul 10, 2020
hope say enough space dey... I'm coming!
Tominix:
seat for front roll sha make i see ur face cheesy
Re: by Tominix(op): 11:08am On Jul 22, 2020
Iamgprince . Darexezekiel section1000 Tunjilee003 . Tallestbabe goldwaters Khriztal . Froze6 ifunaya01 Rozz . Whispero whizpero sussybabe Becca2017 . Skubido . Ironman007 mairirie Lilly4endu . Afrika4real sheba222 Yungbanks . Kaycee9242 . Prudysara . Chimmyt Ann2012 . Bobosneh . Sensitivity1245 tominixtominix tominix . Tominix . OYA OH
YEAH
guess what??, book two already out grab a seat and enjoy
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Re: by Tominix(op): 11:09am On Jul 22, 2020
PrudySara:
hope say enough space dey... I'm coming!
E dey plenty, like "lies" for nigeria
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