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 Literature › Re: When Love Speaks by stealthmode001(m): 7:47pm On Nov 13, 2018 |
Infant, you have proven so far that a story can be decent and interesting. Most of the literatures on NL revolves around sex but you have managed to keep this story reasonably clean while passing salient lessons. What about the character "Daniel"? You need to deal with him very well in this story to affirm to readers that no man goes far who oversee other people's ruin. Mr Steven also needs to be thought a serious lesson to send a message to people who play God with the life of others. I perceive there's still a long way to go in this story as there must need be interaction between Daniel/Angel... Ella & co/Jewel... Jewel's Grandfather/Father/Mother etc. Which ever the case, however you decide to steer the story, I'm sure Love will eventually speak. |
| Family › Re: My Madam And Me by stealthmode001(m): 7:01pm On Jul 31, 2018 |
Mike's fight with the thug guy and his gang was definitely a loud one which climaxed with a gun shot from Jack... Given that the neighbourhood is barely recovering from a serious unrest, some form of response from the neighbours or security patrol would have been appropriate... Else it would suffice to say Jack's neighbours are mostly irresponsible people who would rather wait until they are late. 2 Likes |
| Family › Re: My Madam And Me by stealthmode001(m): 4:26pm On Jul 24, 2018 |
Christopher, I must say your creativity is rare... I hope you achieve plausible things with it. 1 Like |
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