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Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by spidey77: 8:37pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Yee, is the year done? I thought it just dawned Wasnt it day before yesterday I saw fireworks and danced shekede Ah truly its wasted Like water in a basket Like a candle in the wind One day here, next day 'fin' Hmm, so tomorrow is new year But to think, how did we get here Unbelievable though, but if u say so What else buh happy new year bro |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by joseph1832(m): 9:10pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Nubian113:A lesson need to be learnt here, before you can critique a thing, you must have good knowledge about what you're critiquing. I know for a fact morganacanta doesn't even know what critique even mean. He couldn't even identify the structure and type of poem posted, before he barged in and showed everyone his total lack of knowledge about what he is even critiquing. The more he speaks, the more he reveals how empty headed he is when it comes to poetry. LMFAO. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by joseph1832(m): 9:17pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
morganacanta:What type of poem is this and what's the structure? Which rhyme scheme did you use? And I don't understand the run on lines here? It seem to be in every stanza if I'm not mistaken. Kindly elucidate please? |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by joefranky(m): 9:19pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Soon I welcome a new year Different songs I can hear Anticipating yet I won't fear 2015 was once my dear So 2016 please come and I will care But don't ask for your fare Promise you won't be hard as stone Come quickly and take your throne |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by yuzjet(m): 9:29pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Ladrang: cc: morganacanta llaykorn |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by sammyscholar(m): 9:36pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Reflection Hey! Wait! Have you reflected? Days, weeks, months Birth, death, health Strong, weak, recovery Just 360 days ago Enthusiasm, joy, and hope Messages, calls, congratulations 2014 was going, 2015 coming on New spirit, new resolution New drive, strong determination Success, breakthrough, I hoped for Sickness, defeat, I did not bargain for Alas! It ends today No fear, no panic, no dismay Seconds, minutes, 2015, your extinction is imminent New year, new tiding, 2016, our year of providence. By Sammyscholar. 1 Like |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by spidey77: 11:23pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
morganacanta:Was it a poem for review?? Abi hand de scratch u? Happy new year in advance sha |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by sammyscholar(m): 1:55am On Jan 01, 2016 |
New, Better Year Tick! tick! 2015 ticked away Pains, loss , sorrow, all have gone away 2015, truncated joy you endure 2016, Unlimited, everlasting joy to enjoy Latter, always better than former 2016, Your exploit, it is marked for. Happy new year beloved! By sammyscholar. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by barrysome001: 2:20am On Jan 01, 2016 |
Qaisar1:I was jeering at the so called homo sapien that claims to know so much Ni......it's not a respect or kudos. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Ray360: 10:20am On Jan 01, 2016 |
morganacanta:With the way you played down the first poem on this thread, one would expect a masterpiece from you. I am not a critique as such wing of art leaves sour taste to be desired and can thwart the burgeoning confidence of the feeble at heart. Mr, your pen is still young! as evidenced by the tasteless piece above! |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Ray360: 10:39am On Jan 01, 2016 |
Mr IIaykorn, please, add me to the group. I never knew a poetry group existed on nairaland |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Tovot: 1:00pm On Jan 01, 2016 |
Llaykorn donifez JigsawKillah The Street Poet Pdizzle Bolakale40 Qaisar1 emmaculate99 GidiQuotes Let's start our own drama |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by yuzjet(m): 2:00pm On Jan 01, 2016 |
Tovot: And since u don forget me, thank u. Happy New Year to u sha! |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by emaculate99: 2:05pm On Jan 01, 2016 |
Tovot:Toughest Tov |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Sehindemi(f): 3:53pm On Jan 01, 2016 |
emaculate99:U've killed it bro! #More grace... |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Pdizzle(m): 4:48pm On Jan 01, 2016 |
Tovot: Fiyinfoluwa tovot This is the first time I'm coming across your moniker on nl. Don't start drama o, just watch.. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by donifez(m): 5:33pm On Jan 01, 2016 |
Tovot: Tovot drama keh. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Tovot: 8:03pm On Jan 01, 2016 |
emaculate99: |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Tovot: 8:07pm On Jan 01, 2016 |
yuzjet:Do I know you from anywhere? |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by yuzjet(m): 10:59am On Jan 02, 2016 |
Tovot:Do u think I know u from somewhere? |
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