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Nice rhymes, chi, but it looks kinda weak

chiogo:


Bitch-ass think am a 'ho??
Interesting, I must say considerin' u ain't never seen a pussy-hole
pretty diss line

Now don't mistake me for Lil' Kim, I don't tell u to suck my d!ck
I make it easy for ya:'kiss my ass', yeah uz an aspiring freak
nice one too

Now whatchu call that kind@ rap?? rappin' under the influence?? haha
I'mma borrow a naija slang on that one 'na wa'
lol

Ya name rhymes with 'joke' but ain't got no fuckin' sense of humor
Chiogo say a word, folks crackin' up like they got brain tumor
tht's HT

I ain't make u but i sure can put u asunder
Ain't gon touch u Cuz u already feel like murder
Sure, yo ass ain't never been drunk but u feelin' sober
tite

At 15, in the 11th grade, am regarded as a top dog
I leave my under-dogs to instruct u, duty #1:go make me a hot dog
where'd ya get that from?? lol, cool

that was iite cept for the repetitive use of words, it mars lyns.

bolajibaok:
same day same night /d virgin chiogo bout to be deflowered n disvirgined all at d same time
unnecessary repetition, btw why do u use that line ei' time(it don't matter that it's recycled?

goodness gracious/i checked her bakassi/ the young 'ho' isnt wearing gstrings/ neither undies nor draws/
worst of all /she got 2 fresh pussys /eats 5 gay diicks n swallowed 10 saggy balls /
i think this is bollocks!

chiogo is a brand new pussi who's about to get bleeped /lunch dinner n brunch all in one night
why do u use that line ei' time(it don't matter that it's recycled?

heard your an highly rated nairaland battle rap cheek/ that is why you are referred to as the lesbian queen/
bolaji broke is a lion king /you is an inexperienced lion cub who wouldnt get no wins
cool relation, no punches though

ama eat u like u vegetable /when i spit ma raw vulgar punches/ let me see if d ass wiggling chiogo is well n able/
make your white husband menike peep in and run away like a cue ball chasing the black off a pool table/
cool relation, no punches though

chiogo is like a blind girl playing chess with a grandmaster/ how the Bleep is planet venus going to beat serena
u beat me is an impossible wedding arranged by d english queen/ like prince charles gettin married to a dead diana
nice one

i havent even finished bustin/chiogo is now bleeding profusely in menstral pains/ if this is what yall call murda inc
then your writing pads are like chiogos' sanitary pads/ it will 'always' have no ink
nice one too

to be honest, this ain't 16 bars, it's 32 if u go through it. It was tiresome and burdensome to go through but I managed to get some few things to hold on to.

This was hard but i gots say my vote goes to chiogo. Here's ma reason below

content & relevance - chiogo
presentation- chiogo
punchline-bolajibaok
delivery- chiogo
rhymes- chiogo
wordsplay- bolajibaok
metaphor- bolajibaok
disses - chiogo

@ nxtbts
learn how to spell

@shame(sharn), learn how to spell

Time for knock knucle jokes
hi Lil miss ugly pussi
how come u going to spoil ma lunch by flashin ya face on ma scream
ya mom must have had ya at night because ya face can't even beat my azz on a beauty contest
infact u is so ugly ama call ma azz PRINCE CHARMING
u beta flee because am abut to show u how strong ma love-vendor hand is
ama squish ya like a hummin bee
now get on ya knee and beg 4 mercy
oh i 4 got ma privates is stuck in ya mouth

u ain't got no rhymes, just played lines, u got them from ya mum?

Man i can't do this shyt,y'll are babies
SOme oNE,AnY ONe get me a real head,

(because my lycris ride wit the sun
if y'll look closely at da stars,y'll would see moa
Yes!! the big shiner pointer edge one
i slay Top kats on the mic,leavin em dead wit their mouth open
the different between me & u is:ya bribe ya way into da club
baby i buy the club, )

now kip shut before i smach u wit ma wallet,

what M.T wallet?
ya babies tryin to be the ace but the king is back,


and plz stop leavin copy copy notes prayin i read em on my screem aight!!!

my screem, damn freshie ass

now go hide ya face like LAGBAJA, lmfao

I pity whoever gave you 50Naira to go browse, you spent his money unwisely
[quote][/quote]Well, I only got two lines for ya,
when u steal better lines, come back, Freshie!

Hi Jessy, what u up to?

bolajibaok:
@bad temper
why do u always have (0) posts. zero . hmmm ?

ain't that what I was asking spottie the other day and you was busy talking trash? Even yours has been static, everyone's post number has been static for a while now. Mine shows 404 on ma post but i check the 'your posts' thingy on the top row and I see 769

worldbest:
Y'all know yourselves

Pops a gay?Yea heard that before,we on
same level cus same street says ya mom is da cheapest hallot
lyrically spice you with hot bullets
decorate you with pus*sy acid and make ya smell like public toilets
Am a rap weapon with unlimited armour
gotta make ya suck ya pops di*ck and turn a HIV habour
like luda,Am a bed room gangster,di*ck-driftin' on ya chick with ma prick
she says she hate ya and prefers a 12 inch stick
am ma spit out to correct y'all,for the fact
that i gat flaps isnt enof to bliv am dull in the rap act
stop preachin' and get ready to taste ma devilish remedy
slice ya and mayonaise ya like naija breadii9(BREAD)
2nd son of God i rule the rap region
2much hoe rappers in Nairalan.d(nairaland)yea y'all ma next mission
i babysit ya with tough hands
breast feed ya with uppercuts till ya jaw bends
get ready and sit tight,we on a journey till the world ends
Monster on Mic?Na he just a loser on Bike
Heard? "a war with worldbest is like a death from malaria strike"
The legendary rap newborn eat ma damn lyrical outline
your style is outmoded and programmatically null in da lyrical pipeline
Go do sometin else cus rap?!u no fit
talk pass yaself and find ya sory ass in a 6fts pit

y'all heard!!!

Ah,

Why is ieverybody going training?
_{Not me though!}

Alexpissu:
I-Shine nice thread .
Check this

My heart turned cold african culture took you away/
who do i blame? is it the gods of Ewe/
my whole life empty like the wilderness/
vows running in my bloodstream causing sadness/
first time we met u look like angel from the fairy tale/
my antenna was stationed my lips were pale/
She comforted me with apples i need no pharoah's/
call her god of beauty voice charms em like arrows/
Great minds think alike hold u like my mic/
Promise not to change my skin colour like Mike/
Riches without you is vanity pleased when u by myside/
Under ya shadow i found comfort why would i slide/
am frightened of 2morrow i might lose you/
u sence d danger too please dress in colour blue/
Should have given you the wedding ring/
our genotype is the issue your papa taught of the offspring/

The word is pronounced 'u' not 'ewe'

CHIOGO-
strenght - 
1. unarguably one of the flyest spitting females in nairaland, young fly female hov. Ranks in the TOP 3 illest females
true
2. chiogo's creative rhymes and style way outclass the likes of little kim, remy ma, foxy, eve. nicki minaj etc
v. true
3. took the males emcees ages to recognise her ish. nurtured by menike . she loves menike like crazy
err, she'd answer that
4. she flows with menike (murda incorporated). chiogo flows like when styles p flows with little kim( hot damn remix)
you should see that
5. Too many female fans , loved so much by two of the flyest female spitters ever e.g sharn, ajadrage, etc
'ajadrage is a guy, Bola'
Yup, Chi's ma sis
6. Raps better than most nigerian female rappers e.g sasha, blaise, kemistry, bouqui etc
Over-true
7. may surprise many by coming out tops and hard against a notorious  battle giant in the class of bolaji-broke
'what class? Nursery?'
She's dope, bruv!
8. Extremely colourful female known to post her raps with beautiful rainbow colors with flashy looks.(blue&green)
Blue, most especially

weakness-
1. Never been in a one on one battle with any nairaland female or a male mc.
Erm, that's something she's going to have to change
2. soft lyrics .will need a lotta gangsta flows ,punchlines and wordsplay to beat bolaji-broke
Mayb, maybe not
3. strong on collabos with a murda inc battle giant , could be vulnerable battle rapping alone and going solo
Hmmmmmmmn
4. sensitive to disses, emotional on disses, reacts strongly to male opposition and bitchy attitude by nairaland males
Especially the poster, innit?
5. this is her first battle rap match in nairaland history. not too experienced, fairly unknown on the rap battle scene
For now
6. occassionally comes online mostly at night living room for her peers to reply her quickly
What's that gotta do w this?

BOLAJI-BROKE
strenght-
1. Nairaland most creative personality ever -  won the 2007 nairaland award for the most creative thread ever
Fluke!
2. Number one nairaland celebrity. Has threads dedicated to him! Has a lot online buddies who would die for him
Celebrity? Dash?
3. Battle rap giant, been to battles and rolled with the biggest, illest, toughest most respected nairaland mcs
Maybe
4. Thrives and survives very well in the midst of multiple beefs and insults, survives under pressure and oppositions
A true statement
5. High class punchlines, unbelieveable wordsplays. Host of 2007 nairaland battle rap world cup.
Yup, though the Cup never ended
6. Strong but weak personality. known to make friends as quickly and as much as he makes enemies
No, he makes enemies faster, lol
7. been to multiples rap battles in star wars scores to settle , known for creative namesplays and freestyles
Ironically true
8. Got extremely popular in music request threads . known to have a huge battle rap computer database
and 'copyed'
9. unarguably the most popular nairalander to date. has fans and hate-fans fighting because of him.
not fighting because of him, fighting him

weaknesses
1. Once hated by multitude but loved by a choosen few fans who could die for him.
All lies
2. Almost got beaten by po-deep , but quarrel has been settled after alexpissu's '' lets squash beef thread ''
Almost?
3. Not known to rhyme -flows unrappable freestyles but brings mad punchlines and creative wordsplays to battle
He needs improvement on that
4. known previously to be a Bad loser, had problems with a lot of human judges in 2007. prefer computer judges
make one then!
5. Not known to battle with multis and rhymes, known to attract hate votes because of his loud popularity
And improvement on this too
6. His numerous die-hard fans are known to fuel his crisis and get him in trouble by backing him up all the time.
Delete this sh*T


Anywaysy, good luck guys! I'd really love to see the end of this!

Errr, 2008 World Cup
That's definately uncool considering the fact that we never got to the end of that of 2007.

tjdno:
Am a writer that compose only love music cause am only into blues,



Here I go with one of my verse

Life with joy, happiness, hope, peace, laughter, miracle
wonders and with many of love that ended without a trace.
Moments that I can never forget. You left without saying goodbye
we are to enjoy together now cause all the years of our love
was with pains and sorrows, I feel like to see you tomorrow
cause u were always my pillow. You bought my death and die for me.
Come lets xchange back, let me die and you will live forever.
Your gentle soul still rest in ma heart.
I love you, I swear to continue loving you cause you are my dignity.

Em, even r'n'b's gotto have a certain flow and rhythm to it and originality to yuor theme would make a lot of sense, don't cha think?

tjdno:
Its a must that we must must the must.
Value whats you valued cause you valued to value it.
It must be valued cause it is valued.
I always make sense cause I hate to yhan non-sense,
no difference, my non-sense still make sense.

still make sense!?
Tjdno, far from it.
This is rap not poetry or prose, step up!

bad temper:
@ bola
no doubt sharn is tite
but wats with u and her all of a sudden
any way sha
@sharn i can give u a little tip
if u can throw a little punchline with your country words thats gon make u whole look real

@ temp,
whatcha mean wif ma country words?
it could be 1. Brit english, it's the same English only w some few slangs u won't understand
2. Nigerian languages, w i rly don't have an hang on

Whatever u meant still don't make no sense to me. tx 4 tryin tho.

nextbeatz:
@Bolabitch
Who d mess Ya lame ass gangsta wish to be is callin a BIATCHY
how can ya broke crippled ass be the champ when i am the supreme chief judge of alabama
nigga shut ya hoe(mouth) before i pull ya skeleton out
ya dumb ass lycris can even write on a demo CD
that is y when u hit WACk city they made u the prince of dumbville
So bitchy even ma little' chywawa(dog) on heat wont allow u suck his privates
bitch please, i spit wit OG's
so run home wit ya wheel chair and call me ya pop to come give prop
the Legand is back, so stay off my bock

RoosterDrinker

Y'all see the person who rated me wack, His got wack all over his lyns like vomit

TEMPAR d GROUCH, why u mad?
U can't bring sand to the beach, bitch!
I've changed ma game, stop hating and face it
I'm the illest

We just steppin up a lil. Btw, somethin just crept into my head, y don't we do a grewp?

Yeah, basically, i finished high schl at 15, w is kinda fast. I took a year break and I'v started again. And It's 2ish now. I'v got class 11.