Hmmm... Don't know what to say.

pls guys comment,thats d only thing dat can spur me to continue..all corrections re highly welcome

The more you post, the more people comment.

The following week.i headed for the power house of Nigeria which is the might Aso rock.i was picked up by a black jeep as early as 6am to catch my flight to resume my duties..i thought in mind what this going to end into? Why did they hand pick me for the job? on getting to the airport i was taken to a special aircraft which was 'airforce1' which was piloted my a damsel.omo my green light shone on her and i put on my best smile and walk up to take a sit close to her.she didn't even take a glance at me,na werin dey do dis one na i almost said,at that moment she seems to notice my presence.she said 'sir you are not permitted to sit here'. With the ever stuborn nature inherent in me and the swelling pride caused by my new job..she repeated the words again and i remained adamant, then she whistled,YOU WOULDN'T BELIEVE WHO I SAW!.

guys pls comment to keep up d spirit.,my oga les and 2maps i c u o

Hmmm... Interesting.

Getting more interesting...but you have to make necessary corrections esp. the typo errors, for example, you typed "rhe" instead of she and others. Also make the update lengthier and ensure consistency in updates...methinks 2 lengthy updates every day will do. As rightly said above, the more the update, the more the comments.

there is a time in life when we all got to surface and prove our boldness in front of the mighties and powerfuls of this world but doing my time i cowered and couldn't..abeg no blame me,he who fights and run away lives to fight another day that was the proverb i followed...back to the story..immediately my female pilot whistled two soldiers more of an assasins appeared before me one with a very unusual big head,if there was anything i was scared off na soldier or so i thought and this once weren't smiling i wasn't even told what to before i ran or dash to my allotted seat...***you see where i bleeped up?if it were you what would have done o?*** the two soldiers gave me a wicked look and left the way they came..i didn't look at my pilot anymore cause she was laughing like a person with brain touch..i just kept mute,i go deal with these people personally,professiönally and dey go know me physically i thought..atlast our plane touched down and i was free from my bondag. i was ushered to a room seated was rose ever beautiful,without being told to sit,i sat. How was your journey she said but my ears made it sound like how do i look? You re the most beautiful creature i ve ever seen i said, she was shocked but quickly gain composure,this is pure business no stringe attached she said,for your mind i thought,the two hulk soldiers came in and saluted her,she waved and said to me pointing to the taller soldier that is mr flow your driver and to the bigger headed that is mr attai your messenger.they were shocked but i was more,then came my pilot, yes and that is your cöok miss serina rose said,i went into the realm of laughter and gave the trio, a una don die look,they were abashed,as a gentle man that i am,i støod up and did the unthinkable... **to be continued**

2map: Getting more interesting...but you have to make necessary corrections esp. the typo errors, for example, you typed "rhe" instead of she and others. Also make the update lengthier and ensure consistency in updates...methinks 2 lengthy updates every day will do. As rightly said above, the more the update, the more the comments.

k boss

Hmmmm...ds seems to b gud

**continuation** i did the unthinkable i move closer to mr attai and mr flow and gave the duo two hot slaps,and push mr attai big head to the wall,'u c una life in 3D' i said,dem nor dey beat woman for my village,baba tope who did it back then in the 20th century didn't live to tell the story that is a story for another day,so i only eye miss sarina. we re sorry sir they said...rose asked the three to withdrew which they quickly observed.. Em em emmalous back to why you are here,we know you studied serial death back at MIT NIGERIA BRANCH,we want to capture a very hard craked serial killer she said, my facial expression immediately change the moment she mention serial death,i ve abandon the field i spat out,and im not ready to go back into it.. i stood up to leave,i was about to move out when rose said emmalous this is the moment you need to help your country out of this mess except if you want everything this country has acquired to ruin,you can go but when you are döne thinking abovt it im always here,i left without even looking back,flow sensing my mood quickly open the door to the car and we drove off.. Killer now i ve to face you again i thought..** to be cont**

sanguine and D.ella.luv you re sighted from afar...corrections and comments are welcome

Olusharp: sanguine and D.ella.luv you re sighted from afar...corrections and comments are welcome

try and be more detailed

Nice one, but it's still short.