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Cyberrex:
sanyababa



it's looking nice, at least someone woke d story up



but try to stick with d initial storyline, can't wait to read d crazy imagination


hadampson
stephengee12
meneski
souloho19
cyber5

it don continue oo

Thanks bro I appreciate didn't I get the storyline right?

Make una no crucify me oh
Cyberrex
Apollux
StevenGee12
Mhizgap
Arripotta
Bibijay

Update Alert!!
Kindly note I am not a writer, I have never written any story in my life this will be my first attempt.
Criticism is allowed
Souloho19
Meneski and all other writers I sight you all, ghost readers una well done oh


Location
Saint Francis hospital LA

Mrs Meredith Nathan stirred awake, she has been in a coma for a week, her eyes opened slowly she had no idea where she was or why she was on life support.
A nurse walked in to check her vitals, "it's good to see you are awake"
She tried to speak but nothing sound came out
"just relax, I will fetch the doctor now"
Doctor sanchez was just about to bite into his sandwich when the nurse rushed in
"good evening doctor Sanchez, the patient in the ICU is awake"
For the third time he rewraped his sandwich and rushed to the ICU.
"good evening ma'am, how are you feeling?"
"wa... Wat... water" she wispered
The nurse rushed out to get some
"you have been in a coma for a week now, you had a deep cut on the side of your head and suffered from multiple concussions"
"where am i" she wispered
"you are at St Francis hospital, you were brought in by a strange man dressed like a ninja"
" do you remember anything at all? Like your name, social security number, next of kin?"
Then it hit her "she can't remember anything including her name"
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Location
William's safe house in LA

Anderson was lost in thought, how did he get here? He lost his parent when he was just three years old, he can't even remember what they look like, an accident he was told. He grew up in foster homes before he was adopted by an amazing man Mr craig Nathan who cherished him and loved him like his own, he grew up under the watchful eyes of Mr and Mrs Nathan.
Mr Nathan was a police officer in the 21st princinct California, he was a great cop highly respected and decorated. He taught Anderson about hand to hand combat, critical thinking and profiling, that was where he had developed the passion for law enforcement. He had been a straight A student from college. Oh college! Where he met the most beautiful and selfless woman he had ever known Meredith Turner.
He remembered their first kiss, a sheepish smile playing on his face, he had taken her out on their third date, a picnic at the Edmonton river front, it was so romantic. He put in all the works chocolate and cheese cake for dessert lasagna her favorite for the main dish; 1945 pino arelio red wine and some white roses. It was one of the best days in his entire life, the dimpled smile on her face, the pitch of her laughter and that kiss, oh my! He had an out of body experience.
Fastforward three years later he had married her, had graduated as a rookie agent in the CIA life couldn't be any better. Anderson was so good at his job that he moved up the ranks quickly, his mastery of combat and use of weapons were second to none.
Two beautiful daughters later he got an offer he couldn't refuse to head an arm of the Strategic And Tactical Advanced Network, his life went downhill from then on, he hardly had time for his family, was never there for his daughters, cheated on his wife though the first was for a mission Diana Ross but he couldn't stop afterwards.
He was roused by Angela stirred in her sleep and muttered "mummy I love you" he was broken, he looked at her face a splitting image of his wife. When Angela was born he was in Vietnam undercover for three years, he didn't know if Samantha would even recognise him. He vowed right there that he will do everything in his power to ensure his family is safe even if it means losing his life. He dialled Meredith again for the umpteenth time and still got her voicemail and he smashed his phone on the wall.
"I need to get out of here" he said to himself.
He went to the basement to used streetwise'computer but he could break the security he put in place. He looked around and smiled at all the gadgets in place "William is crazy but right now he's all I have"
He and William had met on a mission in England he was supposed to infiltrate a kidnapping kingpin's villa and bust his operation, William was there before him and he watched as he silently killed Stankov. Happy that his mission is almost done, he was about to copy Stankov's hard drive when he felt a gun to his head the rest is history, although they are not always on the same side Anderson secretly admired William and the way he runs his operations even the CIA don't have some of the gadgets he has seen with William. His mind flashed to his wife again and he hoped she hasn't been killed or else nothing will stop him from slowly killing Trump and his entire generation.

This is amazing!! Respect to all the writers that have contributed I haven't been able to stop reading since yesterday well done. I will be posting an update to soften the story and enable our ladies put in their update too

Meneski Expect and update this night or tomorrow morning