IT WAS IN THE BITTER SWEET LAND OF YESTERDAY

It was in the bitter-sweet land of yesterday that I first found love
That strange, raw, and undefined emotion
That emotion that drove our young boys of yesterday to the fields
And our young mothers to untimely and abominable tears
It was in that bitter-sweet land of yesterday that the earth first turned red like never before
And our people became the paint by which it was painted
It was in that same bitter-sweet land of yesterday that the world became numb
And our hopes and fears came to pass and fulfillment
Forever sealing some of us in that bitter-sweet land of yesterday
Leaving the lucky ones to hog the tainted and sour air of today, wondering if it was really all worth it.

What do you guys think?

Thou oh poster. Tis thy poem is too Bitter-sweet•
Iz this thy Poem composed to make a girl fall in love or to make her run mad?

Jamey Maxwell: Thou oh poster. Tis thy poem is too Bitter-sweet•
Iz this thy Poem composed to make a girl fall in love or to make her run mad?

What do you think?