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My way out! by hola2ng(m): 5:30pm On Apr 10, 2008
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Re: My way out! by Maverik: 7:21pm On Apr 10, 2008
hands gripping the bars
expending my strength
i long for the stars
and sigh,expelling my breath
my whole body feels like maximum security
i crave fresh air
d freshness & d purity
bt still i remain
a prisoner to my conscience
ma thoughts hold me captive
locked in this inky darkness
i kno the world is waiting
earnestly anticipating
d day i find freedom and return to claim greatness
bt still i rise
slowly from long sleep
Gongo Aso,
i hear d drums speak.

@Hola2ng
hello frm an old friend. Great minds think similar.
Re: My way out! by hola2ng(m): 5:30pm On Apr 11, 2008
Hnmm
Re: My way out! by hola2ng(m): 5:36pm On Apr 11, 2008
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Re: My way out! by Maverik: 3:55pm On Apr 12, 2008
Such freedom
absolute freedom
liberty to crystallize thots
as i decree them

The ability to chose
d chains of my slavery
paint images of riches
when money escapes me

The bravery i need 2 be free
so i can be Me
is sealed up inside of my being
bt hw cud dis be?

i rage at the elements
strain at my impediments
bruised by d chains
these scars are d evidence

Free! Free at last
free frm d lukewarm
state of my previous existence
I sing a nu song! cheesy

@Hola2ng
Good lookin,bruva!
Re: My way out! by hansibone(m): 5:31pm On Apr 18, 2008
bravo brodas bravo, dats great

let me add my to it.

i always like readin ur poems hola2ng

All Alone

Lying on my bed, sleeping all alone,
Praying that someday, she will come back home,
Memories of our passion fill every black hole,
Expecting that one day i will surely be made whole,

Staring at the ceilings not far above,
Wishing i could develop wings and fly like a DOVE,
Scanning the whole region for that which i love,
Escaping the big black gate of my tiny cove,

Its a beautiful night, still i can't sleep,
The sounds of footsteps drum around my keep,
In search of treasures hidden from there eyes to strip,
Oh! men our sins surely would we reap,

Morning calls at the sound of the cock crow,
Re leashing the story that its time to grow,
Pain it brought, as the day started slow,
Then it hit my head with a terrible blow,

That i'm all alone,

hope u wuld like it
Re: My way out! by Maverik: 3:45pm On Apr 21, 2008
@Hansibone grin lavlay!
Re: My way out! by hansibone(m): 6:12pm On Apr 21, 2008
Maverik:

@Hansibone grin lavlay!

thank u bro

u guys are d best in here, wish i culd write everyday, but my writings only come when im in love or heart broken.

love yeah all

@hola2ng

omo guy post more poems now
Re: My way out! by hola2ng(m): 3:59pm On Apr 22, 2008
@Hanisbone
Thanks, hoping y'all would post more often too, keep this thread breathing!

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