when i couldn't wait anymore

i am coming
to feel the smell of your beauty
not to talk of your hazel eyes
your cute roman nose
your tasty and full lips
the complete and sparkling teeth
the high cheek bone
your firm and irressistable burst
your flat and promising navel
the swinging provocative hip
that turns and break neck!
your velvety smooth tigh
you catwalk with the grace of a tiger
and you romantically tripped me with your fleet foot
no one but you, yes! but you have made me witnessed the picture of emotion
made me shiver when i kissed your lips
made my mind to dance for pleasure
once i looked into those hazel eyes
but now, i can't just wait anymore
rather, get you on
let's explore our wild fantasy my love!
for i am dying to have you more than soonest,

fakunle sheriff ekundayo

"your firm and irressistable burst
your flat and promising navel
the swinging provocative hip
that turns and break neck!
your velvety smooth tigh"

LMAO

Writing poetry is about expressing the resonance in your soul.
Unfortunately, how we express it is very important. And that's one of the limitation of the poet, who sometimes finds himself(herself) groping for the right words-the right medium- that can accurately describe what s/he feels.
If the subliminal voice of thought were a medium, how much more beautiful poetry would have been!

@ sdf78
I feel the resonance in your soul; so to me, you are a poet. But it is also important for you to work on the medium of your expression. That's why the need for editing your work becomes an issue. So don't get discouraged by some of the comments. They're for your own good.

Well done.

thanks!
we are simply divergent in our views about life. as one try to separate a moralist from a realist in the literary world, but as an african, some of us are just being gullible about the societal ethics and norms and forgetting that our lives are sometimes a satire upon our religious believes!
what ethical standard anyway presupposes this medium! life is an expression of thought, do not murder it,