you guys should not laugh at me, at least i tried. what do u tink?

@kenis: have you tried changing the name? Numeric attachment names are not accepted, so please choose a name that is not numeric. Thanks so much!

Blaise Dominic
08033416480
blasmawilliams@yahoo.com
www.mablizzyofficial.com

@baggy4luv:
www.nairaland.com/attachments/873238_NL7_pngb42002e55e3439503c5da7a2f59324b8
You need a dark single pixel border.

@yorme:
www.nairaland.com/attachments/873285_progra_png9b28c7637d26584bd11e8270b95c02b6
Better, but the font size used for "nairaland.com/programming" is too small to read, and I think the border doesn't blend well with the ad.

www.nairaland.com/attachments/873205_tonto_dike_png2fe6cde21ea4bfdb94ead624416740fd
Better contrast but: I don't want to listen to Tonto DIke's songs because she's frowning at me. Why is she frowning at me? The LISTEN NOW font is faint.

www.nairaland.com/attachments/873206_nig_LIB2_png93ef936047b34c8f9ddbf2bc4ad51cf2
Better, but the important details are not bold enough. You should consider using Georgia instead of Times New Roman if your text is tiny.


@erad:
www.nairaland.com/attachments/873304_znairaland_banner2_pnge932162d1be437be37515dc8edd1916a
The concept is good, but this entry is unacceptable because your border is not a single pixel border and your text is not razor-sharp.

www.nairaland.com/attachments/873305_zmatch_banner2_png9dfd0d0c6a7266457701e1406eeb79f1
The concept is very good, but your border is not a single pixel border and the font sizes used are too small, making the text unreadable.

www.nairaland.com/attachments/873306_zNDA_banner2_png8d378a9b77f2545a8ddc0a4356e2174b
Good concept, but your border is not a single pixel border.

www.nairaland.com/attachments/873531_zGUS_banner2_png88b71d4bbe665dec6e3a58a25e2fc395
Ditto.

Working on some other things now, I will be waiting for your 24hr countdown b4 uploading a final win or bust design. till then **mchew**

@3direct: What are you "mchew"-ing about?

reveiw my new enrties, mr seun. They are in page 5

@ Seun , No comments on my designs

ayo84: @ Seun , No comments on my designs

no comment on mine to?

CORRECTED VERSIONs OF MY DESIGNS

@ayo84:
Sorry about the delay. I love the fact that your borders and text are nice, though your text could be clearer and sharper still with some tweaks.

www.nairaland.com/attachments/873539_army_pngaca91c1737af1364af2a417bae7e3561
I think cutting off the officer's face is a mistake, because people are attracted to faces. Also, the ad did nothing to convince me to apply.

www.nairaland.com/attachments/873540_football_png0a232ed4867b3be39b472d42f2f657ba
Not bad, but your ad does not tell me when the match will take place or the name of the competition. Also, "Football match" is redundant since the "vs" already tells us it's a match and the picture of the football tells us it's a football match. You should not include redundant details in the format since we're trying to take advantage of the tiny space.

www.nairaland.com/attachments/873541_gulder_png9e521e167a1dce31ceed2704ed1dded3
I love the style; it's quite original. But nothing about it encourages me to watch the show. Some information about when I can watch it would help, too.

www.nairaland.com/attachments/873542_TONTO2_png0fa57fdb2697d8dc32b530b377a99ae8
I love the Tonto Dike picture chosen, and your simple style, but I don't understand why you added skyscrapers instead of musical images!

You're one of the first contestants to fully comply with the rules of the contest. You deserve lots of kudos for that. Thanks!!

The last one

Kagawa: Blaise Dominic
08033416480
blasmawilliams@yahoo.com
www.mablizzyofficial.com

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@adewasco2k:
[img]https://www.nairaland.com/attachments/874458_Untitled-1_png19a6a9085bc66dde26a8720afef6f892[/img]
I love your imagery. It flatters Tonto Dike and it makes it obvious that your ad is about music. However, the rainbow colouring of your text makes it hard to get the gist of your message. Some of the colors are hard to distinguish from the background, too. I hope you can fix those issues because I love your imagery here.

i have sent in my 5, and oga seun never ask me to make revision .. abi him neva see them?? cc@seun

hope these ones will pass ur "single pixel" test.

and...

Sir, i have made replacements of the ones you asked me to... Please review:

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no.5

mashnino: Seun dis one nko?

It's much better. Very striking. But it can still be improved.

Mr seun pls there is no comment on mine post sir why..........

Here;s mine. Did it all in less than 2 hours

And the last one.
Moses Okocha
moses_dx10@yahoo.com

Review my new entries

Review.....

@ayo84:
www.nairaland.com/attachments/873579_programming2_pngf4101a2329c42d643b18ce5705f16004
Your programming section ad is not very inspiring, though. You should read my comments about other programming section ads.

@Love_decay:
www.nairaland.com/attachments/875125_final_NAIRALAND_competition_summary_pngd09cf9fdaaf50fa1723d10017276dc41
- You're supposed to submit 154 by 95 pixel PNG images. This submission format is unacceptable.
- Your ads don't have distinct, single pixel borders. Your ads have none. This is unacceptable.
- Your NDA Ad looks nice, but I don't understand the message.
- Your Tonto Dike Ad looks brilliant and original, but you only promoted one song.
- Your football match ad is really nice, but the text is too fuzzy.
- Your programming ad doesn't give an average person any reason to learn programming.
- Not a fan of your Gulder Ultimate Search ad, either. Read my other reviews!

That N.D.A logo means alot to me...just seeing it alone is an honour,so dont talk trash...is not all nigerians that take everything for granted..like You

SEUN, PLEASE CAN I KNOW IF MY DESIGNS PASSED ALL THE TESTS?

Donmichaelz: That N.D.A logo means alot to me...just seeing it alone is an honour,so dont talk trash...is not all nigerians that take everything for granted..like You

I was just being honest; I'm sorry you were offended by that.

My point is that, if you print a copy of the logo and ask people on the streets if it means anything to them, you will find that they don't even know what it's about. Whereas, if you show them a picture of our honourable military men and women at work, they'll understand it. In marketing, what matters is not what means something to you but what means something to the people you want to reach.

@redcliff: Yes, your work is now in compliance with the rules, except for your beautiful and well composed NDA ad, which still has a light border.