As we travel down life’s busy road         
Complaining of our heavy loads,
We often think God’s been unfair
And gave us much more than our share
Of little daily irritations
And disappointing tribulations         
We thought HE is not kind
Only if we know,we would sing HIS praises.


We’re discontented with our lots
And all the bad breaks that we got,       
We count our losses not our gains,
And remember only tears and pain.
The good things we forget completely,         
Only if we know,we would sing HIS praises.


Our troubles fill our every thoughts,         
We dwell upon the goals we sought;
And wrapped up in our own despair,
We have no time to see or share
Others load that far outweighs
Our little problems and dismays           
Only if we know,we would sing HIS praises


And so we walk with heads held low,         
And little do we guess or know
That someone near us on life’s street
Is burdened deeply with defeat
And more strains than ours
How much do we care,             
All our attention is on ourselves,
Only if we know,we would sing HIS praises.


And if we’d but forget our care         
And stop in sympathy to share,         
The burden that our brothers carried,
Our minds and hearts would be less harried,
And we would feel our load was small,
In fact, we would see that we carried no load         
Only if we know,we would sing HIS praises.

In all conditions HE is very kind,             
HE is caring,loving,providing and protecting
Little do we realise because of our expectations     
But if we could think deeply,see clearly
Then we shall see HIS kindness and love
And then we would sing HIS praises                 

I know HE is always for us not against us,so
In all condition HE is worthy to be praiseeeeeeeed, 

that is beautiful nirron

Nirron how many times are you gonna post this topic

Oracle,,
Dont mind Seun,I ve sent a seperate mail to him to inform him of this mistake.
There was a problem on my keyboard when i was drafting the poem and as soon as i realised this problem i immediately mail Seun to delete the incomplete versions but to my dismay instead of deleting all the incomplete versions one is still left undeleted and that is the one u replied to.
So it wasnt delibrate just a mistake that Seun was unable to totally rectified.

The poem is nice and true.

Wow! Good job! Absolutely loved this poem!