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Re: ... by Winneygirl(f): 7:06pm On Aug 18, 2013
U guys have done well.
I have no personal affiliations & hav not had any serious encounter wt any of d writers, so I'd like 2 give an objective criticism.
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1. D story started well, with a lot of enthusiasm. But some people didn't build on wat d 1st writer wrote.So after so many abstract chapters,it has become hard to reconcile d chapters.
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2. Some writers just had 2 include their friends whether relevant or not. E.g. In d middle of class,1 character walks in, and is hailed by some. Then dat character has ended. If everyone were to include all their friends walking in, then we would have no storyline.
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3. S;exual overtones: We know U can't rule them out completely, but it'd be nice if we can be civil. Use of 'dcckk', 'fcck', etc are not languages for a good novel.
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This post is long already. Otherwise,I've got more to say.
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 7:26pm On Aug 18, 2013
This Has Gone Way Beyond My Control...
Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:35pm On Aug 18, 2013
Winneygirl: U guys have done well.
I have no personal affiliations & hav not had any serious encounter wt any of d writers, so I'd like 2 give an objective criticism.
.
1. D story started well, with a lot of enthusiasm. But some people didn't build on wat d 1st writer wrote.So after so many abstract chapters,it has become hard to reconcile d chapters.
.
2. Some writers just had 2 include their friends whether relevant or not. E.g. In d middle of class,1 character walks in, and is hailed by some. Then dat character has ended. If everyone were to include all their friends walking in, then we would have no storyline.
.
3. S;exual overtones: We know U can't rule them out completely, but it'd be nice if we can be civil. Use of 'dcckk', 'fcck', etc are not languages for a good novel.
.
This post is long already. Otherwise,I've got more to say.
this is great, and I like it because criticism isn't about changing the way you write but correcting the errors and cliches.

What however we failed to work together as a team and at the end everyone was pulling at his or her own corner.
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 10:23pm On Aug 18, 2013
Winneygirl: U guys have done well.
I have no personal affiliations & hav not had any serious encounter wt any of d writers, so I'd like 2 give an objective criticism.
.
1. D story started well, with a lot of enthusiasm. But some people didn't build on wat d 1st writer wrote.So after so many abstract chapters,it has become hard to reconcile d chapters.
.
2. Some writers just had 2 include their friends whether relevant or not. E.g. In d middle of class,1 character walks in, and is hailed by some. Then dat character has ended. If everyone were to include all their friends walking in, then we would have no storyline.
.
3. S;exual overtones: We know U can't rule them out completely, but it'd be nice if we can be civil. Use of 'dcckk', 'fcck', etc are not languages for a good novel.
.
This post is long already. Otherwise,I've got more to say.
Haven't you heard that too many hehehe spoils the hohoho lipsrsealed cheesy

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Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 7:11am On Aug 19, 2013
Eze Promoe:
Haven't you heard that too many hehehe spoils the hohoho lipsrsealed cheesy
Lmao.

Don't Even Go There...
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 8:37am On Aug 19, 2013
Dygeasy: Lmao.

Don't Even Go There...
I said nothing
Re: ... by tobex23(m): 6:59am On Sep 28, 2013
it shouldnt end like this now!
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 6:58pm On Sep 30, 2013
Should We Revive This Thing?

smileysmileysmiley
Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:06pm On Sep 30, 2013
Dygeasy: Should We Revive This Thing?

smileysmileysmiley
yep

Can't wait
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 7:20pm On Sep 30, 2013
HumbledbYGrace: yep

Can't wait
Helo Me..
Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 8:36pm On Sep 30, 2013
Dygeasy: Helo Me..
I refuse angry

You helo me.
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 8:50pm On Sep 30, 2013
DA FUQ
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 11:16pm On Sep 30, 2013
Eze Promoe: DA FUQ
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 11:16pm On Sep 30, 2013
HumbledbYGrace: I refuse angry

You helo me.
Oh Jeez!

I Meant To Type Help...
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 10:42am On Oct 01, 2013
Dygeasy:
lipsrsealed

[img]http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQNZBJRKztm5SeAhd8MDoc2GGGdfb6hDtlUuGnwbcImbeKMBrXc_cJrnlw[/img]
Re: ... by tobex23(m): 10:58am On Oct 01, 2013
dygeasy sorry for what i said in the complaint thread, please revive it! Thanks!
Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 12:36pm On Oct 16, 2013
Nairaland a story, revival, polished and a whole lot more, coming soon.....watch the space. grin grin
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 12:42pm On Oct 16, 2013
HumbledbYGrace: Nairaland a story, revival, polished and a whole lot more, coming soon.....watch the space. grin grin
Copy That!
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 9:54am On Oct 17, 2013
What happened to the name of the thread grin
Re: ... by Nobody: 11:11am On Oct 17, 2013
Eze, they got smarter than ...... Hahahahaha grin grin grin grin grin
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 4:12pm On Oct 17, 2013
Damex333: Eze, they got smarter than ...... Hahahahaha grin grin grin grin grin
grin
Re: ... by Mynd44: 4:15pm On Oct 17, 2013
Damex333: Eze, they got smarter than ...... Hahahahaha grin grin grin grin grin
They are going around in circles
Re: ... by joshmoy(m): 2:28pm On Dec 10, 2013
and what happened to the revival

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