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|A Poem On YOUTH by pearlhapi(f): 8:29am On Aug 03, 2012|
My period of vigour,virtue nd vibrance•
My period of dreams upon dreams
O`endless dreams were thou fufilled?
My period of exploiration
My period of strenght
My period of wishes upon wishes
O`endless wishes were thou met?
O`youth,ow I treasure dis period of mine
Wishin I remain so till thy creator calls•
How young I am in my youth
As old as my doubt
As young as my thought
How long will thou stay?
Heard of a period of wrinkles
Pray that thou befall me not
For in dis period I wish to remain•
My time of facin challenges
My time of winning battles
How vibrant I am in my youth
My youth neva grows old
Movin in circles like the howling wind
O`yes I shall be glad of another youthful call•
|Re: A Poem On YOUTH by Emmy9ite(m): 8:52am On Aug 03, 2012|
|Re: A Poem On YOUTH by pearlhapi(f): 9:56am On Aug 03, 2012|
I actualli wntd u guys to criticise nd comment on d poem•
|Re: A Poem On YOUTH by masterpiecer(m): 6:02pm On Aug 04, 2012|
as a lover of poetry, i really find dis poem exciting, the words and the repeated patterns in d 1st stanza is crafty.
great work, keep it up.
|Re: A Poem On YOUTH by pearlhapi(f): 6:21pm On Aug 04, 2012|
|Re: A Poem On YOUTH by Jubal01(m): 12:13pm On Sep 24, 2015|
I love this. Just some minor rearrangements needed.
Are u a writter
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