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Ciara9251:
mansakhalifa

Lol. Just that part . The story plot isn't that bad. I made sure of that so that everyone can read .

In other words, you tampered justice with mercy?

Please, try and do as we agreed. I know you forgot, but try not to forget next time.

Thank you.

[quote author=iLegendd post=97124833]Please, try and do as we agreed. I know you forgot, but try not to forget next time.

mansakhalifa:
In other words, you tampered justice with mercy?

mansakhalifa

You don't like the story?

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Ma'am, nice story you've got here. Keep up the good work....


You still have alot of work to do cause the story keeps jumping from one point to another, sometimes it's so hard to concentrate...

I initially came to blast the living hell out of you cause you've made me lose lots of important 'mentions' cause I couldn't keep scrolling down to see the same mention over and over and over again, it's irritating...


Please next time, when you wanna tag folks, once is enough.... No be only this thread dey NL, neither are you the only one tagging monikers on NL...


Anyway you managed to drag me back to this section after how many years.... Keep up the good work...

Not the tagging work ooooo, hmm.

Let me also add this......

Don't forget you stated that this is a short story, short story wan turn series ooooo

Therock5555:
Ma'am, nice story you've got here. Keep up the good work....


You still have alot of work to do cause the story keeps jumping from one point to another, sometimes it's so hard to concentrate...

I initially came to blast the living hell out of you cause you've made me lose lots of important 'mentions' cause I couldn't keep scrolling down to see the same mention over and over and over again, it's irritating...


Please next time, when you wanna tag folks, once is enough.... No be only this thread dey NL, neither are you the only one tagging monikers on NL...


Anyway you managed to drag me back to this section after how many years.... Keep up the good work...

Not the tagging work ooooo, hmm.

Guy you too dey write ooooo. I read your 'short read' on Ashawo thread.

Get publishing on Amazon, I can help you with keywords to enable your book sell.

Therock5555:
Ma'am, nice story you've got here. Keep up the good work....


You still have alot of work to do cause the story keeps jumping from one point to another, sometimes it's so hard to concentrate...

I initially came to blast the living hell out of you cause you've made me lose lots of important 'mentions' cause I couldn't keep scrolling down to see the same mention over and over and over again, it's irritating...


Please next time, when you wanna tag folks, once is enough.... No be only this thread dey NL, neither are you the only one tagging monikers on NL...


Anyway you managed to drag me back to this section after how many years.... Keep up the good work...

Not the tagging work ooooo, hmm.

Therock5555

I'm glad you came back to the section. Hope you have fun

Therock5555:
Let me also add this......

Don't forget you stated that this is a short story, short story wan turn series ooooo

Therock5555

The words are just 6k words. So if I could remember doing a research on short stories, the highest one can write is 7k. So thanks for your comment . I appreciate it.

A305:
Guy you too dey write ooooo. I read your 'short read' on Ashawo thread.

Get publishing on Amazon, I can help you with keywords to enable your book sell.

A305

And doesn't my story stand the chance of getting published on amazon, too?

Therock5555:
Let me also add this......

Don't forget you stated that this is a short story, short story wan turn series ooooo

Not a series ヽ(*⌒∇⌒*)ﾉ

LarrySun:
Keep it going.

Mr. Sun
OMG. This just made my day. Thank you, sir 乂❤‿❤乂乂❤‿❤乂乂❤‿❤乂

Ciara9251:
A305

And doesn't my story stand the chance of getting published on amazon, too?

why not?

The sky is very much wide for every bird on earth and the once yet unborn to fly. I just haven't read your story but, i do believe you need to have it published on Amazon as well to make money off it.

A305:
why not?

The sky is very much wide for every bird on earth and the once yet unborn to fly. I just haven't read your story but, i do believe you need to have it published on Amazon as well to make money off it.

Well, I just asked. You just jumped to his, like mine was invisible ... that's why I had to cut in. But anyway, thanks for putting a smile on my face

Ciara9251:
Well, I just asked. You just jumped to his, like mine was invisible ... that's why I had to cut in. But anyway, thanks for putting a smile on my face

So sorry for the intended oversight. I actually do follow 'therock' profile to have easily seen his post.

Get publishing on Amazon Miss, Lots of readership audience are waiting to buy your book.

A305:
Guy you too dey write ooooo. I read your 'short read' on Ashawo thread.

Get publishing on Amazon, I can help you with keywords to enable your book sell.

Baba, I for like publish some of my stories ooo, but right now I'm on a paper chase the small chinkini time wey come remain, I use am dey chase woman... So where I wan get time to write...

Even to edit my previous works sef na hell....

Anyway hailings mehn, let's leave ashawo tales for ashawo thread, that's my private abode

Ciara9251:
Therock5555

I'm glad you came back to the section. Hope you have fun

I don't intend on having fun, the window I use fall in, I go use am fall out also...

Ciara9251:
Therock5555

The words are just 6k words. So if I could remember doing a research on short stories, the highest one can write is 7k. So thanks for your comment . I appreciate it.

Don't get me wrong ma'am, what I'm trying to imply is that; when you indicate (short) story, most times the story should end in a post or two.... Not being dragged into multiple posts.

You're not giving the vibe of a short story again, its becoming more of a long story.

What I'm trying to say is that, if a mod want to move this story to FP and indicates 'short story', most readers would get bored as soon as they cross one page without seeing "The End"......

So its not just by words, short story is short story, go straight to the point and keep it that way...

Lemme look for one of my short story link for you...

Therock5555:
Baba, I for like publish some of my stories ooo, but right now I'm on a paper chase the small chinkini time wey come remain, I use am dey chase woman... So where I wan get time to write...

Even to edit my previous works sef na hell....

Anyway hailings mehn, let's leave ashawo tales for ashawo thread, that's my private abode

Haha, you funny bro.

I hail back boss. Anytime you get time (vacation or leave), you fit publish to make extra income.


And as regard chasing skirts, Nor be lie Baba. Without the existence of those daughters of Eve, wetin go be the drive to hustle na?

Hailings.

https://www.nairaland.com/3181324/how-pass-failed-test-short




Ciara9251 check this my short story ooo, see as I finish am within few posts abi.... Nobody dey go another page to continue....

A305:
Haha, you funny bro.

I hail back boss. Anytime you get time (vacation or leave), you fit publish to make extra income.


And as regard chasing skirts, Nor be lie Baba. Without the existence of those daughters of Eve, wetin go be the drive to hustle na?

Hailings.

No too loud am ooo, I no too dey chase skirts, na skirts dey chase me, Yuletide season don reach....

Now na them dey call dey ask how levels....

Therock5555:
No too loud am ooo, I no too dey chase skirts, na skirts dey chase me, Yuletide season don reach....

Now na them dey call dey ask how levels....

Mad cruise for you this season.

You are blessed this season. You be the rave of the moment. Pump and dump with protection before the premiership end.

A305:
Mad cruise for you this season.

You are blessed this season. You be the rave of the moment. Pump and dump with protection before the premiership end.

Haha haha, the only thing I'm gonna pump is my Aza, other things can wait

Or so I thought....

Ciara9251:
mansakhalifa

You don't like the story?

Never said I didn't, did I?

It's not really my genre but I read it(still reading in my free time) and it wasn't a bad read.

And I am speaking from a point of utmost honesty.

mansakhalifa:
Never said I didn't, did I?

It's not really my genre but I read it(still reading in my free time) and it wasn't a bad read.

And I am speaking from a point of utmost honesty.

Lol. Still reading in your free time? The story isn't even there, sir. I remember removing it... and leaving only the first part, because I still had to make some adjustments.

Therock5555:
https://www.nairaland.com/3181324/how-pass-failed-test-short




Ciara9251 check this my short story ooo, see as I finish am within few posts abi.... Nobody dey go another page to continue....

The words are 2K plus, so I dnt see how it's different from mine. By the way, that's a nice story you've got. May God bless the work of your hands.

And kiki, when I say it isn't different, note the irony.

Therock5555:
Let me also add this......

Don't forget you stated that this is a short story, short story wan turn series ooooo

And... you can call it a novelette, which I'm gonna correct when recreating the book cover. The story's actually shared into three parts. Don't worry, you won't get bored. Trust me.

Ciara9251:
Lol. Still reading in your free time? The story isn't even there, sir. I remember removing it... and leaving only the first part, because I still had to make some adjustments.

Still here.

I'm gonna be reading into the weekend.

No football practise for me tomorrow, so why not?

I see you're still putting in the work.

mansakhalifa:
Still here.

I'm gonna be reading into the weekend.

No football practise for me tomorrow, so why not?

I see you're still putting in the work.

I'm done writing, I just can't submit them now cause my android battery died three days ago, getting me stuck with the small one. Annoying, right?

Ciara9251:
I'm done writing, I just can't submit them now cause my android battery died three days ago, getting me stuck with the small one. Annoying, right?

Died how?

Is it those BEDC guys again?

mansakhalifa:
Died how?
Is it those BEDC guys again?

Oh, you bet.