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A nice, well structured short story. the theme was obvious but the inclusion of a sub theme is "un-short story like", the sub theme of love portrayed by the olaoyes, water down the powerful flow of fear, hatred and disgust lubricated by the marital unblissfulness, but it can pass as a connecting device of coherence. Your use of punctuation marks can be improved. |
here is a picture of one in awo |
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