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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 10:48pm On Mar 25, 2013
Sorry o! Phcn has decided that blackout will be the order of the day and my I better pass my neighbor aint working. grin grin I have written chapter 8 cool cool cool, just need to edit it. As soon as that is done, I will post it. THANKS
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by repogirl(f): 11:30pm On Mar 25, 2013
I know d feeling very well.

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by FoxyUltimate(m): 5:54am On Mar 26, 2013
ekaromail: Sorry o! Phcn has decided that blackout will be the order of the day and my I better pass my neighbor aint working. grin grin I have written chapter 8 cool cool cool, just need to edit it. As soon as that is done, I will post it. THANKS


Men... Xee writer... Me dey feel you jor... Wella

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by princesa(f): 2:33pm On Mar 26, 2013
if this is what a diary is made of, then mine is extremely boringsmiley


*following*

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by oyestephen(m): 2:43pm On Mar 26, 2013
I cant believe i didnt get this until now. Didnt stop until i read it all...fantastic work ekaro

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 3:12pm On Mar 26, 2013
Thanks all. Now here comes Chapter eight.
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 3:27pm On Mar 26, 2013
Watch out for the free download link of the novelette "Susan's Diary"
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by princesa(f): 6:21pm On Mar 26, 2013
are we still in Susan's diary? or are we still in the flashback?
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 6:26pm On Mar 26, 2013
princesa: are we still in Susan's diary? or are we still in the flashback?

In the Diary.
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by FoxyUltimate(m): 6:31pm On Mar 26, 2013
princesa: are we still in Susan's diary? or are we still in the flashback?

I did not notice a flashback my dear... This update short wo....
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by menace001(m): 8:04pm On Mar 26, 2013
Let the show begin, gen geun* action film don start,ready for batu ok now* shift my glasses alas who took my glasses, who took my glasses. Everybody don die for this tread,but how I go take search for my gun now*

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by princesa(f): 10:46pm On Mar 26, 2013
this is an excerpt from chapter one:
...Recently, I started keeping a diary of my everyday experiences. I only
started after I survived an attempt made on my life by Mr. Eric, one of
the richest and most handsome guys in this part of town.

I met Eric over six months ago at a dinner party organized by a friend
of mine who happens to be a high class citizen. The party was seriously
full of wealthy men but that particular day, I decided that Eric will be
the one I take home. When Eric saw me, he instantly took to me because
of my curves and I to him because of his money. Since then, we have had a
lot of wonderful moments together but yesterday, I decided to play a
fast one on him. Little did I know that the consequences will be great.

...I woke up early and left his house with a whooping
N6milion. As I went home, I wondered what Eric will do when he found out
that his money was gone. I just did not know that he will go too far.


to me, it reads like a flashback of some sort to tell us why Susan decided to keep a diary
so, i stand to be disprovedsmiley
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by repogirl(f): 11:17pm On Mar 26, 2013
Flashback is part of the diary,just the prelude, I guess and now that she seems to have come into the present, its still in the diary. I don't know jare, I think I'm confusing myself. ekaromail, please clarify for us.
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by Nobody: 12:09am On Mar 27, 2013
Thumbs up op
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 12:14am On Mar 27, 2013
Foxy_Ultimate:

I did not notice a flashback my dear... This update short wo....

Na phcn cause am oh. My laptop battery can't stay too long so, it had to be short
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 12:43am On Mar 27, 2013
Peterjosh: Thumbs up op

Thank you Peter
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 12:45am On Mar 27, 2013
ekaromail:
to me, it reads like a flashback of some sort to tell us why Susan decided to keep a diary
so, i stand to be disprovedsmiley

Susan started by telling you why she started writing a diary. She is telling the story of her past, everything is in the diary, there ain't no flash back there.

For example, if you were telling a story about what happened at your work place and you write it as a past event, it does not count as a flash back.

Look at this dictionary meaning of flash back: A device in the narrative of a motion picture, novel, etc., by which an event or scene taking place before the present time in the narrative is inserted into the chronological structure of the work.

Flashback is just what it is, flash, not the main narrative.

Hope I cleared the air.
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by princesa(f): 7:58am On Mar 27, 2013
its ok.....
am just gonna read on......
you are the expert heresmiley
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by repogirl(f): 9:04am On Mar 27, 2013
I dey wait o...patietly sha
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 6:01am On Mar 28, 2013
Watch out for the free download link of the novelette "Susan's Diary"
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by oyestephen(m): 12:39pm On Mar 28, 2013
Now its getting more interesting and bloody...
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by repogirl(f): 7:22pm On Mar 28, 2013
Niiiiice, action packed.
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by Jerry2i(m): 10:01pm On Mar 28, 2013
Intresting,action packed and now it's getting bloody.
keep it up.
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 11:11pm On Mar 28, 2013
Watch out for the free download link of the novelette "Susan's Diary"
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by wumsgreen(f): 11:53pm On Mar 28, 2013
Bravo,really L♥√ع Ūя̲̅ story more ink to Ūя̲̅ pen. Wen shld we be expecting anoda beautIful piece from u

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 12:02am On Mar 29, 2013
wumsgreen: Bravo,really L♥√ع Ūя̲̅ story more ink to Ūя̲̅ pen. Wen shld we be expecting anoda beautIful piece from u

Thank you Wumsgreen. I'm glad you liked it. Another piece? I don't know yet. But as soon as I get some really free time and a good idea to work with, I will post another.
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by repogirl(f): 2:17am On Mar 29, 2013
But wait o, ekaromail, where in the world was the police when all these shootouts were happnin? and what happened to all d bodies in susans house? If it were me, I would never live in that house ever again after what had happened there.
Great job, very interesting short story. smiley
Expecting another from you soon.

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 5:09am On Mar 29, 2013
repogirl: But wait o, ekaromail, where in the world was the police when all these shootouts were happnin? and what happened to all d bodies in susan's house? If it were me, I would never live in that house ever again after what had happened there.
Great job, very interesting short story. smiley
Expecting another from you soon.

If they can toss Eric's wealth away with the help of those in higher power, wetin come be police when dem no fit climb over. Lol. I didn't just add it here but, I'm editing ad adding little touches here an there to the entire story before compiling it into a novelette and I will place a free download link here for you all before I send it to Amazon for sale. there will be details of police iin it. Thanks for followiing my story to the end. I appreciate.

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by dayleke: 6:36am On Mar 29, 2013
You really did a good job on this "ekaro",
hoping to read another one from you soon..
cheers!

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by oyestephen(m): 9:44am On Mar 29, 2013
Wonderful, fantastic work....ekaro..xpecting the hardcopy, and the next novel

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Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 9:43pm On Mar 29, 2013
Sorry peeps, I had to remove the story. To publish on Amazon my story must not be a public domain work that is why I had to remove it. Soon you will get the free download link and it's going to be for only one day so please download it in time. I really want you all to get a free copy as a sign of my appreciation for sticking around and following my story to the end.
Editing is still in progress but we are almost done. As soon as we are, you will get it. Cheers wink smiley
Re: Susan’s Diary; Friday’s Experience by ekaromail: 5:41am On Apr 02, 2013
Hello people. Susan's Diary is ready for download. Just click the link.

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