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****continuation *****

"Damien!!! finish her ".Immediately damien heard dvoresky shouting aggressively. Immediately after hearing the Dvoresky voice,he was like he snapped out of a dream. he was still pointing the gun at the girl, his hands were still shaking.terrible darkness clouded is mind.
"I knew you were just a lucky coward, let me help you out ". Dvoresky said aggressively approaching the girl with is fangs widely seen. Has he was about to grab the girl, Damien in an involuntary way with is gun, shot dvoresky which sent him back with a mighty force with his back crashing against the wall immediately he passed out. Damien in a shock felt like he was dreaming. he looked at the gun in his hand and the girl and dvoresky laying on the floor dead. Suddenly he heard some footsteps approaching down the stairs. He though about what he could do. Instantly, he saw some hooded members coming out of the door about to charge at him with a predictable attack. Damien grabbed the young girl wrapped his hand around her in a protective way and move a few step back wards crashing his back against the glass window with a force, flying through the top floor window.He landed is back on the floor With the girl on his chest. A shocking pain went from is back to his stomach .Thanks to his supernatural physical durability he was able to survive the heavy fall. he grabbed the girl and they made a quick run till the skull fortress vanished from sight.Damien knew escaping from the fortress should be the least of their worries because Damien knew he has awoken the furry of the devil and hell is about to rain down on him .
Damien held the girl's arms has he walked in the cold night street in the human world cautiously at a very fast pace, not caring about the girl he was holding.words with scary thought came through his mind and he knew he was bleeped.am i day dreaming, he thought. The scene of how he shot dvoresky and how he escaped through window, kept On replaying in his mind, those scene hunt him staring a huge fear in his mind. While walking he saw a nearby woody Place beside the road afar. He quickly dragged the girl into the woods wish was a little land sloppy.He could hear the heavy panting of the little girl wish shows she was already tired. He stopped beside one of the trees in the wood .He let go the girls arm. All the scenes that happened in the skull fortress kept on replaying in his forehead, he put his both his hand on his forehead in distress and fear, a loud voice in his head began tormenting him with with words like , Damien what you gonna do now, you can't run forever you can't, you bleeped yourself and you gonna pay for your weakness. Damien screamed in frustration.All of a sudden he brought out his demon gun and point it at the girl's forehead with anger boiling deep down his throat. Damien looked at the frightened young girl with is gun pointed at his head. Immediately in an instance again he saw the faint vision of an angel with wings.The vision vanished instantly making Damien felt the feelings he has been running away from 12years ago, feelings of guilt and pity, he felt sick in is stomach has he stared at the young girl. What's wrong with me ? what's about this girl? He asked himself as he stared at her and find himself wondering why he kept seeing the visions.what scared him most his the protective feeling and instinct he has for the girl .Immediately he dropped his demon gun. he sat next to the girl in the wood feeling exhausted.He began thinking about what is next in his bleeped up life ,he knew he didn't only pissed off the order of chaos but the underworld as a whole and his most dangerous mentor of all the hell keeper.

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*** continuation ***

both were in walking through a deserted place they could spot an uncompleted building from afar. Damien activated is supernatural sight and senses. Behold the uncompleted building became a beautiful tall cathedral like building. The place was guided with with witches in black hood and syrinxs(known as angry ghost). the syrinxs were black figures like shadows with yellow eyes that glows in the dark.
"Wow this a well guided place. I hate syrinxs ". Dvoresky said.
"Now ,time for the plan". Damien said.
They left to a far corner where they can not be spotted from afar by the syrinxs vision. Damien brought out a keg full of human blood.he poured the blood on the ground by making a triangular sign .he dipped is hand in the keg and he drew some symbols at the centre of the triangle and finally he drew a crescent moon on top of the triangle. he started chanting some language and the crescent moon symbol glowed In a burning red. Slowly two hideous beastly creature one a pit bull like with a scorpion tail and a wolf with thorns all over it's body emerged slowly from the ground. Their fangs showing aggresively as they make a wicked grin as they growled In anger from the pit of hell .Their eyes were full glowing red like a torch in dark. They dashed forward aggressively but couldn't pass the triangular barrier.immediately to keep them quiet,Damien said some language .they became mute instantly. Damien said some language again and he pointed his hand over to the skull fortress building. Immediately the creatures bolted in a flash towards the building.
"so you understand the demon language ". dvoresky said
"do you wanna keep asking questions or take advantage of the distraction." Damien said pointing at the beast who are about to wreck havoc to the fronts guards.
Both of them ran after the beast . Until they watch as the beast cause a disorder Among the hooded guard and synrinxs In horror of tearing and slashing and ripping apart most guards. In other to maximize the damage Done to the beast as Damien saw they were a little out numbered. He brought is demon gun, At a long range he started firing at witches and synrix thrown off guard,with an accurate shot which left them dead or engulf in flames(synrix) . immediately they reach the front of the fortress were the beasts wrecked an havoc.Blood littered on the floor and dead bodies of witches. Damien saw the wounded beasts growling aggressively.
"now whats next". Dvoresky asked.
"the Trojan horse ". Damien said with a smile. He could here some noise in the building running towards them .quickly he said the demon language to the beasts. Immediately they busted through the front door. All that could be heard was screams of horror and the sound of the beasts barking and growling. Immediately Damien and dvoresky quickly dragged the two dead bodies into a corner in the building.they put on the hooded cloth in disguise as part of the fortress guard.
They entered Into the building. they saw as the witches were throwing magical hand flames at the beasts and beasts were retaliating by ripping them apart or slashing them with their claws. Every guards focused their attention on the beast.Damien and dvoresky took advantage of the situation and quickly climbed the stairs leading to a broad passage. Damien knew the beasts have a short period of time to survive all the attacks so they needed to act fast and take advantage of the distraction . As they were walking damien saw the vision of the girl instantly in a flash.he could sense the girl and he knew the direction to go.
"We turn right". Damien said
As they turned right to another broad passage.suddenly they saw Five hooded guards In red hoods with a huge door at their back.
one of them said to them "wait, what are you doing up here?you are not one of us are you?"
"oh boy this will be fun ".Immediately dvoresky said that .one of the hooded men threw a magical flames at him in a quick reflex he dodged. Damien in a quick alert brought out is two demon daggers and threw one at the neck of One the hooded men . Dvoresky manoeuvred is way with is super vampire speed by grabbing two of the hooded men by their neck and sinking is sharp claws in their throat leading to a blood splashing .damien in a quick pace slashed the other man's neck with is other dagger. While dvoresky sank is fangs in the neck of the other man , who fell dead immediately. They both stood at the middle of been surrounded by bloods and dead bodies.
"what a waste, I should be feasting on some witches blood, I think the little girl's blood will do ".dvoresky said showing is fangs angrily
Damien looked at the huge door and he began having a kind of intense feeling that send a chill in his spine.He knew the mission was behind the door.He shot his demon gun at the door knob.with dvoresky at his back he rammed his leg at the door, bursting it open wide. Alas Damien saw the little girl wrapped in the hands of a white haired woman.
"Damien Valde we have been expecting you". The white haired woman said,showing a portrait drawing of Damien valde In her hand.
Dvoresky smiled "look who is popular. anyway I can't wait to have a bite of that kid" he said revealing is fangs.
"Dvoresky stop" damien said. leaving dvoresky disappointed.
The woman stood up to Damien she began to take a closer step towards damien. Immediately damien pointed his gun towards the woman.
"one more step your head will be off , now tell me why you drew my portrait ". Damien said
"am already dead anyway, and about the portrait, she drew it. " she said pointing to the sitting girl behind her.
"you don't know what you are, do you Damien? and am sure you have been seeing visions of her too".she said in a Curious but pitiful way
"don't worry you will understand, but take care of her,now do what you have to do "she said. she took a step further with her eyes closed .
In an instance damien pulled his trigger , the whole room rocked with the sound of the bullet that went into the woman's head. Damien took a step forward to the girl whose face was expressed with shock and fear.suddenly flashes of blurry images began to run through is mind .As he began taken a step closer to the girl, a huge guilty conscience began to surge up in his mind. What's wrong with you Damien you have not come this far to feel this way, not this time is just a mere human, just pull the trigger.his thought became a ghost that hunt him. Damien walk straight to the girl with his gun pointing at her.Suddenly his hands were shaking.he began to see flashes of blur figure with a white robe who as wings.

damien and dverosky set out for their mission to the skull fortress in the human world . The whole atmosphere so cold .human walking about their business and vanities along the streets.After reaching a lonely corner, dvoresky with is wicked grin saw some children playing he stared at them .
"i feel thirsty already ". showing is fang.
Immediately Damien gave him a disapproving look
"we are here for a mission remember, we don't want to make some unnecessary announcement. "Damien said.
"Damien I always wonder what so special why the keeper Chose you."Dvoresky said with a jealous tone as they walk .
"you have a problem with that take it up with keeper in hell and don't you come in my way in this mission cause I may put you down. " Damien said coldly walking past him.

Immediately dvoresky touched Damien by the shoulder to grab him, in a reflex Damien turn around with his demon gun pointing on his head.
"you gonna kill me, really? you know who my father his".dvoresky said with a smile.
"I know but I don't care ,I only answer to the keeper and if you are blocking my mission for the keeper I will put you down".Damien said with Is gun still pointing to dvoresky head.
In a slow tone dvoresky said. "you know Damien you shouldn't be worry about me, you should be worried about yourself"."I saw your face when you chickened out when you saw your mission at the altar an am sure my dad saw it. "dvoresky said with a curious look on his face.
"I don't care what you and your father saw all I will tell you is this,don't stand in my way".Damien said
"OK I won't. lets get on with the mission boss".dvoresky said with is two hands up in a comical way.
As they were both walking. Damien knew what dvoresky said was right about him at the altar but he was not ready to accept it .not now, not during this mission. He was prepared for this. That was what he thought.

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**continuation ****

Damien arrived at club dooms day.A disguise club for the order of chaos fortress, where supernaturals as witches vampires werewolves and types meet and commit atrocities and debauchery even humans who had connections with the underworld do come to have fun, drugs dealings and other illegally activities in the human world. while others came for the fun of the sense of danger. Music filling the air and dancers performing erotic dances to the crowd.vampires sucking blood directly from a life human and witches performing all sort of entertaining magic.The whole atmosphere was filled with mixture of fun and danger.
Damien entered,and he greeted some acquaintances and he went to a certain door where two body guards were at the front,immediately they saw him, they paved way.He opened the door and entered an elevator which took him down .And he walked into a dark passage filled with dead silence where witches wearing dark hooded robe stood in opposite sides wish creeps damien a little . He reach a door along the passage.
He opened the door.he saw black hooded people forming a large circle. They were chanting some ancient language in a rising and falling tune and at the centre of the circle stood an altar .which on top of the altar was a scared looking man tied on a cross with chains , beside the altar was a sliver haired man with a pale white face and two women with cold faces and tattoos on their cheeks.
Immediately the white haired man raised is two hands up an all the chanting came into an halt .The two tattooed faced women moved closer slowly to the edge of the altar with both their hands stretched straight forward . saying some magical incantations. All of a sudden a Powerful wind like a hurricane erupted from the altar.The cross started levitating till It stand vertically and forming a perfect crucifix. Then the silver hair man, stepped closer to the cross and pointed is hand towards the scared and horrified look man's chest .his hand magically entered into the man's chest like passing through a wind. The face of the chained man lighted up in an horrific way .suddenly, the chained man skin starts to lacerate which different symbols starting to appear on his bodyand blood gushing out of the lacerating symbols. The chained man screamed in horror.
The two tattooed faced women continued their chanting this time in a higher tone and wind around the start to roar loud like a thunder storm . The chained man eyes changed to a glowing green color and his voice roared like a lion roar . "why have you summoned me."the new voice of the chained man said.
Immediately the silver haired man replied."mighty belziah we have come to you to help us deliver a message to the keeper .
"what message ". Belziah responded in calm but a roaring voice that frighten's.
"tell the hell keeper we are ready for our next mission ".he said.
"I will ". He spoke with an evil grin.
Afterwards the glowing eyes of the chained man came to normal and blood gushing out of is eyes like tears and blood dripping out of the carved symbols in body.He screamed in horror and he later bowed is head and gave up the ghost.
The rites ended and every members went their ways.The silver haired man came towards damien with the tattoos faced women accompanying him .He gave damien a hug . "Damien Valde the man of the moment,how was the mission ? ".He asked with a smile.

Damien brought out the soul box containing the poor monk's soul.valdin face lit up instantly collecting the box carefully from damien's hand with a slight caress and given it a delicate look. "now it's time to call the hell keeper for the next mission". valdin said .
"can I ask a question ?".damien asked.
"speak up my friend".valdin replied
"all this years all I do is hunt and kill supernaturals who try causing any trouble or rivalry to the order,all of a sudden humans start popping up as my targets.Am a little curious ".
Valdin responded with a cold smile "the hell keeper works in a mysterious way ".All of a sudden the smile of the silver haired Vampire changed into a cold killer face. "it's not in our place to question him, he has a bigger plan for us all".
Damien stared at the 500year old vampire in silence.A tall bald hefty vampire came into their midst .he called "father ".
Valdin looked to his left. "ah, dvoresky. Have you prepared the altar ".
"yes father ".dvoresky replied staring at Damien with a malicious glance . Damien wasn't surprised by the look, the feeling was mutual.They both knew they never liked each other.
"Now damien lead us to the altar". Valdin said by making an hand gesture towards the altar .

Damien passed their middle towards the altar and they all followed. Damien moved closer to the altar thinking of what is next mission would be. One of the two tattooed faced women drew a pentagram with a powdery whitish substance on the altar.The women began their chanting .Slowly a thick dark smoke came out of the pentagram and suddenly the pentagram engulfed in Yellow flames .A dark shadowy figure like a mirage came out at the centre of flamed pentagram so dark but blurry with silent hoarse and whispers,slowly as he formed a dark hood figure. Immediately damien brought out is hand in the cold dead silent atmosphere .He dipped Is hand slowly into the figure with is eyes closed .Suddenly flashes of images start to show until a certain image of a young girl With a dark hair within the age range of seven to ten remained static In his vision.In a shock damien brought out his hand from the mirage figure.In an instance the mirage figure dissappeard . Valdin touched damien softly by the back .
"can you show me your mission ? "valdin said curiously.
Damien brought out his hand. Valdin placed his own hand on top of damien's palm and he closed his eyes with a smile.
"Hmmmm a fresh blood female human.The keeper really works in a mysterious way ".he said still smiling with eyes closed.
he took out his hands from Damien's .And he put is hands on Damien's side face and he gazed at his face as if he was starring at his soul.He asked."Damien Valde are you ready to serve the hell keeper with all your soul".
Damien said with a cold voice. "till every pieces of bones in my body and with all good my soul".
"good thats why you and dvoresky are going to be assigned this time ". he said turning away.
"But why ?".damien asked.
"you have no idea where you are going do you? " .valdin said In a serious tone but a smiling face
"the skull fortress".damien said.
"you are right but you have no idea. The skull fortress is not a joking place, many supernaturals have made a lot of attempts to Invade the fortress.but their bones were buried their. Thats why you need an helping hand."and no more questions". he said in an authoritative way.
"tomorrow you and dvoresky should prepare for your mission". Valdin walked away.

some suspicious questions ran through Damien's mind .why a partner now? after all this missions he has been doing for the order of chaos alone .Aside from the fact he doesn't like dvoresky . Dvoresky is a fucking psychopath a vampire who take enjoyment in killing is pray slowly which may slowdown the mission alongside him. But the greatest question Damien as been avoiding but keeps popping in his thought was the picture of the innocent looking girl. A guilt striked him as he saw the image of her at the altar. Why this little girl?.No room for pity,not now,the keeper as a bigger plan for us. Is not in our place to question him. Who dares question the keeper? at least that's what he tells himself always to make himself feel better all this years not knowing those words won't work anymore.

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damien valde walk through the street of the underworld In the middle of the evening filled with dark energy .With a sense of danger and brutality ,a cold wind blew on is face, sending a little chill in is spine . A strange thought crept into is mind about the mission he just did in a temple in the human world.In which he just put a hole in the face of a monk with is demon gun and later extracting his soul.A little bit of guilt wobbled into his thought which lead to a lot of questions in his mind.After all this years of killing and hunting only supernaturals ,why a human monk ? What does the keeper want from a monk's soul? Immediately he shutted out his thought out. It's not in is place to ask questions, after all this years of being the order of chaos hitman.All he have to do is focus on his next mission for the order.In his world, no room for guilt.

After the evening long walk from the mission, damien decided to branch at voodoo house to sell an artifact he took during his bloodbath mission in the Buddah temple before going to the order of chaos to deliver Is mission outcome.
He opened the door of voodoo house.It was a room decorated with bones and teeth tied on string to the ceiling dangling in the air and flowers and herbs of different colours at every corners of the rooms which gave a weird sense of smell with the whole place radiating with both light and darkness.Different shelves filled with bottles and jars and some containing artifacts with different creepy looks ,thereby making the room look a little bit occupied and creepy.At the Centre of the room there sat a table containing candles of colors with a human skull at the centre and a chair. sitting upon the chair was a beautiful blonde woman with an olive eyes the candles made her face glow in an angelic and demonic way.As damien entered he sat on the opposite side of the table, placing the artifact on the table and the other soul box on the table with is hand on it.
"damien valde". She called."every time you walk through that door i always feel the presence of death In here",she said with a mischievous wicked Smile on her face.
Those word struck damien a little, because he knew most people in the underworld knew Of his reputation as a butcher, but he quickly cut in ."I want to sell this ", pointing at the artifact which he dropped on the table.
"Really i thought you came to see my pretty face" She said in a flirtatious way.
"Annabell" he said ."I don't have time for chit chat, do you wanna buy or you don't".
"Ok , mr Cranky" She said with a frown."you know the drill, i have to test It". Immediately She grabbed the artifact with her left hand, she closed her eyes, a magical glowing green light appeared on her hand which is still holding the artifact.
"Hmmm, a lot of magical energy on this one".she said with her eyes close smiling."Where did you say you got this ".
"non of your business".he said.
she looked into damien's handsome face with straight jaw with his dark hair admirably.
She asked."how much does it cost ".
"same has the last one take it or leave it".he said with the no worrying look in his eyes.
"Ok we have a deal,what about this other box? ".Has she was about to touch the soul box , in a quick reflex damien caught her hand with a powerful grip making his coat sleeve Slide revealing his tattoo below the wrist.
" mind your business".He said coldly.
"easy tiger am a lady you know".she said with a smile, all of a sudden she glanced at the tattoo with a little bit of a shock look on her face wish later changed into a quick mischievous smile , "hmmm nice tat by the way".she said.
In an instance damien dropped her hand and adjust his sleeves back to cover the tattoo and he stood up with the soul box in his hand.
He said changing the topic ."I will be taken my leave and am expecting my payment soon ".
He opened the door and continued is journey to deliver the soul box to the order. on his way out, a cautionary thought came into his mind about the way anabelle responded about the tattoo in his hand which made him remembered what the keeper said when he had the tattoo on his body ."do not show anyone". Could anabelle be a threat he thought? well, since when does the underworld not a threat to its leaving habitat. And since when does danger scares him ,beside he his an assassin, danger is his job and he has the most powerful order at his backing, at least thats what he thought.