yuzjet:


And since u don forget me, thank u. Happy New Year to u sha!

Do I know you from anywhere?

emaculate99:
Toughest Tov

Llaykorn donifez
JigsawKillah The Street Poet
Pdizzle
Bolakale40
Qaisar1
emmaculate99
GidiQuotes
Let's start our own drama

joseph1832:


This part answers the embolden.

Ok , Cool.

Hey , why didnt you remind be about this thread? I thought you paused the story.

VanTee20:


Thanks sir..

Its a cool poem, a little aggressive ,but I'd like to agree with reyginus , the poem could really do much better with more sound content. If you add more substance to it, like real things that make you black and proud , that gives you your own identity and sets you aside with a pride, I think it'd pass across a better message to me. This is just my opinion though.