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Poem:friend Or Foe? by Halb: 2:42pm On Jun 11, 2013
Friend or Foe!
Don't seem to know,
Trust! An heavy blow,
When betroth on thou,
Duo of Different Domination,
Collide As an Entity.

Affiliating Destruction,
Confusion and Depression,
To the life of Humanity.
Oh Lord!
Save the Juvenile
From these Duo
Acquit the Innocent
Detest Trio.

Natural phenomenon!
Can't cease to Exist,
Only the Almighty,
knows thy Exit.

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Re: Poem:friend Or Foe? by Halb: 2:50pm On Jun 11, 2013
Pls post your Thoughts on the POEM.your are free to also rate it out of 10.
Re: Poem:friend Or Foe? by VanTee20(m): 10:41pm On Jun 12, 2013
Hal b: Friend or Foe!
Don't seem to know,
Trust! An heavy blow,
When betroth on them,
Dou of Different Domination,
Collide As an Entity.

Affiliating Destruction,
Confusion and Depression,
To the life of Humanity.
Oh Lord!
Save the Juvenile
From these Dou
Acquit the Innocent
Detest Trio.

Natural phenomenon!
Can't cease to Exist,
Only the Almighty,
know their Exit.

Nice one ma'am. I'll give this 7/10... Looking forward to reading more poems from you. cheesy cheesy cheesy
Re: Poem:friend Or Foe? by texanomaly(f): 11:08pm On Jun 12, 2013
Lovely writing
Re: Poem:friend Or Foe? by Halb: 11:13pm On Jun 12, 2013
@Vantee.Thank u so much.i will make sure i upload more posts.
Re: Poem:friend Or Foe? by Halb: 11:14pm On Jun 12, 2013
@taxanomly.Thanks.
Re: Poem:friend Or Foe? by vizboy(m): 10:36am On Jun 15, 2013
nice 1
Re: Poem:friend Or Foe? by Halb: 9:04pm On Jun 15, 2013
Thanks.i appreciate ur comments.

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