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It's Just How I Feel by Labans(m): 12:06am On Feb 05, 2008
It's just how i feel


passion, instant sweat beads fill me
cupids shot me
my heart beat's racing
tempt me,try me
feels so exciting
thought of highly
it's yours entirely
i'll be
more than a lover
more than a woman
more than you'll ever i'll be

midnight grindin
heart rates climbin
you go, i go
cause we share the pillow
taste me feed me
there's still no separating
mornin massages
with new bones in your closet
i'll be
more than a lover
more than a woman
more than you'll ever i'll be
more than a lover
more than a woman
more than enough for you
more than a lover
more than a woman
gettin more undercovers
more than a woman
more than enough for you

gettin more u
more than enough for you
i dont think you're ready
i dont think you're ready for this thang for this thang
i dont think you're ready for this thang you're not ready for it ye
no, no
i dont think you're ready for this thang for this thang this thang
i dont think you're ready for this thang
constant pleasures
no scale can measure
secret treasures
keeps on getting better yeah
do you wanna roll with me
we can go to foreign lands
your hand in my hand
do you wanna ride with me
we can be like bonnie and clyde
me by your side
Re: It's Just How I Feel by colors(f): 11:06pm On Feb 11, 2008
hey labans, isnt this Aaliyah's song more than a woman.
at least be original
how can you pass up someone else's song as your poem
thats lame
Re: It's Just How I Feel by Trevelyan(m): 12:19pm On Feb 21, 2008
Truly its lame colors,he employed a choice of colloquial diction as it sounds more lyrical than poetical, this accentuated ur unoriginality n height of plagiarism,so b real at it wit sumtin new,out!

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